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Ok, here's a short story I wrote. Well, it's actually not that short, so I used google drive to share it. It's 35 word pages long.
Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0BzNw6e ... sp=sharing
Mirror: https://mega.nz/#!T0EVgJ6K!zQkcuuqrf2GW ... 3QVnUgzmDU

And a few short words from me, because I like to rant. Skip it safely if you want, nothing important here.
The story is not romantic, and it actually is a tentacle-hentai kind if thing. It's a sci-fi, not fantasy, and I tried to keep it as scientific as I could, so it's not unrealistic.
It's based on a very short fantasy scene from a flash game I played recently.

Plot summary (no major spoilers, and what's uncovered happens on the first 4 pages of the story):

Spoiler: show

Mankind has finally found an alien life form, and got it back to Earth for research. They call it "The Specimen" The top secret research team is assembled at a secluded facility. Among them is Dr. Alice Steele, who gets unfortunate enough to be captured by the Specimen, and goes through lots of misery, rape and torture, as the researchers leave her inside the chamber with the monster to study it's behavior. The story then graphically depicts the horrors she's left to endure over a long period of time.

The story features lots of fetishes I'm not normally excited about, but this particular fantasy kept nagging at my brain at nights, keeping me from sleep. So I wrote it down, because that's what I do when I can't keep something out of my head. I wrote it mainly just for fun, for myself, but why not share it?

The story is very cruel at some parts, featuring a lot of suffering for a heroine, and the monster itself, although as perverted as tentacle monsters tend to be, doesn't concentrate solely on raping Alice. It has a bigger purpose, and it pursues it. But don't think I'm a violent man for writing it. I'd never get off on watching someone experience the things that are happening to her. If anything, I think I'm more excited about imagining myself IN HER PLACE, than in the place of an observer, so yea.
Just saying, if tears and suffering turn you off, this may not be the story for you.

P.s. Keep in mind that English is not my native language, but I tried my best. If you find errors or think something should be improved - let me know.
P.P.S. Reading P.S you may be asking yourself - why write it in english then? Well, because REASONS!
P.P.P.S. I've enjoyed writing it and I'm thinking a bit of making a sequel, but I don't yet know what to write it about. If you have any fun ideas about plot, or just about new tentacles that could be used on a poor defenseless girl, let me know.

Aaand, just as I sahred it, google drive went down apparently.
https://mega.nz/#!T0EVgJ6K!zQkcuuqrf2GW ... 3QVnUgzmDU

Just read your story. Its heavy, but I really enjoyed it. Kinda scary to think that in a situation like that, this really could be what would happen.
Also, I didn't notice any major spelling errors or anything like that.

Thank you for your comment, I really appreciate it.

Kinda scary to think that in a situation like that, this really could be what would happen.

Yea, I tried to think of what would realistically happen, when I wrote it. I also tried to keep things scientific, so everything that happens is not impossible.

I would actually draw pictures too, but I can't draw. Like, at all. First grade children draw better than me. But if anyone wants to illustrate it - I'd give detailed descriptions anytime.

I will give this story a read sometime soon! I've never read an erotic story of this length, or of that genre, so it should be interesting.

For length, you should really read "50 Shades of Grey". It's really romantic, and pretty much only the first book of the trilogy is heavy on S&M lifestyle stuff. I'd say that "50 Shades" is a romance book much, much more than it's a fetish or even erotic one, and it's the first (and only, for now) romance story I actually enjoyed. It's long, sexy and altogether interesting plot-wise.

By the way, I'm very new to this, so I was wondering - where else can I post a story like this? The forum is great, but I feel very few people will read it here, as the site is not really about stories.

Also, working on part two. I'm not sure if that's going to be as sexual as the first one, or rather more psychological (as it leans that way for now for sure). I'm not sure how long it will be, because if I loose motivation I may end it up faster. But it will be a wrap-up of the story either way.
I'm still looking for cool ideas about what other cool stuff a tentacle monster can do.

That is the most messed-up thing I have ever read. At the same time, it is very interesting. Some parts got me hard, but after a while I was reading more to know what would happen next than for erotic kicks. Although I don't think it's the strangest erection I've ever had... which makes me wonder what was.
Your English is fine, despite a few spelling errors and awkward phrases -- nothing that can't be corrected with a thorough proof-read. You've got better English than a good portion of Americans, so I don't think many will be bothered by it. I want to provide a more detailed explanation of why I liked it, but I'm still processing. Your writing is interesting, in regards to the way you word sentences and vary sentence structure. It doesn't feel monotonous to read the sentences, in other words.
As for other places you could post this: Literotica.com; a subreddit dedicated to erotic stories; xnxx's stories forum; eporner's forums; other porn sites' forums. A lot of the places you'll find will contain vanilla content, but that doesn't disqualify your writing from being shared.

That is the most messed-up thing I have ever read.

I don't know if to regard it as a compliment or not

I only need to write epilogue now, and then proofread it.

Unfortunately for some, the second part is not as sexual as the first. WHile the first has something kinky happening on every page, the second part is a wrap-up of the story, and is more of a psychological, than erotic novel. It still features some hot stuff, but not as much.

Now available also on Literotica:
Update in 2020:
Now NOT available also on Literotica. Because fuck them!
Available on my website in the Dark section