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So, after years of lurking, I finally put in the (many) hours and made my first tease -- and now I'm freaking out. It deals with a niche fantasy I saw only a couple posts about on the Request thread, but I wanted something a little different. Anyway, if anyone would post any feedback, I'd be really grateful.

P.S. I was able to verify the origin of every pic (involving people) except the one on page 16. I think it's safe, since you can't identify anyone in it, but what do you think?

I thought this tease was excellent, and I would love to see you continue. In my opinion, this is the best tease we've had in a very long time. I love the concept.

I am in that niche fantasy market, and I thought it was excellent, very well made. Personally, I wouldn't mind taking another trip down memory lane.

pantywedgieboy wrote:I am in that niche fantasy market, and I thought it was excellent, very well made. Personally, I wouldn't mind taking another trip down memory lane.

Hey, thanks -- I'm glad you liked it. So, about a sequel... I've been in the process of writing a tease for women, but it's been a real slog, mainly because I just don't understand women's kinks. I've found, like, 60+ images, but I may scrap the project and use those pics in another tease for men. Actually, even if I finish the women's tease, I might recycle the images anyway. Finding good pictures is tough, since I need the models to A.) keep their clothes on, B.) look scornful and / or cruelly amused, and C.) be in a setting I can work with.

Anyway, sorry to ramble. It's just that trying my hand at a webtease has been a fun challenge.

Turtle wrote:

pantywedgieboy wrote:I am in that niche fantasy market, and I thought it was excellent, very well made. Personally, I wouldn't mind taking another trip down memory lane.

Hey, thanks -- I'm glad you liked it. So, about a sequel... I've been in the process of writing a tease for women, but it's been a real slog, mainly because I just don't understand women's kinks. I've found, like, 60+ images, but I may scrap the project and use those pics in another tease for men. Actually, even if I finish the women's tease, I might recycle the images anyway. Finding good pictures is tough, since I need the models to A.) keep their clothes on, B.) look scornful and / or cruelly amused, and C.) be in a setting I can work with.

Anyway, sorry to ramble. It's just that trying my hand at a webtease has been a fun challenge.

You're welcome. Honestly, I've thought about writing my own tease along the same lines

So, months later than intended, I've completed the follow-up to my first tease, this one for women -- though guys might enjoy it for the story. Any feedback, especially suggestions for improvement, would be greatly appreciated.

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=30855

Thanks!

turtle, that was SO good! That's exactly the sort of tease i'm always looking for when i come here. Lots of teasing, lots of ridicule, being put into humiliating predicaments by and with sexy girls... i loved it! i'm not even into toilet or wet-and-messy fetish, but i even enjoyed those elements in this one (the scene with being pushed by the volleyball team girls into the bathroom and what followed was so incredibly exciting and embarrassing, and the pictures were so perfect)!

i look forward to any more bullying or erotic humiliation series you put together! i would especially love to go through the memory of being put into a girl's swimsuit... Thank you for this one!