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Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 3:35 am
by The Edge 2.0
Well, it's been an experience to say the least, but the first joint author project has finally come to an end. Dear reader, as my partner in crime kesbabev would say, Hell Hath No Fury 10, the conclusion to the series, has been posted for your consideration.

Please take the time to let us know what you thought, or share whatever secrets you've found in the dramatic finale! (Yes, there are a few. :smile: )

On behalf of kes and myself, thank you very much!

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:25 am
by tallguy2241
ok...I'll admit it....I found the easter Egg!

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:25 am
by shortsteps
found the easter egg! What a wonderful series! Thank you so much!

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:26 am
by shortsteps
aww...missed it by seconds! Shouldn't the fact that your series prompted me to finally register count for something? :)

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:27 am
by The Edge 2.0
You know what that means though, don't you?

YOU BROKE THE RULES!

Oh my god, you broke the rules! How could you? Seriously?! :-O

Shame on you... Shame on you...

All right, well, as promised, as a special prize I'll put your name on the easter egg, deal?

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:29 am
by shortsteps
well, after I got the good ending, I went back through, yeah, to see what else there was.

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:30 am
by The Edge 2.0
shortsteps wrote:Shouldn't the fact that your series prompted me to finally register count for something?
And that definitely does count for something! Welcome to the community, thank you so much for joining the rest of the really great people we have around here.

Even bigger thanks for doing so on kesbabev's and mine's watch. ;-)

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:34 am
by tallguy2241
The Edge wrote:You know what that means though, don't you?

YOU BROKE THE RULES!

Oh my god, you broke the rules! How could you? Seriously?! :-O

Shame on you... Shame on you...

All right, well, as promised, as a special prize I'll put your name on the easter egg, deal?

LOL deal!

great series....a great concept

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:36 am
by The Edge 2.0
tallguy, your name is now on the easter egg. Congrats!

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 5:43 am
by Forevergallant
Damn , I was too late

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 9:03 am
by someone43
There's something wrong with the voting at the end of this tease.

I can't choose anything past 5. Please fix Seph.

tnx!

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 12:16 pm
by Qwert
Great tease.
For me it is one of the best ever write.

I vote hard 5.
For me tease of the month.

I finish this tease on 2 ending.

And I do this tease more times becouse I want find all secrets.

I don't read it. In this tease most exciting thing is that you don't know what you doing and what you missing.
And you want back over and over.

And I have little request Can you put random tag on each Hell Hath that someone can click on the tag and have all the series.

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 1:16 pm
by nomeuno
THAT WAS absolutely fuckin insane!!!!!!!!!!! TWO THUMBS WAY UP!!!!!!!!!! BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMFG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ok.... It was alright I guess. That was the BEST EVER!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 2:19 pm
by JelloBoy
I hate to be the voice of dissent, but I didn't like the series at all. Way too much writing/reading and not enough teasing, for my taste.

Re: Feedback for the Hell Hath No Fury Series

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:12 pm
by kesbabev
Jelloboy, I appreciate your criticism of the series, and going into it, both myself, and The Edge realized that it wasn't going to please everybody. The feeling was that with all of the plain old teases, maybe someone would appreciate a little well written dialogue, rather than the average stroke session. I'm glad that you even took the time to view the series, rather than just trash it without reading through.

And I'd like to take a moment to thank my colleague, The Edge for spending nearly 17 hours STRAIGHT on the finale. Clearly, this took lots of work, and plenty of dedication to incorporate not only 180+ pages, but multiple endings. I believe that he deserves the recognition for the work he put in, even if people didn't particularly like the series. It's too easy to get despondent when you hear that you worked so hard, and people didn't enjoy it. So I encourage everyone that really did enjoy it to PM The Edge, and let him know that his hard work didn't go unappreciated. With the loss of Submatt, and some others, the longer teases are fading into nothingness, and I feel that they add a valuable facet to this site.

I hadn't read through the finale before it was posted, and I just recently finished all three endings. For what it's worth, Edge, you did a great job. Your dialogue sequences have improved dramatically from the first teases, and I really think that this tease is worthy of TOTM status. I appreciate the opportunity you've given me to work side by side with you, and think that good, or bad, we have definitely added something to the community for people to enjoy for a long time to cum!!!

Kes