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Feedback: When strokers get busted... 1
Posted: Sun Jul 05, 2015 8:06 pm
by teazetoy
Hi everyone,
I just put my first tease up; I'd appreciate any feedback you have.
All the best,
Re: Feedback: When strokers get busted... 1
Posted: Mon Jul 06, 2015 7:46 am
by teazetoy
The loop on part 2 is now fixed - sorry!
Re: Feedback: When strokers get busted... 1
Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2015 3:52 am
by anonymister
Sorry, but I have a few criticisms.
I got a bit bored waiting for the next page. And after getting to the computer to watch porn, the porn actress was not that attractive really, so I decided not to rate, but just canceled out.
I hope others liked it though.
Re: Feedback: When strokers get busted... 1
Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2015 8:39 am
by teazetoy
Thanks to you both, and particularly for your substantive feedback anonymister.
I suppose it's just down to subjective preferences! I'm fairly certain that none of the timers are longer than 30 seconds, and a significant minority are only 15. I really dislike long timers myself so I'll keep that further in mind.
All the best,
Re: Feedback: When strokers get busted... 1
Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2015 3:03 am
by Trusfrated
I thought they were both great!
It's hard to please everyone. She wouldn't have been my top choice for the model, but I love the storyline. In particular, I liked that you took the time to create multiple responses to the questions and gave each path (however short) well-thought dialog. More of these (with perhaps even longer paths) make for a really fun tease, in my opinion.
The "put in chastity by wife/gf for being naughty" scenario is pretty hot to me, so I hope you continue your story.
Like domtanya said (welcome back, btw!
), Keep it up!!!