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Miss Lizzi's house of Humiliation and Feminization 1.1
Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2015 6:18 pm
by Miss Lizzi
I have created my first webtease Miss Lizzi's house of Humiliation and Feminization 1.1
Feel free to leave feedback here or Pm me with your feedback good or bad as I hope to improve.
Please be sure to let me know of any bugs and I will correct them as soon as I can
I should note that the tease is just part 1. As a result it does not contain any actual feminization (suppose you could call it a slow burner).
It does contain: verbal humiliation, sensual humiliation, boots, credit card humiliation, a little blackmail and lots of stroking edging and teasing.
It may be a good idea to play the tease in full screen to be able to see all the text.
I did try to add some sounds ....but was having inconsistent luck.....so in the end abandoned the idea, so there may or may not be a couple of sound files.
I hope you enjoy
Re: Miss Lizzi's house of Humiliation and Feminization 1.1
Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2015 11:10 pm
by playfulone
Thank You Miss Lizzi ... most wonderful!
Re: Miss Lizzi's house of Humiliation and Feminization 1.1
Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2015 9:42 am
by arthurb
Excellent tease, sets the scene for hopefully many more to come
Re: Miss Lizzi's house of Humiliation and Feminization 1.1
Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 12:33 am
by mangoman
I loved it too. Very great tease!! Especially liked that you included boots and the humiliation that comes with them (cleaning). I was hoping that I'd be forced to lick them too, but oh well. :)
Please continue!
Re: Miss Lizzi's house of Humiliation and Feminization 1.1
Posted: Sun Feb 08, 2015 7:39 pm
by mangoman
domTanya wrote:As far as I've read it's a very good tease, unfortunately at one point I started noticing the your / you're - fault and then I guess I couldn't turn it off and you seem to make that mistake quite often, including one or two there/they're.
But I don't want to discourage you from making teases, I dont know if english is your native language, it's not mine and when I'm not sure I simply try replacing it with the whole thing, so:
Your a liar! - what do you want to say? Surely: You are a liar! If you can replace it with "you are" then it's you're and not your. On the other hand:
Stroke your cock - is right, you don't mean stroke you are cock.
Sorry, I don't want to sound like I know everything and I'm sure I'm making many mistakes either, but these ones are easy, and I think some people - including me - will have a lesser experience from an all-in-all great tease.
So, in conclusion, thank you again for posting, I will finish it now ;), just a bit feedback on my part!
You should do another tease, if you're here already.
Re: Miss Lizzi's house of Humiliation and Feminization 1.1
Posted: Mon Feb 09, 2015 6:40 pm
by izzygirl
I enjoyed part 1, looking forward to more, thanks
Re: Miss Lizzi's house of Humiliation and Feminization 1.1
Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 6:10 am
by Trusfrated
Just wanted to chime in that I really enjoyed this tease a great deal!
I particularly liked that you included so many branching story points and multiple available responses. It definitely adds to the re-playability and gives the overall story a greater sense of being truly interactive. It reminded me of the Apocalypse series, but obviously on a much smaller scale.
My favorite part was definitely the "Picnic" portion. The girl in that section just had a great teasing/humiliating personality that really pushed all my buttons.
I'm very interested to see where this story goes. Great job on your first tease. A definite TOTM contender in my book!
Re: Miss Lizzi's house of Humiliation and Feminization 1.1
Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2015 8:08 pm
by Miss Lizzi
I just wanted to say a quick thank you to everyone that played the tease and everyone here that left feedback, Thank you!
Re: Miss Lizzi's house of Humiliation and Feminization 1.1
Posted: Fri Mar 27, 2015 1:03 pm
by grantadams197
Just did this tease, it's excellent!
I like the little sub-stories, I think that really helped tie it all together!! The pacing is good, not too long or short in the right places, and I look forward to Part II!