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FB: Verheiratet mit Caprice / Married to Caprice
Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2015 8:07 am
by Android71
First of all: I am a little bit overwhelmed because of the positive ratings of my first tease (and about the cute PMs), even if I published it in german.
And here is the second thing to say: I am a little bit sorry for this, it wasn't planned to publish it in german. When I started writing this tease, my thoughts were "Write it in german, becuase it is easier, then translate it afterwards and publish it" - this was a long time ago. When I finally finished it, I saw that it would be a lot of work to translate it. And as I did not know how the reaction to my tease would be, I did not know if it would be worth it. So I think, it would never have been published to you have to wait for the translation - so I finally decided to publish it in the german version.
Because of the surprising ratings I think about translating it now. But I think I will need some weeks for it.
A question (for future teases) about the side-changes: is it possible to read the whole text before the side changes? Or does it take too long?
So long, "best regards",
Android
Re: FB: Verheiratet mit Caprice / Married to Caprice
Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2015 8:06 pm
by Pontos
Caprice is an awesome model. The pictures you chose fit perfectly to the story. Which is well written and interesting (if you are into cuckolding). So I'm not surprised the rating is high.
The timers were long enough for me to read the text.
Re: FB: Verheiratet mit Caprice / Married to Caprice
Posted: Mon Feb 02, 2015 10:01 pm
by mr-max
Enjoyed it very much! (I am German though ;))
I have to say I enjoy teases in English more (don't like the humilation terms in German) but in this case it was OK.
Anyway, timers where slightly too long for me, but still exaptable.
Keep up the good work and thank you!
Re: FB: Verheiratet mit Caprice / Married to Caprice
Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2015 4:43 am
by LynxPaw
Yeah, it was a great tease. I dont like german teases, however yours was still very interesting and had always a surprise. And Caprice was pretty mean, leaving you tied up for so long on.
I would have wished, at the end there would have been some more choices and that they would have been a little more obvious. I wanted to be punished and be denied or maybe left tied up on my weeding night.... but overall it was still a 5/5.
Keep up the good work, looking forward to another tease of you.
Re: FB: Verheiratet mit Caprice / Married to Caprice
Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2015 5:45 pm
by mangoman
Whats much more important for me - can you make it available in TeaseMe?

Re: FB: Verheiratet mit Caprice / Married to Caprice
Posted: Fri Aug 07, 2015 7:37 am
by Android71
Finally I made it ans tried to translate it...I hope there are not too many mistakes in it..I am still working on the translation and correct mistakes.
Hope you have fun with this tease.
Re: FB: Verheiratet mit Caprice / Married to Caprice
Posted: Thu Aug 20, 2015 10:45 pm
by aaroncarter
This tease was extraordinary. One of the best in a long time! Congratulations :)
If I may add something, though, ------- SPOILER ALERT -------
... I didn't really like the ending with the man talking to you, sort of anticlimatic, kinda fits with the story but hearing the same words from Caprice would have been 100x hotter :)
Also, but this is a problem I have with every webtease, is that the timers are too slow. I wish there was a "continue" button everywhere, because it's no fun reading one line and then reading it again six times before it changes. Guess I am a fast reader :)
Anyway, again congratulations for a great work, with great images and a nice plot. Can't wait for a new effort!

Re: FB: Verheiratet mit Caprice / Married to Caprice
Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2015 10:38 pm
by jerome_ff
This tease is very nice. I especially enjoy the way you introduce a true and "realistic" story. And the way she make you horny and submissive first. Then how she "accustom" you to cuckolding and nearly make you feel the fault come from you if she cheat on you.
Often, teases with cuckolding are a quick rush, she simply say "you are a cuckold then take it", it make a little go out of the story.
So your tease is much more realistic, make me nearly feel it and enjoy being a cuckold. I suppose the goal is reached. I would put it in the top 3 of cuckolding teases.
The girl of course is very nice (maybe a little slim to me), I suppose finding such a set of (free?) pics is itself already a hard job.
I don't always had the time to read the whole sentences even without looking at the pic of some pages, when in others I had to only wait. So I suppose that for the pics who don't needs specific time of stroking or so, a continue button would be better.
------- SPOILER ALERT -------
From my point of view (thus depending of tastes), out of button the main improvements could be:
It felt a little strange how the sweet girl "suddently" turned to hard bondage.
The way she claim being unsatisfied after telling your commun sweet times is a little sudain also. But here maybe it was the goal...
I dislike ageplay, so the toilet part was a little strange and turning me off.
The end is a little binary, either you say you don't like and she is then satisfied back and faithfull, or you like and she will cuck you and lock you without any sex for you ever. Some choices between could have been nice. Well, my end was the hard one

Re: FB: Verheiratet mit Caprice / Married to Caprice
Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2015 8:08 pm
by sph-fetish
Thanks for this teas, that was really the best I ever read...respect
