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Very nicely written tease, flash. I enjoyed it and look forward to future episodes.

I'd really prefer it if you used continue buttons to timers for conversational speech and setup, I can read so much faster than a slideshow can operate. It seems well-written enough.

Flash, I am so glad you made this tease, and I hope you continue the series.

These days I visit Milovana maybe once a week, and for several weeks now I haven't seen a single new tease I really found interesting, until yours. For whatever reason I have always needed a backstory and dialogue that at least attempts to create a sense of character in order to really get into a tease. Those things seem to be very rare on Milovana these days, but your tease is a welcome exception. A five star effort IMO!

I must say though that I agree with sub-routine, timers are okay for stroking parts but I don't really like them for conversations.

Also, even the stroking timers tend to be too long for my tastes, but that is a very minor complaint and I am sure that many other readers feel differently.

All in all, please keep up the strong work.

I loved it! Can't wait for the next installment. I agree with others about the conversation parts, but everything else was perfect!!! Thanks for making it :)