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Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:23 pm
by The Edge 2.0
Hi everybody.
After spending 20 minutes in a sloshy bubble, guided by Nikki's voice to write something, I officially present The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny.
I just wanted to do something different, and it started off being inspired by a million different sci-fi things in space, but ultimately became a case study in domination by Portal's GLaDOS.
Any feedback you guys care to share will go a long way towards
A. Letting me know you had a laugh, or
B. Ensuring I never, ever do that again
Cheers!
The Edge
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:35 pm
by spiritus
I loved it.
It was smart, sexy, funny and the model is gorgeous.
Thanks!
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:38 pm
by The Edge 2.0
spiritus wrote:Thanks!
Thank
you!
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:40 pm
by kesbabev
Fish!
I looked up and saw your doodle.
Your doodle.
Naked is a curtain
For lies are the sun on which I sleep
Snow covered my sex
My sex is a snowman
Your doodle reminds me of a carrot
I think that about says it all, don't you?
Kes
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:42 pm
by Miss Tira
I was baffled but consantly laughing.
And talking toasters always make me happy. Howdy doodly do.
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:44 pm
by The Edge 2.0
kesbabev wrote:Fish!
I looked up and saw your doodle.
Your doodle.
Naked is a curtain
For lies are the sun on which I sleep
Snow covered my sex
My sex is a snowman
Your doodle reminds me of a carrot
I think that about says it all, don't you?
Ironically enough, I thought that said it all
long before I ever wrote this tease.
Miss Tira wrote:I was baffled but consantly laughing.
And talking toasters always make me happy. Howdy doodly do.
I guess I know who to turn to when I need to ask that all important question then.
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:46 pm
by Miss Tira
It's about bloody time someone around here got one of my clever SF references. (Or in this case, his own.)
We don't like muffins round 'ere.
Seriously though - I loved it.
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:54 pm
by mike1978
We don't like muffins round 'ere.
Aah, so you're a waffle woman.
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:54 pm
by The Edge 2.0
Miss Tira wrote:We don't like muffins round 'ere.
So you're a waffle man! ...... Err, woman.
jp wrote:<--- Confused.
Can I help to alleviate your confusion in any way, good sir?
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:56 pm
by The Edge 2.0
mike1978 wrote:Aah, so you're a waffle woman.
The Edge wrote:So you're a waffle man! ...... Err, woman.
Wow....
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:59 pm
by Miss Tira
You see what he's like?! This is what caused the accident in the first place.
lol let's just hijack the thread! This is fantastic.
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 3:00 pm
by mike1978
That was no accident. That was first degree toastercide!
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 3:01 pm
by The Edge 2.0
jp wrote:Nope. I'll continue to be baffled. I think it's more amusing.
In that case, anything I can do to make you even more baffled, good sir?
Miss Tira wrote:You see what he's like?! This is what caused the accident in the first place.
You mean the accident involving you, the toaster, the waste disposal and the 14-pound lump hammer?
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 3:03 pm
by The Edge 2.0
jp wrote:*Shakes his head from side to side*
I recognize that... That's.... That's...
The start of The Bartman!
Do the Bartman!
Re: Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 3:04 pm
by Miss Tira
And we're off again!