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The Babydick Argonaut's Tease - Working On It Again
Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2014 3:57 am
by argonaut
Okay. So this is meant to be a hardcore but reasonable Webtease, geared mostly towards guys but I think girls might like it too. It's very painful and humiliating and uses Sissy material such as Anna Malice. . .
PLEASE look at it and tell me what you think about it. But first you have to PM me so you can pre-Review it. ;)
IF you Pre-review it I will give you some credit for it.
Re: The Babydick Argonaut's Tease - Working On It Again
Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2014 7:25 pm
by argonaut
argonaut wrote:Okay. So this is meant to be a hardcore but reasonable Webtease, geared mostly towards guys but I think girls might like it too. It's very painful and humiliating and uses Sissy material such as Anna Malice. . .
PLEASE look at it and tell me what you think about it. But first you have to PM me so you can pre-Review it. ;)
IF you Pre-review it I will give you some credit for it.
All three of you have access to it now
Re: The Babydick Argonaut's Tease - Working On It Again
Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2014 1:58 am
by argonaut
argonaut wrote:argonaut wrote:Okay. So this is meant to be a hardcore but reasonable Webtease, geared mostly towards guys but I think girls might like it too. It's very painful and humiliating and uses Sissy material such as Anna Malice. . .
PLEASE look at it and tell me what you think about it. But first you have to PM me so you can pre-Review it. ;)
IF you Pre-review it I will give you some credit for it.
All three of you have access to it now
Well what does anyone think?
Re: The Babydick Argonaut's Tease - Working On It Again
Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2014 12:25 pm
by argonaut
Re: The Babydick Argonaut's Tease - Working On It Again
Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2014 6:17 pm
by Takenaga
@argonaut:
Are you talking to your split personalities in this thread?
Re: The Babydick Argonaut's Tease - Working On It Again
Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2014 8:44 pm
by JonnyD
I think It was well written. You did well on the instructions/story integration. The only thing I would suggest is to space it out more over a couple extra pages.
Re: The Babydick Argonaut's Tease - Working On It Again
Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2014 9:54 pm
by argonaut
Takenaga wrote:@argonaut:
Are you talking to your split personalities in this thread?
Please, don't chop off my nuts!
Do you want to see it?
And thank you, I may put in an extra page.