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To everyone following the series, thanks for your words of encouragement. I hope the finale lives up to the rest of the storyline, and I strongly encourage everyone who reads this to go thru the entire tease again, before seeing the finale. I think it will be a nice suprise. Again, thanks, and keep an eye out for my next series!

Wow, that was fast!

Thank you again for posting this awesome series. I'm glad to see you wrote a 4th part, as I would say you definitely built up some momentum in the 3rd that begged to be carried over into another installment. As for part 4 itself, here's my feedback (and I can't believe I'm doing this on a Milovana message board, but):

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I think you did a great job generating a real sense of the haze a mind enduring this would feel, so kudos for that. At first I was a little jarred to discover it was all a dream, but ultimately I think that works out great. The haze clears and the fantasy of something that extreme can sift into the fantasy of a fantasy, if that makes sense, and the ending feels almost like a confessional where you stand on the verge of experiencing it all over again, but for real. Awesome job!

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Again, keep up the good work, and I definitely look forward to seeing more of your teases!

The Edge

This was/is an awesome series! It has a good story line to it.

I kind of hope, there is more to it. Now that they is a breaking point.... the new beginning perhaps.

Thanks for all the kind feedback. Sadly, no spinoff in the works for Breaking you, although I am currently in collaboration with another very talented writer. We are working on the series "Hell Hath no Fury". If you are interested in reading more of my works, I would definitely check this out.

Also, anyone that has some ideas for a webtease, feel free to PM me. I'm always looking for fresh ideas. it seems that as I browse this site, I see the same things. Domination, verbal humiliation, instructional masturbation, and the ending is predictable. I prefer to see something new, something to keep people interested.

Again, thanks for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed the series!

Very nice work. I love the feminization-themed teases, so this one definitely got me going.