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FB: A day with Tori Black

Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 3:55 am
by supermokkori
New Flashteases with metronome stroking is becoming a rarer thing these days, and this one was done quite well. Liked the slow build up and the variance of stroking patterns.

I was a little confused when I first heard the voice command count off but I got it. Kinda weird, but in a different weird type way.

My only minor gripe is that sometimes, you are on an image too long - like stroking to an image for over a minute can seem like forever. Otherwise, I enjoyed it quite a bit. Hope you do a TeaseMe version with high resolution images.

Well done, troyan.

Re: FB: A day with Tori Black

Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 7:08 am
by LeonhartGR
Best one so far!!!

Re: FB: A day with Tori Black

Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 7:08 pm
by masterstroke
I liked that you counted out and varied the beat with a voice. One question, why didn't you use the voice in the beginning when you first meet Tori? :hmmm:

I also agree with the other posters that you stayed on a few images too long.

Otherwise, well done.

:clap2:

Re: FB: A day with Tori Black

Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 8:15 pm
by troyan
Thank for the feedback!

I have originally tried the Miss Treated 4 some time ago, by Sexytimes 5. He used some of those longer pages in there and I totally loved it! Open/Close is meant to open/close your eyes while stroking, and the pattern changes, so some longer pages are not boring at all. I agree it they used the same plain beat for 2-3 minutes, it would be boring:) You can expect more of teases like this in the future and I hope somebody volunteers to write his own.

Re: FB: A day with Tori Black

Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2014 8:43 pm
by masterstroke
It dawned on me after I posted that open/close meant open and close your eyes. I didn't pay attention to the instructions on the previous page. :no:

Re: FB: A day with Tori Black

Posted: Wed Aug 13, 2014 12:56 am
by anonymister
Very good. I did not have time to finish and will try again soon.

I like the feature that some teases have, giving you a secret code partway through so you can skip back there later.

Re: FB: A day with Tori Black

Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2014 5:16 pm
by Vinc
Well edited but too softcore and too slow for me.

Re: FB: A day with Tori Black

Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2014 6:05 pm
by frankendude
I was a little confused by the voice counting. It may have been useful to have a short instruction sentence on what each count means. I wasn't sure if each count was and up-down, or only one half (an up or a down). If each count is an up-down, the pace is significantly faster in some of these sections than it is for any of the metronome based stroking. This may be intended though.

Re: FB: A day with Tori Black

Posted: Thu Aug 14, 2014 10:16 pm
by lmind
Very cool, troyan. When I first saw the instruction to "close your eyes," I was perplexed, wondering how you can read instructions and click buttons with your eyes closed, but then the voice kicked in and answered that question.

Technical question:
Spoiler: show
Are those long voice sequences a single long audio file on a single slide? Or are they multiple short audio files on multiple short slides?

I'm considering stitching together music across multiple slides for my next tease.
-lmind

Re: FB: A day with Tori Black

Posted: Fri Aug 15, 2014 11:27 am
by troyan
It is a single audio file and a longer page delay. If you will split the audio in more parts, I believe there's going to be a very short "click / break" when the page switches.

Re: FB: A day with Tori Black

Posted: Mon Aug 18, 2014 8:50 pm
by cockheroaddict
I liked it but agree it was far too slow paced for my liking
As well even the stroking pace seemed slow

But I did like the idea though