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As always, any feedback you can give me will help me make the next one even better! Please feel free to give comments, suggestions, or pm me for new ideas. I plan on doing at least one more installment of the Breaking You series, if anyone has some ideas, they would be greatly appreciated!
Thanks for all of your interest!
Kes

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=2084

Great stuff. Thanks for doing some paragraph breaks in pt. 1 - I've enjoyed both immensely. More, more!

I have enjoyed the story aspect of your teases
but I am unsure if I was to follow the strory
as if it was instructions?

Or is it intended to be just a story?

I have enjoyed it as such (a story)
Very well written