The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
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The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
Hello boys..
I'd like to get feedback from you. Suggestions too.
And let me know about bugs, because you never know and it's my very first tease. ;) I checked it twice, but yeah.
Don't let this Princess wait too long for posts.
Love,
Princess Julia
Here are the links for the writing tasks:
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8841
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8842
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8843
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8844
I'd like to get feedback from you. Suggestions too.
And let me know about bugs, because you never know and it's my very first tease. ;) I checked it twice, but yeah.
Don't let this Princess wait too long for posts.
Love,
Princess Julia
Here are the links for the writing tasks:
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8841
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8842
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8843
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8844
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Re: The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
I just had a quick look at the first few pages and I look forward to doing this tease.
I normally just read them, the fact that I stopped and want to keep the surprise means that at the very least the start is intriguing, promising, hot, etc ...
I'm hoping for some alone time tommorow
I normally just read them, the fact that I stopped and want to keep the surprise means that at the very least the start is intriguing, promising, hot, etc ...
I'm hoping for some alone time tommorow
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Re: The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
I LOVE MAXINE! Thank you for this tease!
Re: The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
I can't find the writing task.
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Re: The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8841
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I heard the tease is too hard, is that true? Should I change something?
Love,
Princess Julia
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I heard the tease is too hard, is that true? Should I change something?
Love,
Princess Julia
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Re: The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
This tease looks really great, but i will spank my ass (with metal spatula), not my back . Is that OK Princess?
And the pic on the END is You? Really beautiful.
And the pic on the END is You? Really beautiful.
Re: The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
Thank you for the link.
I figured out my problem: with low screen resolution, the last line showing the link is cut off; and the search function (I searched for Julia) does not show this writing task.
Sure it depends on the writing skills, but for me the writing tasks were VERY difficult despite I did them while free. In bondage and with pain they were FAR beyond my skills.
Otherwise, I liked this tease very much, it is pretty different from most others. Thank you.
Peter
I figured out my problem: with low screen resolution, the last line showing the link is cut off; and the search function (I searched for Julia) does not show this writing task.
Sure it depends on the writing skills, but for me the writing tasks were VERY difficult despite I did them while free. In bondage and with pain they were FAR beyond my skills.
Otherwise, I liked this tease very much, it is pretty different from most others. Thank you.
Peter
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Re: The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
Too difficult :( can't get through them ... Would you mind making some german ones as well?
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Re: The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
The line writing is too hard for me personally. I'm a clumsy typer and don't have the patience for it. So I got as far as the first line writing part and then had to quit, which sucked, because I was enjoying it.
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Re: The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
Well, I already made the linewriting shorter. If you're not able to finish 3 little tasks now (a few people did not took longer than 10minutes for them), I guess you're not worthy. ;)
Anyhow, thank you for your feedback, boys. I've got a LOT of emails, even some voice recordings of begging which I really enjoyed.
@Badboy: Sucks, but OK. There are a few options in this tease and one of them even is spanking your ass tho. ;) And yup, this is little old me on the last page.
Love,
Princess Julia
Anyhow, thank you for your feedback, boys. I've got a LOT of emails, even some voice recordings of begging which I really enjoyed.
@Badboy: Sucks, but OK. There are a few options in this tease and one of them even is spanking your ass tho. ;) And yup, this is little old me on the last page.
Love,
Princess Julia
Re: The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
I loved the tone of the writing and the choice of model but the writing beat me this time. I tried for about 90 minutes (that's a lot of faceslaps) but I couldn't seem to get it. Really wanted to get the code so it was like torture every time it added another 3 lines. First time I ever felt like a webtease broke me.
Hearing what's on the last page makes me want to try again tomorrow though. Right now I have to go clean salted butter off my computer.
Hearing what's on the last page makes me want to try again tomorrow though. Right now I have to go clean salted butter off my computer.
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Deviant wrote:I loved the tone of the writing and the choice of model but the writing beat me this time. I tried for about 90 minutes (that's a lot of faceslaps) but I couldn't seem to get it. Really wanted to get the code so it was like torture every time it added another 3 lines. First time I ever felt like a webtease broke me.
Hearing what's on the last page makes me want to try again tomorrow though. Right now I have to go clean salted butter off my computer.
You may try again.. Is it a good thing that my tease breaks people?
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I think so! I never knew writing lines could be so intense. It had a lot of creative ideas that made it good to obey properly, even when it hurt.PrincessJulia wrote:Is it a good thing that my tease breaks people?
Thank you! I hope I can do it right for you this timePrincessJulia wrote:You may try again..
Gonna get more butter and type sloooowly.
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Re: The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
Thank You for the wonderful tease Mistress. It is a difficult task but the only thing that was hard was the useless appendage between my legs. I was please that Mistress responded to my recording and also I appreciate being introduced to "writeforme.com". What an amazing website and to combine that with Milovana was brillant!
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Re: The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]
I do think it is good that Your tease breaks people...most teases here are not so difficult...only time consuming.
PrincessJulia wrote:Deviant wrote:I loved the tone of the writing and the choice of model but the writing beat me this time. I tried for about 90 minutes (that's a lot of faceslaps) but I couldn't seem to get it. Really wanted to get the code so it was like torture every time it added another 3 lines. First time I ever felt like a webtease broke me.
Hearing what's on the last page makes me want to try again tomorrow though. Right now I have to go clean salted butter off my computer.
You may try again.. Is it a good thing that my tease breaks people?
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