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The Queen of Mean, Maxine![Feedback]

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Hello boys..

I'd like to get feedback from you. Suggestions too.

And let me know about bugs, because you never know and it's my very first tease. ;) I checked it twice, but yeah.

Don't let this Princess wait too long for posts.

Love,

Princess Julia :love:

Here are the links for the writing tasks:

http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8841
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8842
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8843
http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8844
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Post by manwithcape »

I just had a quick look at the first few pages and I look forward to doing this tease.
I normally just read them, the fact that I stopped and want to keep the surprise means that at the very least the start is intriguing, promising, hot, etc ...

I'm hoping for some alone time tommorow :innocent:
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Post by mangoman »

I LOVE MAXINE! Thank you for this tease! :wave:
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I can't find the writing task.

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http://writeforme.org/writingtask.php?task=8841

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I heard the tease is too hard, is that true? Should I change something?

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Post by badboi »

This tease looks really great, but i will spank my ass (with metal spatula), not my back . Is that OK Princess?
And the pic on the END is You? Really beautiful.
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Post by muestrom »

Thank you for the link.

I figured out my problem: with low screen resolution, the last line showing the link is cut off; and the search function (I searched for Julia) does not show this writing task.

Sure it depends on the writing skills, but for me the writing tasks were VERY difficult despite I did them while free. In bondage and with pain they were FAR beyond my skills.

Otherwise, I liked this tease very much, it is pretty different from most others. Thank you.

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Post by TheCaptain »

Too difficult :( can't get through them ... Would you mind making some german ones as well?
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Post by androgyme »

The line writing is too hard for me personally. I'm a clumsy typer and don't have the patience for it. So I got as far as the first line writing part and then had to quit, which sucked, because I was enjoying it.
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Well, I already made the linewriting shorter. If you're not able to finish 3 little tasks now (a few people did not took longer than 10minutes for them), I guess you're not worthy. ;)

Anyhow, thank you for your feedback, boys. I've got a LOT of emails, even some voice recordings of begging which I really enjoyed.

@Badboy: Sucks, but OK. There are a few options in this tease and one of them even is spanking your ass tho. ;) And yup, this is little old me on the last page.


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Post by Deviant »

I loved the tone of the writing and the choice of model but the writing beat me this time. I tried for about 90 minutes (that's a lot of faceslaps) but I couldn't seem to get it. Really wanted to get the code so it was like torture every time it added another 3 lines. First time I ever felt like a webtease broke me.

Hearing what's on the last page makes me want to try again tomorrow though. Right now I have to go clean salted butter off my computer.
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Deviant wrote:I loved the tone of the writing and the choice of model but the writing beat me this time. I tried for about 90 minutes (that's a lot of faceslaps) but I couldn't seem to get it. Really wanted to get the code so it was like torture every time it added another 3 lines. First time I ever felt like a webtease broke me.

Hearing what's on the last page makes me want to try again tomorrow though. Right now I have to go clean salted butter off my computer.
:lol:

You may try again.. Is it a good thing that my tease breaks people?
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PrincessJulia wrote:Is it a good thing that my tease breaks people?
I think so! I never knew writing lines could be so intense. It had a lot of creative ideas that made it good to obey properly, even when it hurt.
PrincessJulia wrote:You may try again..
Thank you! I hope I can do it right for you this time :-)

Gonna get more butter and type sloooowly.
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Post by jimmarimar »

Thank You for the wonderful tease Mistress. It is a difficult task but the only thing that was hard was the useless appendage between my legs. I was please that Mistress responded to my recording and also I appreciate being introduced to "writeforme.com". What an amazing website and to combine that with Milovana was brillant!
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Post by jimmarimar »

I do think it is good that Your tease breaks people...most teases here are not so difficult...only time consuming.
PrincessJulia wrote:
Deviant wrote:I loved the tone of the writing and the choice of model but the writing beat me this time. I tried for about 90 minutes (that's a lot of faceslaps) but I couldn't seem to get it. Really wanted to get the code so it was like torture every time it added another 3 lines. First time I ever felt like a webtease broke me.

Hearing what's on the last page makes me want to try again tomorrow though. Right now I have to go clean salted butter off my computer.
:lol:

You may try again.. Is it a good thing that my tease breaks people?
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