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As always, I look forward to any constructive critique, as I am always looking for advice, or ways to improve.
Thanks all!

constructive critiques?
how can i, with my mind swirling around like that ...
very nice girls - i mean good looking... ;)

thank you so much

will there be part 2?

Very nice tease, I almost wanted to be that poor guy. Nice girls and very exciting

Congrats

I don't comment on teases much, but I wanted to congratulate the author of this one. I like teases where the girl in control is just a little bit ... well, OUT of control! I get a bit bored with the "recipe" ones - "Ingredients: toys X, Y, Z. Method: 50 strokes with X, 50 strokes with Y, 50 strokes with Z, repeat with the other hand ..." etc. etc. ... zzzzz ... sounds like the girl is reading a script rather than getting her jollies by enjoying teasing and denying me.

I like teases with a PLOT ... where you can lose yourself in what might happen next. I like it to be a little unpredictable. I'm not too worried if it is a little unrealistic, as long as it is fantasisable. I like cruel girls who actually ENJOY doing it to their victims. It's also kinda fun when the victim foolishly lets himself in for it in some way ... like letting her tie him up.

The Breaking You tease is a very good example of all these. It could easily do with a sequel!

Thanks for writing it!

I wanted to enjoy it, but I gave up after about 5 or so pages, because I found it difficult to read without paragraph breaks. Maybe it's because I'm tired and I just can't be bothered reading huge slatherings of text; but it certainly wouldn't harm anything to have it broken up into appropriate paragraphs.

I'll try again when I'm more awake... and not at work

I would like to thank all of you that have posted on my recent tease. Every comment is welcome, and due to the level of enthusiasm that I have received, I am indeed planning a sequel. Thanks again!

Kes

I'm new to the site so I'm still trying to find my way around . This may be a really silly question, but how do I find the "Breaking You" tease? Can I get to it easily from the forum posts here?

Thanks

Main way would be to choose Webteases from the bluish menu above and scroll down a bit until you see it. You could also click the author's name (kesbabev) and view all of his teases.

I liked this one a lot. Good job. I'll be checking out part 2 later tonight.