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FB: A day with Lexi
Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2014 10:32 am
by Shattered
If you've got any feedback on my recent tease, or there's any glitches, let me know here!
Re: FB: A day with Lexi
Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2014 5:51 pm
by Nebulak1970
Very good tease!
A second part?
Re: FB: A day with Lexi
Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2014 6:46 pm
by Slave24
Great tease, well done!
Re: FB: A day with Lexi
Posted: Thu Jul 31, 2014 11:22 pm
by mangoman
Yeah, really a great tease. I've enjoyed it a lot. Please more!!
Re: FB: A day with Lexi
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2014 8:48 pm
by darkscalehealer
I found it sometimes a bit hard to read all the text before it switched (a bit too fast sometimes).
In the middle (you are in the house, but not on the last part) there is bug, I think. You have like 5-6 lines of text, and then some options on the right (3-4) but all of that only for few seconds that I could not read anything because it changed to the next text without that I had chosen one option. I'm too lazy to do the tease again yet :p
anyway: I liked it, a bit shorter than the average tease, but pretty good quality :)
Re: FB: A day with Lexi
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2014 10:26 pm
by mangoman
darkscalehealer wrote:I found it sometimes a bit hard to read all the text before it switched (a bit too fast sometimes).
In the middle (you are in the house, but not on the last part) there is bug, I think. You have like 5-6 lines of text, and then some options on the right (3-4) but all of that only for few seconds that I could not read anything because it changed to the next text without that I had chosen one option. I'm too lazy to do the tease again yet :p
anyway: I liked it, a bit shorter than the average tease, but pretty good quality :)
yeah right, I saw that "bug" too. Seems like you forgot a 0 for a 60, because the timer is on 6.
Re: FB: A day with Lexi
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2014 10:51 pm
by Shattered
Do you recall if it was this slide or not?
- Spoiler: show
- ""Oh! I almost showed you my boobs I was so excited.
I suppose you do want to see them though?
I guess you deserve it. But I'm gonna make you work for it... How should I do that..."
This was first that came to mind, and this short delay was intentional, but maybe a few more seconds would be good. Or was it something else?
Thanks to everyone who likes my tease, I'm pleased it's been successful.
Re: FB: A day with Lexi
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2014 11:48 pm
by Shattered
Okay then, I can see the 5 seconds being a bit short. Sadly (or not) I can't edit right now due to TOTM, but once voting has concluded I'll elongate that. And do you recall if those were the slides where outfits were changed or did I have a few others that stood out? Thanks for the feedback!
Re: FB: A day with Lexi
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2014 11:52 pm
by Shattered
Okay, I'll take a look into those once I can edit, thanks!
Re: FB: A day with Lexi
Posted: Sat Aug 02, 2014 4:37 pm
by PedroZorro
Although there are some bugs, that oder users have described, I think the tease is quite good.
Great work, buddy! I enjoyed it.
Re: FB: A day with Lexi
Posted: Wed May 24, 2017 3:51 pm
by Gormur
Shattered wrote: Thu Jul 31, 2014 10:32 am
If you've got any feedback on my recent tease, or there's any glitches, let me know here!
I have done many long term teases. But your first tease in the series is just too damn hot. Have started that first day at 6 pm and failed to follow orders three times already!!!
I'm just like nope nope nope way too horny!!!

Re: FB: A day with Lexi
Posted: Wed May 24, 2017 4:43 pm
by Shattered
Gormur wrote: Wed May 24, 2017 3:51 pm
Shattered wrote: Thu Jul 31, 2014 10:32 am
If you've got any feedback on my recent tease, or there's any glitches, let me know here!
I have done many long term teases. But your first tease in the series is just too damn hot. Have started that first day at 6 pm and failed to follow orders three times already!!!
I'm just like nope nope nope way too horny!!!
Well you don't want to disappoint Lexi right? I'm fine with people taking what they want out of teases, if it's too much for you then take what you can from it but I'm sure you'll enjoy it more if you follow it to the letter :)