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Purely Professional, Mr. Pro

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 1:31 am
by doink
I got one word: fabulous. Thanks. Great model. Great dialogue, too. The dialogue is simple, direct, taunting, HOT.

Re: Purely Professional, Mr. Pro

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 3:19 pm
by cymerc
Agree -- the dialogue is simple, sensual, and in some ways reminds me of one of my ex's. Hot, hot, hot!

Re: Purely Professional, Mr. Pro

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 5:18 pm
by slavechylde
doink and cymerc,

Thank you both so much. I really appreciate your kind words. You picked up on exactly what I was going after. Thanks again. :-)

Re: Purely Professional, Mr. Pro

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 5:54 pm
by slavechylde
Thank you, jp.

If I only spent as much time working my novel as I spend working teases..........


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Re: Purely Professional, Mr. Pro

Posted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 8:57 pm
by pbchillin
Wow! another fabulous tease by yourself, really enjoyed this and the prequel to it, thanks again :)

Re: Purely Professional, Mr. Pro

Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 3:05 am
by slavechylde
It's always nice to hear affirmations. Thank you.