Milovana.com

Here goes, my first webtease: http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=1948

Hope you enjoy it and I'd like to read some feedback. Positive and negative criticism is welcomed, I'd like to know what you liked and disliked so my next webtease is better :)

What a debut!

That was long, great writing style, amazing choice of pictures - what can I say... Nice job!

seraph0x wrote:What a debut!

That was long, great writing style, amazing choice of pictures - what can I say... Nice job!

Thanks!!!

Seems like people are enjoying my tease, given the rating it has. But I'd like to read some comments as well, either good or bad, or things to improve for the next tease