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I hope you enjoy the next chapter. I trust that this community won't be offended by any of the content. Let me know what you think, and if you'd like there to be a chapter 3.

I LOVED IT!!!! I"m so hard right now it's unbearable. I cant WAIT for the next installment!

love!!xxx

something so wronmg about this, i can read it yuk! your daughter that just sick

Although I wasn't offended by chapter 2, I personally would have preferred "Your step-daughter, your mistress"

Nevertheless, I hope to see a chapter 3 in the future.

I havent done the tease (yet :D) But ive read the first couple pages and although not offended i would also like "step daughter" better. That way its not incest as such which is something i find is a limit for me.

Of course i can always substitute step daughter in my mind

It's just wrong.

Sorry but i got as far as the first page and just bailed out. Not one for me!

Yeah, perhaps Step-daughter would be a bit more popular

Thanks for your feedback. I've changed the tease and any references to 'step-daughter'.

I like to go hard-hitting, but ultimately it's got to be enjoyable, not revolting. I'm not a father, so I can freely fantasize about this without revulsion coming into it. I can appreciate that this is not the case for everyone else.

This was a bit much for me....i could never do it.

The your daughter bit is kinda nasty

Not that I'm interested in anything containing incest just for the incest, but I thought this was an excellent tease, as was its prequel. I normally would not even open a 'your daughter' sort of tease, but I still read this entire thing simply for its merit as a tease.

Impressive how the daughter bit was considered the nasty part, but the fantasy of essentially being raped by a dozen guys wasn't.

i loved this tease, please do another installment

Saw your tease come up at random and decided what the fuck.

I'm not a guy so it didn't do much for me, but decided to check out the feedback.

I'm actually surprised at the negativity here. Incest fantasies are common, as are rape fantasies, adult age play fantasies, water sports, blood sports, and others.

It really disturbs me that a fetish community would be so outraged at what is obviously a fantasy. I mean, I don't get into piss play or diapers, but I'm not going to rail against those who post that sort of thing just because it's not my personal fetish.

It's a tease, it's fantasy. For those that think it's real, grow the fuck up and mind your own fetish. No one is forcing anyone to click on a tease. If I don't like someone's piss play or diaper tease I simply don't fucking click on it, I don't go ranting on the forums that it shouldn't have been posted.

Jeez people, get a fucking life.