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The tease is good. I liked the idea but I have a few problems with it though. Contains spoilers, so if you are gonna play - don't read

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1) I don't like the whole "Jerk XXX times before timet ends". because
- I have to count strokes and seconds A LOT in this tease.
- I have to read the text before starting to stroke, then look at the clock to undersand what time I have... Too many calculation and points to be aware of.
2) the page that reads "read this and start when timer reached 60 seconds" - the timer STARTS at 60 seconds. And personally with my reading speed I finish reading at about mark of 40 seconds tops. The objective is NOT CLEAR. It seemed to me that you have this page to read, and then on another page you execute. Nope! Good thing I just lurked or it would break the game for me right away. And anyway all this reading and counting again....
3) few pages with text "(one minute hidden timer)"... wha? Why? Why would you do a secret timer and say what time is it?
4) There are rounds when you wank as fast as possible for 2-3 minutes. While staring at a single picture. It would be best if you split the page in a 30-second-ish pages with changing pictures but the same text.
5) the ending seemed too long and boring. 5 minutes no touching wile looking at a single picture. In group with 2 prior rounds it very much looks like you had no motivation to finish the tease and just wrapped up the last 10 minutes like that.

I'm not saying it's bad as it is, but I would prefer:
1) metronome or any other means of stroking besides counting. Even "3 strokes per second" is MUCH better that "180 strokes"+1 minute timer.
2) as I said, last 10 minutes were a real downer. Booooring. And also too hard for most.
3) Edging tasks. Instead of last 10-15 minutes of a tease which are boring (again).
4) TeaseMe HD version. Nyx does really bad on contrast pictures, and here you have very much lit girl and darker backgrounds.

Once again good and very interesting idea from Fibonacci and again mediocre implementation. I agree with the remarks of Nazhul. Dear Fibonacci, if you see it, could you remake this and your other wonderful works with the metronome?

I liked the tease, but I do agree with the comments above. I don't like to know the length of the hidden timers. It is too easy to use a watch, cell phone, or timer to track the time, and that takes away the suspense. I'd like to see some very short hidden timers, and some very ling ones. The former really stresses the effort to hold the orgasm; the latter is quite frustrating waiting for the next opportunity to stroke. Still I liked the concept very much, and will revisit it on a regular basis.