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Hi Everyone,

I'm new here so would love to get some feedback on the web tease I wrote. I have been using this site for a long time for myself and decided it was time to give something back. You guys seem like a great community!

Gerald x

Very well written good use of a model
with your theme and words
seems to be getting good ratings.

Personally I like denial at the end... but you write what YOU want!!
I hope you keep writing some more, and Post a little more in forums...


to milovana!
what a great way to introduce yourself!!