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(Feedback) Suzie wants to play with you!
Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2013 9:11 pm
by 666
Been quite a long time since my last tease, hope this one is satisfactory. Could possibly be the start of a series I'm thinking. Let me know if there's any bugs. Thanks.
Re: (Feedback) Suzie wants to play with you!
Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2013 4:37 am
by Trusfrated
Hello,
I just wanted to say that I love the way you've written the character of Suzie. Her bitchy, condescending tone is perfect and really works well for this tease.
Nice job!
Re: (Feedback) Suzie wants to play with you!
Posted: Thu Oct 24, 2013 3:08 pm
by avelox
All Your teases are very very good. We all have different taste, but I like Your work very much. Thumbs up
nice plot, nice storyline and nice teasing