Milovana.com

Well, this might be a bit bold of me, but I thought, as this is my first published tease for Milovana, that a topic for feedback might be a good idea.

It also allows me to get some, eh, director's commentary out there, without spoiling the tease.

First up, this is an old tease. It dates from possibly 2002 and was done by me for Orgasm Denial forum when teases were more caption related.

It remained lost and unloved until I recently found Milovana.

I have three other Missy teases near completion.

All are quickies - not much to read so you can concentrate on the picture. All around a dozen pictures in lenght.

Also, simple tales, unconnected and very passive. They are not really interactive, except that by clicking on continue you are some how involved in the story or rather the Missy dialogue.

As I mentioned in my introduction I prefer PowerPoint as a vehicle for teases as you can get lots of options happening. Unfortunately they are hard to share, but there is one website that has a few simple ones. I might post the link, but it is nothing special, so don't get excited (yes I'm a natural tease).

My big project is an epic. Many short instalments, but really telling a story. It will take me years, as all good epics should.

Any and all feedback much appreciated.

The pics are GREAT!!! I do think however that having her ask us to stroke and edge would improve the teases alot! I don't mind that they're short, but without any request to "stroke", they lack the basic ingredient of what makes this site so special.

Thanks for the feedback. I've taken your suggestions to heart and the third Missy tease - Missy the Secretary, is more interactive.

I might go back and tweek the other two - Genie and Bored.

I wonder if this beautiful girl's web site is still around. It was something like Missyteenxx.com I don't she'll be a teen now.

I think I liked the Secretary one best, and then the other two were close, but the Genie edges it out by a hair.

Taken in the context of preserving old teases, I don't think you need to do anything else to them. If you do want to improve on them, I'd say go with the advice you've already recieved about having them more interactive.

I will say that I don't think every tease needs to be interactive. The fact that he first two end somehat abruptly makes them perfect for for teases. She didn't have to tell me what to do for me to be getting worked up. As the end came, it did its job cutting me off. (pun intended from the Genie)

Thank you - yes - a tease can be an illustrated story.

The early teases were just captions - basically the fille name for the picture. We've come a long way, but maybe not cum all that far.

I really like these pics so I will probably redo bored and genie to be interactive - you gotta stroke to get your wishes. However, with the tools available at present - were you just get to click continue - I'm not sure how really interactive that is. Where's the free will? Or even free willy.