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Feedback for Dark Dreams
Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 5:34 am
by submatt
Hmmm ... not my best work, but I figured I'd publish it rather than delete it. Maybe some of you will like it.
Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 11:59 am
by submale01
I really enjoyed it but i seemed to get stuck in a loop. or was that the idea.
Keep up the good work
Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 3:03 pm
by LNS
I liked it. I like how you used the looping to allow it to go as long as the person wanted.
LNS
Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 3:36 pm
by JelloBoy
I didn't really care for the looping, it got mind numbing after a while - The tease needs an ending...like ending in a wet dream, or getting caught by your current gf.
Posted: Sat Jan 05, 2008 8:58 pm
by Marke
I think it is a great tease - love the frustration of the loop. Great use of the pictures of the ex. Really had a dream like feel to it as well.