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Twin's Surprise
Posted: Sun Sep 08, 2013 10:47 pm
by cactusman
I have published an original story tease:
"Twin's Surprise" http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=22662
This was to a small extent inspired by 1885's
"Sibling Rivalry" series in the sense that I had the idea when reading that series.
Comments are welcome. Enjoy!
Re: Twin's Surprise
Posted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 10:27 am
by WonderSteve
It was a good tease. Not your best work but I have high expectations of your teases which are really top notch.
I especially like your work because they feature a lot of girls with amazing legs and I love me some long legs in heels.
Big fan!
Re: Twin's Surprise
Posted: Mon Sep 09, 2013 11:54 pm
by cactusman
Thanks for the kind words.
I think that if you are particularly turned on by legs, then you should try writing your own tease that features that...
Re: Twin's Surprise
Posted: Wed Sep 11, 2013 7:05 pm
by bbman
Really love your work!
Your writing is one of the best and after every tease I look out to your next
If I were to out just a single note of critisism, it would be that I liked Spooning, Desire, and Denial better because of a more 'natural' atmosphere (sorry, don't really know how to describe it), but this would just be my own opinion anyway...
Still, a very high quality level througout the tease, so please keep them coming

Re: Twin's Surprise
Posted: Thu Sep 12, 2013 10:25 am
by cactusman
bbman wrote:Really love your work!
Your writing is one of the best and after every tease I look out to your next
If I were to out just a single note of critisism, it would be that I liked Spooning, Desire, and Denial better because of a more 'natural' atmosphere (sorry, don't really know how to describe it), but this would just be my own opinion anyway...
Still, a very high quality level througout the tease, so please keep them coming

Thanks for the kind words, I appreciate them.
Twin's Surprise, Part 2
Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2013 10:31 am
by cactusman
Twin's Surprise, Part 3
Posted: Tue Dec 17, 2013 5:38 am
by cactusman
Re: Twin's Surprise
Posted: Tue Dec 17, 2013 11:06 pm
by cactusman
I forgot to say that one obvious element in Part 3 was inspired by Salamando's story
Playful Heather. I don't want to say more, so as not to give too much away, but it will be obvious to those who have read Salamando's story.