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Please give feedback here. Tell me what you liked or didn't like, how I can improve my writing, what you'd like to see in future teases, etc. I'm open to all kinds of suggestions and discussion

I really liked it, probably my favorite tease I've seen so far

However, my posting is purely to give some appreciation in hopes It will encourage a sequel
(no one has posted here despite the rating and number of views)

Most of my opinions are irrelevent as its clear to me that my tastes are not that of the majority.
This tease appealed to me more so for whats not there then what is
I'D say more arse, and loose the string.

I would guess the majority of viewers would encourage more and more CBT as the series goes on
( I wouldn't )

I would also guess that the majority would praise the quality of the pictures (hope you have lots more)
They are hit and miss to be sure, but the hits are surprisingly well done
(some of the misses really dampen the experience)

not sure many would agree with this but i'd like to add that If you where to focus on her bum :) ....
you could use un-photoshoped pictures with girls of a similar build/hair for just a few of the pictures (never 2 in a row)

I hope to encourage you, but i'll just point out the 4.0 rating and the number of views ( well over 6000 as i type this)

good luck, hope to see more

First of all, I'd like to thank you for your feedback. I'm really happy to hear the good things you've said! As I've said, this is my first tease so far so I have literally been checking the site every couple of hours since I posted it to see the change in viewers and ratings! You're also the only one to reply to this thread, (so far, I hope), and so I was pretty much rubbing my hands together in glee when I saw the reply.

Now, about your feedback. Sadly my remaining pictures are in short supply, which is pretty much the only thing holding me back from writing a sequel. I originally intended it to be a three-day weekend, but I lacked sufficient pictures. I will wholeheartedly try to find more (not least because Emma Watson is my dream hottie celebrity ), but in the event I'm not able to find enough, sorry :'(

Second point, I, like you I'm assuming, am an ass-man. I'd rather find pictures of her butt than her breasts, but the PhotoShop artists on the web don't seem to agree I have a few other pictures of her butt, but while they are great pictures, unfortunately they have captions that don't fit with the story, are large enough to read, and cannot be cropped out.

About the hits and misses, I sure hope there were more hits than misses! And I apologise for the misses, but, well, at least I can blame inexperience.

All in all, thank you for your mostly positive review. I'm going to be researching more pictures to see if I can gather a good enough sum, but from where I'm at now it's not looking good. You or anybody else who reads this are welcome to send me some if you find any.
Cheers! ^_^

forbiddendesire wrote:I have a few other pictures of her butt, but while they are great pictures, unfortunately they have captions that don't fit with the story, are large enough to read, and cannot be cropped out.

You might be able to use google's "seach by image" (that little camera icon on the image seach box) to find versions without the captions. Also the "find similar" might get you some more.

Also, if she's a Hex-Witch, she could change the apperarance parts of her body if she wanted to

forbiddendesire wrote: About the hits and misses, I sure hope there were more hits than misses! And I apologise for the misses, but, well, at least I can blame inexperience.

With that I was talking about some of the pictures being so obviously photoshoped they looked unatural
you can't blame your inexperience because its not your doing.

If your so short on pictures better to have the iffy ones there, then to have a shorter tease

Arthurb's google idea sounds good, never used it myself but I could guess how it works
I think the software would recognise her face and a nipple then give u pictures with both
Also, if thats the case it will likely send you to a site selling bed sheets

dude, i just found a few instantly,

just google
"Emma Watson nude photoshop"

it was the first thing i typed

I put them in a 15mb Zip, (81 photos of varying quality)
I could send it if you like, but you'll come across the same ones with that search
open a few links on the first few pages of results
( there was a whole forum thread dedicated to photoshopping cum on her face)
and click the images tab under the search bar

theres a short series of "office" and "night out" type ones.
And with that much load on her face you could do a "cum eating" one ( I wouldn't do that one )
but for story consistency she could always wave her wand to change outfit/setting as arthur said

update: bcfakes.com have 1,200 of her but they don't seem to have any "series" type ones

A couple of these posts made me laugh, lol.

Thanks, arthurb, thats an idea I could try.

Also, I should clarify. When I say I couldn't find pictures of her, I mean of any good butt pictures. Like I said, I'll keep researching, so I'll check out those pictures. I found a lot of her cum-covered ones, too. I did plan on having a cum-eating sessions, but in the last part, as a wrap-up, you know, like 'she finally let's you cum, only if you eat it' kind of thing. But I didn't want to base an entire tease on those cum-covered pictures. I thought one or two would be fine, but no more.

Another thing, I was hoping people would take her being a witch as an excuse for all of her costume changes, because I couldn't find ones with the same outfit. Glad you guys got it