Milovana.com

Been on here for years and have been in sub mode all day (am a switch) so decided to write my first tease. Would love some feedback even if it is just spelling or grammar things.

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=20871

Thanks

Alex

I don't really know how to react, but I'll give it a try.
I did read it, but it actually doesn't seem like a real tease to me since there's nothing to do, just reading.
But then, I could be wrong about it not being a tease, because I don't "play" many teases (I just read a bunch).
At least a compliment about the chosen model, not perfect, but I've seen many teases with (wo)men that are much less attractive to me.

Thank you thats great! I have been in cuck mind set all day and pretty much blurted the tease out.

I appreciate your honesty and feedback :)

Alex