Milovana.com

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=20686

Great tease! Randomized games, with random outcomes, are my favorite kind of tease. I like how they are approachable for couples to play together. So thank you! I gave this one 5 stars.

Constructive feedback: I was expecting there to be special "finale" sequences -- one for each of the three possible endings. That might make the tease even better. For example...

Spoiler: show

Upon drawing the 2nd red queen, the player clicks "2 Red Queens" and goes into a multi-page, build-up-to-win finale sequence. Or...
Upon drawing the 2nd black queen, the player clicks "2 Black Queens" and goes into a multi-page, build-up-to-surprise-ruin finale sequence. Or...
Upon drawing the 5th joker, the player clicks "5" and goes into a multi-page, build-up-to-surprise-hands-off finale sequence.

In that case, you could not tell the player, in advance, which outcome is the winning outcome. So the 2 Black Queen ruined orgasm is a surprise; and the 5 Joker hands-off is also a surprise. Just a thought!

And thank you for introducing me to Amy from Spunky Angels. She's a gem, and I might use her in a tease that I'm working on!

-lmind

Just a bit of feedback:

- Shoestring is required at least for one action, but this isn't listed in the intro.(Might be annoying if you don't have some near you.)

- Since only the "joker!" button has options for orgasm, I found it unclear whether the joker had to be drawn after the queens or not. What happens when you draw two same-colored queens after you already have the joker? Do you then click the "joker!" button? If not, then the jacks that only reshuffle black cards seem underpowered as they are only advantageous if you haven't drawn a joker yet.

- I found the ending sequences a bit anti-climactic(pun intended). No teasing, no final build-up, just some pictures.