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FB: Punishment
Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2013 11:47 pm
by Tury
Lots of potential, but the bad grammar/punctuation and calling them "Photo shoots" instead of simply "outfits" nearly killed it for me.
Re: FB: Punishment
Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2013 2:47 am
by SexualChoc
I went through with a spell checker and did edit a few mistakes
and even changed "photo shoot" to outfit.
It is rare that I change spelling, or grammer.
there are a few "mistakes"left in the tease like not capitlizing
oR using Capitals in the Wrong place
but that I will take as artistic licences and part of my poerty writing style.
(note spelling mistakes left in this post on porpoise)
Thank you for the feedback!!!
Re: FB: Punishment
Posted: Tue Apr 09, 2013 7:32 pm
by Sissy_2_B_Used
Love, it crawling on the floor as I type this.