how can i improve my teases?
Posted: Sat Jan 26, 2013 11:17 am
Hello, my first tease is called "mommys little slave". I am thinking about doing anpther one, how could i improve it?
Just looked at your tease and it seems to contains quite a few ideas for tasks, but it isnt worked out at all.
- Structure your tease better, make a short intro, and if the tease spans over several days, seperate the parts clearly or make multiple teases.
- Use realistic durations. Noone wants to hit ones balls for 2 hours. Doing it probably, your balls would fall of, and otherwise its just boring. You can bring people to torture their balls for 2 hours, but you have to do so running through some storry, motivating them and take breaks...
- The formatting of your text could be nicer, use a paragraph now and then.
- Just work out your ideas better.