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Hello,
Very nice to see you again on Milovana.
First, sorry for my english (I 'm Frensh and I have not to be punished for that, no ?)
I already enjoyed Sophia and Lindsay and I promise I will try Gracie.
If you 're looking ideas for the next parts, and for me,
I 'm not easy with eating my cum.
Wearing a bra during the day is not easy too..

Just ideas...
Don't change : you 're a genius

A frensh sub

Looking forward to try it when I get the chance.

Will there be any teaseme version of this series?

This one is EXQUISITE!
The timing is perfect,
The images are tantalizing,
The way it reads my mind is amazing.

Can't wait for more!
Thanks so much,
tedy

that maybe wasn't the most 'intense' tease I would say, but it's probably the 'best' I've been teased, especially for an introduction to a series.. really good stuff.

really liked this one. Although mostly I just read through the teases, this really made me obey the commands.
as for the suggestions, it clearly depends on what you will have fun writing.
for me it would be a little more CBT, the "my husband only allows me to fool with girls" could be turned into a feminisation plot.
I would also love a series which would not focus as much on long term denial, but on uncertainity of the outcome of every day: orgasm, ruined orgams, orgasm for a price, no orgasm etc.

one thing important by series is also to have them planned in advance, so they dont abruptly end, or let people denied for weeks between the parts.

hope you have fune writing next parts, I am looking forward for them.

timing is good and the pictures are good but it was just edging.

I prefer teases where the girl talks about what she has planned for you... and this one was just really bland and quite honestly I became bored.... sorry.

As a comparison/contrast I really loved "Your Investigation" by Cactusman... which let my imagination run wild.

jayjay

Oh yes this one was really good. Thank you!!

Although I felt a bit left off when she had mercy with me and allowed me to cum.

Can't wait for another parts!

Dis one was fucken sexy.

Love it....may you do it with shemales

Well, I really like the series so far. Though, I must say, it doesn't really feel like a series since the parts are spread over "so much" time. I'm no expert on this (writing teases in time and stuff like that) but an idea would be to finish the series before releasing the first part, so it won't end up unfinished in case you're getting surprisingly busy all of a sudden. Just my two cents

But enough of that, I want to encourage you to continue your work like this. I really like your choice of model with Gracie (didn't know her before) and that other girl in the second part (whose name I forgot) is also veeery hot
Moreover, I think you did great to create the atmosphere of a little intimidation around the character of Gracie; considering the whole (light) blackmailing issue it's just the right amount.

One last thing I'd like to just put out there 'cause I'm wondering about that for the last of your teases now:
it always seemed as if you would have liked to go a little further regarding the actions and tasks in your teases but somehow you seldom did. If that's the case then the piece of advice I would like to give you is: Do it Maybe there's just a little part inside you backing out but I think you can ignore it since you clearly have the ability to write good teases.

To sum up: great work so far!