stonecutter wrote: Sun May 15, 2022 12:17 am
Keep up the good work! I'm always excited to see new e-stim content.
Here's an initial round of minor spelling, grammar, mistakes I've come across. Current line is followed up by the corrected line for each instance.
You: Yes... my firend Jack told me about this place.
You: Yes... my friend Jack told me about this place.
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Dr. Royce: I wouldn't call us that! We do however offer a service in exchange of your seed.
Dr. Royce: I wouldn't call us that! We do however offer a service in exchange for your seed.
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Dr. Royce: We will take your sperm and in excange you will be rewarded.
Dr. Royce: We will take your sperm and in exchange you will be rewarded.
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Dr. Royce: Not your common boring currency. Your reward is the absolute ecxtasy our machines will provide...
Dr. Royce: Not your common boring currency. Your reward is the absolute ecstasy our machines will provide...
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But I already told you to much!
But I already told you too much!
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You must decide now,do you want to participate to the program?
You must decide now, do you want to participate to the program?
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This is to shady, I'm out of here
This is too shady, I'm out of here
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Dr Royce: Please fill in this form while I assign you a locker number!
Dr. Royce: Please fill out this form while I assign you a locker number!
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Dr. Royce: I wish you a pleasent and productive stay.
Dr. Royce: I wish you a pleasant and productive stay.
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I am looking forward on seeing you again.
I am looking forward to seeing you again.
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Dr. Royce: Go bacl to the locker room, and from there you will get there
Dr. Royce: Go back to the locker room, and from there you will get there
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Thats why you can play a little game!
That's why you can play a little game!
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Marika: When you get it right you will earn 1 point, when you get it wrong you will loose one point.
Marika: When you get it right you will earn 1 point, when you get it wrong you will lose one point.
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Marika: But if you have less than 5 point and you make a mistake we will play a pain file for you - you don't want that, believe me
Marika: But if you have less than 5 points and you make a mistake we will play a pain file for you - you don't want that, believe me
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Marika: Remember to let us know when you came with the button on the side. So I can come to harvest your cum!
Marika: Remember to let us know when you cum with the button on the side. So I can come to harvest your cum!
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