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I found 2 bugs I think.

In the study in part 2 she says she's going to give a "quick flash" of her pussy and then next page is a 15 minute timer on one photo of her with her pussy showing.

Then in 2.3 on the stairs down there's a part where she says to stroke as fast as possible and no edging with a mystery timer, but it neverrrrr ends. Eventually I just clicked Edged to move it along...

Otherwise the teases are fantastic. Keep up the good work! I like when you do unique stuff like in the study, and some of the parts with bondage, spit, crawling like a worm, dog bowl, etc.

Some kind of option to see materials you might need at the start would be useful. One last thing, I think it'd be better if you shortened up 3 some compared to 2/2.3 and instead of making super big ones make just regular big ones and release more parts instead.

juniper wrote:I found 2 bugs I think.

In the study in part 2 she says she's going to give a "quick flash" of her pussy and then next page is a 15 minute timer on one photo of her with her pussy showing.

Then in 2.3 on the stairs down there's a part where she says to stroke as fast as possible and no edging with a mystery timer, but it neverrrrr ends. Eventually I just clicked Edged to move it along...

Otherwise the teases are fantastic. Keep up the good work! I like when you do unique stuff like in the study, and some of the parts with bondage, spit, crawling like a worm, dog bowl, etc.

Some kind of option to see materials you might need at the start would be useful. One last thing, I think it'd be better if you shortened up 3 some compared to 2/2.3 and instead of making super big ones make just regular big ones and release more parts instead.

yes you where right juniper.The first was 15 minutes instead of seconds and the 2nd was 1 hour instead of one minute that would be an accomplishment to stroke for hour hour as fast you could without edging haha.

Thanks for the feedback Juniper, very helpful!
Part 3 and 3.1 is almost ready. Although in 2 parts again they are shorter.
2 and 2.3 had a combined page total of around 1500. where as parts 3 and 3.1 have a total of about 800. Still pretty long but there are more paths. So if you take path A you don't experience path B. Where as in part 2 you had to visit every place.

Some kind of option to see materials you might need at the start would be useful.

Hmmm I thought I had included this on first page in a different colour writing (maybe not in 2.3)

deamon44 wrote: Part 3 and 3.1 is almost ready.

Great. Really looking forward to it!

come on, publish it :)

Apocalypse parts 3 and 3.1 will be posted soon.
If you find any bugs or mistakes please let me know.(I have done a few run throughs but There may be a few mistakes still.)

These teases involve cbt, humiliation , anal, chastity, and some other fetish. Some sections can be skipped e.g the anal section.

These teases are shorter than previous but are still quite long for a tease so make sure you give yourself enough time.

These 2 teases work the same as parts 2 and 2.1. They should be opened at the same time and at a point during apoc part 3 you will be asked to switch to apoc part 3.1. (once in part 3.1 you will not have to switch back to part 3).

It leads on from a pacific ending in Apocalypse part 2.3. You will have reached 1 of 3 endings.
1. stayed in the bunker with Ashley.
2. Left the bunker with Teal
3. Was exiled from bunker after being placed into a chastity.

This part follows the story from the 3rd ending, so you will be starting the tease in chastity. If you don't have a chastity belt just abstain from touching.
I am planning on following the other two tangents in subsequent parts.

However parts 3 and 3.1 can be done as stand alone teases so don't think you have to of got ending 3 in apoc part 2.3 as I would think most people did not.

Items you may need: Collar, Chastity device, 6 Nipple clamps/clothespegs, Shoelace/ribbon, Anal toy, Panties, Bra, High heels (Preferably boots), Pen and paper, cushion/pillow.

All items may not be needed and feel free to use your own substitutes and skip any parts you wish.

Enjoy!

really great

Enjoyed it

Ps: at 3.1 on page 727 is a continue button or timer to 728 missing

Spoiler: show

Also on page 733 (after you came on your hand and wanted to wash it away?) she talks about two ruined orgasm. Wasn't it just one?
Around 700 it seems to be not all correctly.
Also if choosing not to do assplay she wants you to keep the heels in your ass

Thanks frozen glad you liked it. All corrected now too

Great ! Thanks for the hard work !

It would be perfect if you could add some savepoints (for ashamed wankers like me who are unable to do it in a row )

It would be perfect if you could add some savepoints (for ashamed wankers like me who are unable to do it in a row )

Thanks Braska

I did think about doing this but I was'nt too sure where to place a save point. The length of time it takes to complete I think will vary from person to person, what route you take and if you follow all choices.
But if you could suggest an ideal place/places for a save point I would be happy to add them

Who is the girl who plays the handcuffed slut in Part 3? Love the tease BTW, really well done. I haven't run into any problems.

KirkZ wrote:Who is the girl who plays the handcuffed slut in Part 3? Love the tease BTW, really well done. I haven't run into any problems.

Aletta ocean I think

If I had to have a downside to the whole tease

Spoiler: show

is that you don't get to properly fuck the 'Slut' (Aletta ocean). I'd wish there was an option to fuck her or be tormented like in the current tease. Man it was a good swerve though! It was building up and building up and then frustration! lol.

Theres an answer hidden in the tease:
It seems that the virus could be transfered through sexual intercourse.

jp wrote:I think it would be cool to have a "cheat" menu that just links to all the various pages with a choice on them. You'll ruin the story and flow this way, but it would give an easy way to see all the paths.

Why asking for a cheat menu?
Since I guess "teases" are in fact just scripts, it should not be that difficult to have a cheat option in the first page.
Not because the author made it, but because the site offers it.
Maybe with an option in the profile to hide that button/link from teases.

awesome tease 3 and 3.1.. played it for all the endings and man i love it :D cant wait for the other parts to be released