Re: Help Me Cum Please! v2 - All welcome, join any time or just post to tease us!
Posted: Tue Jun 14, 2022 7:01 am
by LeeroyJerkins
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I like to write ... a LOT!Sorry, there's a lot to break down in that set with everything you tried and I wasn't sure if you wanted me to break it down scene by scene or if that would feel like I was critiquing your masterpiece too much.
Not everybody does, and I get that, so ... I figured you wrote what you did soon after that LONG ass set, lol, and you were tired, and ... I figured you wanted to get your feedback out ... and it was enough. 
Of course, for me, I'm a writer, and I want to become a BETTER writer, so ... when I spend THAT much time and effort on a project ... the post-set analysis is "part of the fun" for me, so ... I like looking back and critiquing, so ... thanks for humoring me and leaving SO much feedback! 
LOVE it! 
Lots of people get sensitive about their writing and get their feelings hurt easy ... I simultaneously know my stuff is GOOD and have the confidence to NOT let criticism get me down while at the SAME time, I know it's not perfect, so ... I am NOT overly sensitive and also HUNGRY to learn and make it better, so ... constructive criticism will ALWAYS win points with me, and ... I look around on this thread, and I don't see any assholes--just caring, sensitive people of good faith such as myself, so ... This is a GOOD place for criticism, IMO ...
I say, "masterpiece" because of the level of quality and time was like triple what I would do for a "normal" set, so ... it's just on another level. Honestly, I'm just publishing here, and not submitting to any REAL place that has an editor ... I would be even MORE demanding on myself if that were the case, so ... my use of "masterpiece," here, is more a RELATIVE and not "absolute" connotation ... Ultimately, only the recipient can say if I created a "masterpiece" or not ... it was "masterpiece level effort" but ... You have to take some risks and make some guesses and assumptions, and ... depending how all of that pans out for the player will determine whether or not I hit a home run ...
See, that's REALLY good to know ... I think that's probably because you are a "sub," so, domination like that is a turn off for you in a way that it might be a bonus for others, but ... also maybe you are just a good person who prefers consent!So the first scene with Sofi stripping I think it very easily could've felt uncomfortable for me with her being forced to do that and not actually want to which is a major turn off for me
See!? And that is the kind of "risks" I was talking about earlier ... lots of little things like that I just "have to guess", but ... I'm glad to know that I was RIGHT--that "Caprice" being the "acting domme in charge" would make the work ... like, had it just been Sofi on her own, stripping for you because I "made" her, THAT would have fallen COMPLETELY flat, but ... adding Caprice to that mixture worked ... See!? This is the kind of DEEP learning and analysis that you can get with good feedback!felt like Caprice was just teasing me with Sofi's body and domming me through her while maybe trying to embarrass or use Sofi as well and it worked. My instincts were correct, and it DID play out as I liked, but ... now I ALSO know something about your preferences ... This is good shit!
Yeah, that was just kind of fun and played well and flowed from the circumstances of the story ... because Sofi is a mistress at heart but a sub here through bad choices, so ... I was able to use those circumstances, and ... since you're a sub, I'm not surprised her "acting out to dom you" played so well ... it's just fun little wrinkles in the story like that that I can bring out in order to play to your preferences ... to me, that's "masterpiece level writing", because I'm telling the story *I* want to tell while ALSO tailoring it the the nuances of my audienceThen when Sofi came back to tease me with the edging rules it more felt like she was enjoying it as well and maybe a bit of her dom side coming out which was nice. ... Well done, me! 
So, the 8 edges pic ... For me, that was Caprice pushing the envelope ... She's "feeling her oats" and getting REALLY excited and ENJOYING domming two subs at once, and so, she's letting the excitement of all of that overtake her a bit and push the boundaries maybe a bit more than if she was NOT aroused and excited (and REALLY thinking things through with a calm, ethical mind) ... while at the same time, Sofi's just kind of a bitch, so ... she KNOWS this is an awkward proposition for you, so ... She is ENJOYING seeing your discomfort, and ... since she's a little sadistic, seeing your squirm at all of this is a bit titillating for her, so ... she is MORE THAN HAPPY to play along ...
I feel like "good art makes you think" and good literature puts you in situations where you have to think things through ... Since this was a "masterpiece level", I was actively looking for that kind of thing as well ... Glad to know I made you evaluate your boundaries!I was really asking myself if I would be able to fuck her on command and I came to the answer of no. If a dom ordered me to fuck another sub I couldn't do it and would have to disobey, if Sofi wasn't willing and eager for it I just couldn't do it. Seeing another girl teased and played with was nice but the I was still focused on stroking to please Caprice so that's what aroused me the most. And here, I played it conservatively and did NOT ACTUALLY put you in that situation ... just threw it out as a hypothetical, so ... while still "edgy", that brought down the level of risk that it wouldn't land ... AND I made sure that Sofi was "willing" to help keep you in the fantasy, since I DID anticipate the situation would make you feel uncomfortable ... and I ALSO picked like THE BEST Sofi pic of this photo set as well--which certainly doesn't hurt with arousal to hit those 8 edges 
... and, of course, my "ace in the hole" here was Caprice in league with your subby brain, and, once again, my gamble payed off, because "obeying Caprice" ended up being the driving factor ... AWESOME! So far, it seems that I have been doing well, and my set design calculations have been paying off!
Good to know!In principle I really like the idea, I feel it went on a bit too long. I cut back the strokes, because I was afraid of that ... I tried to find the line between "uncomfortable" and "boring", because I have played sets and web teases where the slow stroking just went on too long ... this is excellent feedback. Because you liked it, I probably WILL do it again, but ... just have it not go on for so long ... Do it more for pacing and as a QUICK trick to build anticipation while giving a LITTLE frustration without making it a full task ... If we were keeping score, I guess this would be my first "mistake" so far, which ... Hey, I'd say I'm doing pretty good!
Thanks for all this feedback, GG! I LOVE it, btw ... means a LOT to me that you would take the time to write all of this, bud!
This is very VERY good to know ... Now me, personally, this would be SHIT for meHaving my balls being punished for things other people do I really liked and is something I've been trying to write into some of my sets coming up. I do want to be punished but don't really tend to disobey or do anything to warrant punishment because I just want to please them, so someone else's mistake giving them a reason to punish me I really liked.
... Yeah, I'm a switch, but ... my subby side comes more from power games and while I DO enjoy being helpless and being "punished" ... I need a GOOD reason ... Some people like "punishment for punishment sake", but ... that is a HARD pass for me. If I am getting punished, I need a REASON, or else it just INSTANTLY strikes me as "unfair" and I get taken COMPLETELY out of the tease and lose arousal pretty bad ... I mean, yeah, I CAN be subby, but ... I just have too strong a sense of self and pride to allow myself to get taken advantage of, and then I will put my foot down and not allow it to happen (which was the EXACT situation that started the whole "Sofi saga"), so ... I will ONLY allow myself to be taken advantage of when I WANT it to happen!
But, you're subby and GOOD, so ... yeah, everything there makes TOTAL sense ... If I were you, I would add a line or two in your rules explaining this, that you LIKE being punished, but, because you are good, it doesn't happen often ... this could be a way for you to get punished more--even if it's artificial ... someone can EASILY just make up some situation where some rando sub misbehaves and YOU become the "whipping girl" ... EASY to write ... AND, bro ... I WILL remember this, and ... idk ... maybe sometime I screw up, ummm ... I just MIGHT try to get YOU to take it instead ... maybe we can even get somebody to write a "duo set" for us, where, like, we're BOTH there together (but obviously play it individually ), and the domme addresses us BOTH, but ... we both play the same set ... I have seen that done from time to time. MAYBE ... Maybe if ever Caprice agrees to become my switch-girlfriend, and I ROYALLY PISS HER OFF ... we get someone to write a set where she dommes us both, and you get some of my punishment ... idk ... just spitballing here, and, uh ... I'm a "good boy" myself ... I USUALLY don't LOOK for trouble, BUT ... it DOES have a way of finding me!
Good!Pretending to dom Sofi for Caprice with the pillow stuff is the one thing that I honestly skipped. As I have stated, one takes a LOT of risks when constructing a set like this ... some pan out, and some don't. The theme WAS "doing things you don't want to do." So, obviously, this was in the spirit of that, and Caprice was pushing boundaries ... which CAN be exciting and fun ... I wasn't sure whether or not it would land. Here, again, I thought Caprice "ordering" it might be enough, and ... that DID work with some of the other gambles, but ... UNDERSTANDABLY, this was a bridge too far ... not sorry that I tried, because good set writers HAVE to take some risks in trying to deliver "new" but ... Your response here was 100% the right call. If I "miss" like this again, then ... suspend your "good girl tendencies" and just move along again, lol! Now that I know, I will NOT be putting in stuff like this again into ANY of your future sets.
I've never had the opportunity to experience that in real life, but ... based on the number of bondage vids I have enjoyed ... I think for me, I'd be able to fuck them, but ... that's one of my kinks, and I think your reaction is ENTIRELY normal and healthy ... There IS something ... unnatural ... about fucking someone who is immobilized, even if they want it ... If anything, I would say my reaction is "depraved" and yours is more "true and good!"Even in real life I sometimes like tying up girls and teasing them cause they look hot as shit but it has to be with toys, I honestly can't even get it up to fuck them if they're tied up and wanting it, it just makes me feel weird. But, kinks are kinks BECAUSE they are taboos, so ... yup.
No need to apologize! I get that, bro!I'm sorry but you domming anyone in front of me would be a turn off for me. I figured that MIGHT be the case, which is why I left myself out of the set, other than Caprice making the odd reference to me here or there for story reasons ...
Yeah, some guys on here cuck. Some do not want to see ANY dicks on screen AT ALL ... Me, I prefer solo girl and lesbian ... If I see some OTHER guy having sex with a girl who is NOT me ... that starts to become a negative ... It isn't an instant dealbreaker for me, and POV works REALLY well for me, but ... yeah, I PREFER NOT to have "other dudes" in the scene with me, as a general rule of thumb, so, yeah, I get that, man ...
Censor_Slut mentioned in feedback to me that he would be good with me "commanding Sofi" in front of him. Skirata enjoys cucking in teases, so, my mega tease for him had a LOT of that ... Misty seemed to enjoy those scenes as well ... Not sure if you were speaking here about IRL situations or "in tease" situations, but ... I feel like this is a pretty binary sort of thing. Either you like it, or it is a BIG turn off, so ... I am NOT going to throw me "domming subs" in front of ANYONE unless I KNOW that are good with it ... That's just too big of a risk and NOT worth it
... which is why I wisely "chose Caprice" to do it for me!
Good to know!In terms of writing sets for me in the future, a quick and easy way for a guaranteed great set is take one or more of my favourites, have them be dominant and get me edging for every picture. Mix in some ballbusting and/or dressing up and end in denial or some sort of game/random chance/test for orgasm. Knowing that is your "staples" is VERY helpful ... I mean, I kind of figured, but ... Reading you state that explicitly is nice, and, yeah ... I can EASILY put something together like that with MINIMAL effort ... VERY nice to know if I want to get a quick set or return set out to ya! 
Most people use multiple girls, one for each scene. That's really common, and often a winning strategy for variety. Single model sets are ALWAYS a risk, because what if the player doesn't like the model or their personality or the story? Then, you are stuck and locked in, but ... sticking with a known winner, yeah ... it's good!
The biggest factor between a good set and great set usually comes down to the dialogue and feeling some sort of connection with the girl like BBBeanie did with Mila, Brian did with Gloria, and you did with Caprice.
I am the SAME WAY ... when I have a connection with the girl, my immersion (and enjoyment) goes WAY up ... which is one of the reasons I try SO HARD to build these characters and stories, so that people can use them and give me that experience without having to craft one from whole cloth ...
"Soft domme Gloria" is something that sounds SO INCREDIBLY HOTT TO ME!!!with Gloria as a soft dom 
Don't get me wrong ... the dominant girls are CRAZY hot and get my heart going pitter-patter, BUT ... sometimes, perhaps BECAUSE "soft dommes" are SO rare and seemingly NOT in demand on here (and I think people are less practiced at writing them or don't know how, because that is not something they personally want????), I do NOT want that "intense domination session" EVERY time ... AND, while I do NOT like ruins ... I DO like being made to ruin sometimes, and ... well, fuck ... Gloria Sol is so SMOKING HOTT ... and ... the thought of her pretty ass asking me politely to ruin OVER and OVER and OVER again for her ... idk ... Like, I like being "helpless" and someone FORCING that on me and ... getting ruined as a PUNISHMENT--while I don't like to do it--is CRAZY hot too, but ... idk ... the idea of a sweet and soft Gloria Sol, asking for ruins OVER and OVER ... like ... I want to EXPERIENCE THAT ... before I die! ... Something I DON'T want to do, but ... She wants it SO much ... and, she just MELTS MY HEART with her softness ... that, I probably do it and LOVE it anyway!
BUT ... BUT ... while that IS something I will add to my "little list of little wishes" "dream request" list ... There are some OTHER things and ideas, and, for reasons I do NOT want to discuss
(future machinations) ... I do NOT YET wish to experience that ... (Also, she HAS to give me a FULL ORGASM AT THE END for being a good boy! ) ... I got shit planned out, and, ummm ... I don't want to tip my hand, and ... a set like that would tip my hand, so ... imma wait, BUT ... at a certain moment, the time will be right ... and PERHAPS AT THAT TIME ... I will ask you or brian to write that DREAM SET for me! ... but, anyway ...
As I mentioned, the Caprice that YOU saw was my "own version" which was MOSTY based off of OG Caprice that Roundhound and Helequin popularized, so ... instead of making a "new, bespoke version" of her for you ... I kept her consistent with "my" Caprice and the one that lives in most people's heads around here ... but, THEN ... I allowed THAT VERSION of Caprice--that character--to develop a "soft spot" for you, so ... I wanted to keep the character consistent across experiences, and yeah ... Mila is CERTAINLY known for dialing her busts up and down for different players ... I like that about her!You did the same sort of thing with Caprice and I think I picture Caprice as harsher and meaner I guess which is the feeling I got in the beginning and I think you softened it for me by the end.
Moving forward, idk ... You're getting "the same Caprice as everyone else" from me. I don't want to necessarily make a "different version" of my favorite characters for each person, but, rather ... I guess I want them to "modify" their relationship with each person ... keep the core of the character intact, and change the relationship ... in practice, it is the EXACT SAME THING as "softening" but ... just the principle and philosophy of it is different ...
Honestly, whether you get the "harder" portrayal of Caprice (that I feel she projects to the world and the other girls and players on the thread) or, if she is REALLY warm towards you and begins the set that way ... I think that will depend upon her "mood" that day ... Some of the girls don't care about "image." For me--at least my version of Caprice--does. She likes that other people perceive her as "dominant and powerful." She likes the respect she gets from that, the prestige of having a reputation as an "alpha." It creates a certain expectation that people have of her and generates a certain "reverence." Not everyone cares about that. For example, Malena is more internally motivated and principle-driven, whereas Mia (for me) is more carefree and just not caught up in that ... Whether she intentionally developed it or it was just given to her, Caprice has a certain reputation. She's aware of it. She would like to maintain it, because she sees the benefit of it. She is not ONLY about reputation and image, but, it IS a factor for her ... which makes sense to me. I mean, even in that early set YOU wrote for me, she was set on "defining roles." *I* was to be the "sub" and "she" was to be the mistress, and these boundaries and roles were to be accepted ... now, some people could have interpreted that as "She is a rules follower and values "order" and "roles" and the "chaos" and shirking rules bothered her on a fundamental level", but ... I didn't go for that. My interpretation was that she just had an "awareness" of image, and a disobedient sub who refuses to submit to her just makes her look bad ... and so, for me, one of the reasons Caprice has been fence sitting with my proposal is that she is doing the math in her head ... "How does going switch-switch with Leeroy affect my reputation?" And if the answer is "it hurts it", then, is that balanced out by the benefits? Does having a "switch-boyfriend" who truly cares about her make it worth it? Is she REALLY secretly just DYING to let her locked up subby side out, that it becomes worth it ... does coming out of the closet as a sub hurt her reputation with the thread? And then, if she DOES learn that, instead, a switch-switch relationship with Leeroy is a BENEFIT, well ... she's not vapid and ONLY concerned with "image" and "popularity" ... Does being a "sub" to an over-the-top, lovable goofball like Leeroy betray her sensibilities of what it means to be an "alpha domme mistress?" Even if it benefits her image, would agreeing to be a sub to ANYONE betray her core principles and identity of being a superior domme--as she believes she is, so ... There are a LOT of layers to it, and ... as I keep saying, it will be interesting to see what she chooses ...
And so, yeah ... the "Caprice" you get from me will depend on her mood that day ... She could be "harsh and Mean" ... she could just simply be "demanding", because she considers herself to have high standards and will make you work to meet them in order to get your reward (I mean, that's how it is with alpha personalities, right? They demand a LOT From themselves AND those around them) But, at the same time, perhaps she is just stressed and needs to unwind, and so, a softer, more affectionate session with you is what she REALLY NEEDS that day and is what you get ... I try to make my characters multi-dimensional, which can help to make them unpredictable while feeling "real," because instead of just being "purely random" you can craft "reasons" for why they do certain things ... If we play long enough, eventually, I think you will get EACH of those sessions from her ...
But, as for "punishments" ... I don't see Caprice as sadistic or moody or "random" enough to just assign you "punishments" without cause ... other dommes sure, but ... to me, she's too much of a perfectionist to behave that way ... you got a pretty decent chance of getting a "punishing" set from her in terms of "difficulty", just because of how she is ... between her "intense and dominant" demeanor and high standards, I can have her EASILY deliver another "exhausting" session for you, but ... if you want that "thrill" and "immersion" experience of "getting punished" ... at least from me, that will require some "story reasons" ...
My advice? Be good to her. I feel like Caprice is one of those people who holds most people at arms length. The ONLY people she lets get close to her are the ones she deems "worthy"--"quality people" of substance with superior character and attributes ... other more "average" people are out there, and she is not going to look down on them, but ... The people she is going to let into her inner circle ... it won't just be ANYONE ... which I think is ALSO why she is hesitant about letting "Leeroy" into her life like that (Here I speak more of the "Leeroy character" I like to "role play" and "cosplay as" when playing and writing sets ...) She values loyalty, so, if she chooses to let you in, don't betray her ... I say keep being a "good girl" for her, and ... if you REALLY want her to punish you ... let it be a natural screw-up on your part ... have somebody "frame you" or be the "whipping girl" ... just my two cents since I'm getting VERY deep into the role play here, haha!
4) Good to know. Sometimes, I find for myself, that actually saying it out loud REALLY adds a LOT to the levels of immersion ... I know how powerful that can be for certain people, so, I always roll the dice and include shit like that in sets, because it can REALLY ramp it up for some people, but ... knowing it's a "meh" for you, I won't go out of my way to include it, but ... in general, it's low hanging fruit, and from set writer to set writer, I suggest throwing it into your sets from time to time.
Yeah, "simulating" versus fellatio on a living, breathing girl you can touch, feel, and LISTEN to ... yeah.but I got a bit bored pretending to do the act itself for minutes on end.
I was COMPLETELY shooting in the dark with that one ... 5 minutes is a LOT longer than I thought you would first go! Going that long on the first one ... yeah ... glad you dialed it back! I'm writing the set for you ... if something like THAT is just not working, then ... unless it is an explicit "punishment" I would say just pass on it as you did
Excellent feedback! Yeah, I knew you really liked it, but ... I never saw the sets or feedback where it was implemented, and honestly, never EVER included it in a set before for anyone else, so ... I'll keep it moving forward, but, I'll keep the times WAY down and use it more as a "seasoning" than a "staple", since as you said, it just does NOT translate well in this medium ... unless, I mean, you bought an ACTUAL pocket pussy (which some people do!So that was something while I really like the idea of just doesn't necessarily translate to this type of medium for me which isn't your fault.) and some people REALLY like sucking on dildos, so ... but yeah, I'll keep it more "ornamental" moving forward ...
Good to know about Sofi ... Yeah, she can get pretty cheeky, heh heh ... Interested just in general your reaction AND of other people ... always "fishing for winners" ... I won't go out of my way to include her, but ... if for story or plot reasons I decide to include her in a set, well ... knowing that she's "just okay" or whatever ... I can include her in a scene and not feel bad ... if you were REALLY negative on her, I would COMPLETELY block her out, and if you REALLY liked her, I would go out of my way to include ... it's just I developed her and spent time on that, so ... it's easy to include her more if you were interested ...
She's not "goddess tier" pretty for me, but ... I'd say she's an 8.5. She's got BIG 'ole titties--which, as an ass man, I'm usually just neutral on! I think her face IS really pretty, and she DOES have a GREAT ass ... usually models work for several years, and during that time their bodies can change ... in some photo sets (probably when she was a little younger) she was JUST A BIT skinnier than in some of those sets she was in for you ... She was a little "healthier and fuller" in the 1st, 3rd, and 4th photo sets ... but, in that 2nd STAIRS set! She was just a bit thinnier, and she jumped to like a 9 or 9.5 for me ... those poses were FIRE ... she showed off her ass ... bigger features aren't necessarily an instant winner for me, but ... when they are on a thinner, smaller frame ... YES! Big girls OFTEN have big asses, but, not always ... lotta like, twerk videos are just "okay" for me ... because the girls are too big ... but DAMN do those skinny booty bitch RUSSIAN girls ... when THEY twerk! That's why I say "SBBs" and "bubble butt honeys" ... I like a bubble butt, but ... just asses in general are great, and "normal sized" girls with big or round asses and nice, too ...
Sofi smirks A LOT ... Girls with cute, radiant smiles melt my heart ... Caprice is SO great, because she has range ... she can flash a cute smile AND give a "dominant look" in the same set ... Malena often has "resting bitch face" which is GREAT when you need an "intense" scene with her (and her "intense" looks are ALWAYS smoldering hot), but ... that warm, natural smile doesn't always come easily to her (Malena OFTEN has some awkward, unnatural smiles or ones that look kinda fake), as it does to other girls like Nancy Ace, who just ALWAYS smiles sweetly So, Sofi's smirk OFTEN comes off as disingenuous ... which makes it GREAT to write her as "bitchy and mean and conniving" ... good traits for a "nemesis-sub" ... not the best for a regular or "goddess girl"--at least for me ... But, I think she's pretty hot. Digging her character ... FEEL FREE to include her in sets for me!
Understood!The ballbusting was on the very mild side for me.
I could definitely take a lot more and harder but I don't think this set needed or was missing ballbusting.
Yeah, like, a few pics had a LOT of instructions, but ... sounds like it was fine, and I will keep that tool in muh set construction toolbox for you ... some people get bored easily with a single pic, but ... when I do that, I DO try to find those "most excellent" pics8) Do you mean just being told to edge like 5 times for one pic? As long as it's a good pic I don't have a problem with that at all. Not every pic but mixed in is absolutely fine
Yeah, so, ruining is a fairly common punishment around here ... Since you're new to web teases, that makes sense that you don't have a lot of experience with it ... Yeah, that story you shared is kind of funny and amusing, and yeah ... makes sense ... just "orgasm and let go" ... ahahahaha ... yeah, trying to "salvage it" haha ... yeah ... let go cause you failed, then tried to salvage, then felt bad about the whole thing ... That's classic bro! ... Maybe I'll "try it out" on you some time ... We'll see ... (when you are LEAST expecting it ... MUHAHAHhahahahahaah 
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But, yeah, the POINT is that you release but miss out on the pleasure of the orgasm because you aren't stroking ... sometimes, it is GOOD, because it releases SOME pressure, so, if you are getting denied long term, a ruined orgasm can bring SOME relief, but ... in my experience, if you are planning to cum AGAIN in the same session ... it SUCKS ... because now you have less cum saved up, so ... your NEXT orgasm will NOT be quite as powerful or pleasurable
... Helequin says it is a worse punishment than ending with denial, because you achieve PARTIAL release but not full, so ... you end up even MORE frustrated because you are STILL worked up but didn't fully release, and just staying denied doesn't ramp up the sexual excitement quite as much, so walking away fully denied is easier ... of course, after a ruin, the refractory period is shorter, so ... you can "keep going" FAR more easily after a ruin than a full orgasm ...
I don't mind them, personally, though they are REALLY frustrating ... They are good as a punishment for me ... I would normally NOT ask for them under typical conditions! Some guys LOVE them though ... for various reasons ...
Good to know ... I, uhhh ... I know a domme on this website who is known for edge holding ... probably not any time soon, but ... I might have her come by and "train" you someThe teasing was good. I might be willing to try being trained on them a bit. I just really suck at holding the edge so it's more something I need to be walked through which you did and was good. ... but, yeah, to REALLY "enjoy" them, you have to be PRACTICED, and YES ... it DOES require practice! I mean, I was on this site for YEARS before joining up here on this thread, so ... I know what's up ...
Long edge holding (like 1 to 3 or more minutes) is it's own kind of "heaven/hell" experience ... it's NOT something that I typically "ask" for, because, it is NOT fun, lol ... but at the same time it IS! And I LOVE it! BUT ... it has to be DONE RIGHT ... The worst kind is just static picture, hold for 3 minutes ... THAT sucks, but ... schefflera actually does a WONDERFUL job of executing long edge holds in his Karissa's Maze tease. Two of the "random maze girls" do it, but ... the problem there, is those are NOT for the "novice" as they are CRAZY long ... AND ... not ONLY do you have to be practiced and know your body and have control to be able to sustain a long edge hold and NOT go too close and NOT stay too far and flex your kegel's the right amount and manage your arousal and stroking to "ride that edge" and stay on the edge and NOT fall off ... and THEN, your stamina in the moment matters a LOT, because later on when you are fatigued, it is a DIFFERENT amount of arousal and manual stimulation ... basically, it just takes experience, AND ... it actually DOES take some effort to pull it off properly in a tease ... because you gotta get in the person's head to REALLY sell the experience ... you need to either use some spoilers cleverly OR some coding to get the timings right in an EoS tease ... but WHEN it is done right ... YES!! It is NOT usually done here in this thread very often, but ... yeah. At SOME point, I might run you through that ... "add it to the list" i guess!
Glad the ending worked! Will keep that stuff in mind for the future ...
I'm an "idea man" ... just give me some time ... I got to many other things going on right now, but ... I think I can make this work ... but, right now, I'm kinda "managing Malena" for Misty and ALSO planning for the "Malena and Leeroy's 5 Day Set", but ... I am envisioning some ways to make this happenA punishment and homework like that really turns me on, I've just been too much of a good girl to be hit with that yet.
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Yeah, I wasn't thinking about how much you were denied beforehand!I definitely think you're right and cumming would've been a punishment there but also necessary before the denial given how long it'd already been for me. And I also think it's nice that even if I hadn't enjoyed the ruin that she would've been ok with me trying for her. Glad I got you "figured out enough" to know that full orgasm WOULD have been a punishment!
All I'm going to say is, beware of any "dark horse mistresses" I bring along to tease youso it'd have to be with someone else
and was hoping to see her at some point and you certainly delivered.
I feel ya.I'm going to be slowing down my writing on here I think. My sets haven't been nearly up to my standard lately and have been more quantity over quality and I've just spent so much time that I need to do other stuff too. Don't ever let this fantasy Internet forum get in the way of you living your REAL, ACTUAL LIFE!
So, I'm trying to do the opposite of you ... I want to stay active, but, I want to INTENTIONALLY "drop my quality" and put out more "quantity" ... and I am HOPING that, when I STOP spending STUPID amounts of time on single sets, JUST focusing on cheap and easy sets will allow me to play more while ALSO freeing up more time in total ... I mean ... I coulda pumped out like 8 "crappier" sets (compared to my "masterpiece level" ones) in the time it took me to write this one, so ... I've got other WAY MORE IMPORTANT shit to do as well, haha, so ... I am HOPING this new "strategy" will work the way I hope--fingers crossed! I just need to finish "getting caught up" and then HOPEFULLY things will die down a bit ...
Yeah, so, hold off on that ... Caprice may be close to accepting my decisionI had an idea for you a while back that involved me trying to write some girls as subs because that would be something new and interesting for me.
... I think Ecik is working on a set for me now that my last letter FINALLY got published, lol ... I really don't want to start actively recruiting subs until I get an answer from her
I AM planning an everyone "experimental set", where I try out a BUNCH of different set writing "domme techniques" ... I think I have like 7 I want to try, but ... MAYBE in two weeks I will have that out? Maybe? Idk.
Anyway, there will be more clear guidance and suggestions on how to write "dom scenes" both for myself and others ... I just need time to put it together ... probably hold off on writing "subby girls" until I get that shit out, BUT ... actually ... before I started responding to THIS ... I was in the middle of "updating my rules." I put in a VERY detailed request for a "dom scene" involving Sofi--a DIRECT follow up from your last set! It has some "proto rules" for writing dom scenes for me ... feel free to grab that "job request!" But, AFTER the experimental set, I will begin ACTIVELY "recruiting subs" so ... later will be a better chance for that ...
Agreed. 100%!It's kinda interesting, we both joined around the same time and since then we've been 2 of the most active people on here and I think shaping things a bit in our own ways.
Shock and awe, bro ... shock and aweYour first post on here I really wanted to say "Yo, is this guy ok?" lol. ...
I mean, I'll be honest ... it's a character. "Leeroy Jerkins" is a character I am role playing ... I usually stay in character, but ... for shit like this and it gets real ... I just break character and "play myself."
Well, CLEARLY you have not yet read the THIRD, because THAT ... that is THE BEST ONE YET!!And your first letter to Caprice was hilarious, I couldn't stop laughing
The mini-set is comedic GOLD ... I don't even know if you should "try playing it" ... it is SO fucking funny ... WOW! I think just read it first, and THEN try playing it after, but ... you might actually have trouble maintaining an erection because you're laughing too hard ... idk ... Like, seriously, I must have read it half a dozen times since I posted it, and just laughed at my own jokes EVERY fucking time! SOOOOoOOoooooo much fun 
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Certainly does ... MUCH appreciated, GG!Hopefully that answers your questions and gives you more insight from my perspective.
BTW ... how has the template helped with your time?
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