Milovana.com

@Ecik17 fb on everyone set:

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Nice reintroduction to the lust b&b. I went through all the rooms and enjoyed it. Nancy A is always incredible. I decided not to cum at the end despite being incredibly horny. Maybe I’ll break down and use it but I also like being kept in this state and being used. My favourite pics:

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#Ecik17Set
#WBGoodGirl

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Before the set:

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I haven’t wrote a lust b&b set before so let me know how it is if I’m doing it right. I tried to follow the same general format as the everyone set. Funnily enough I was just finishing up when I saw your set for me so I’m posting this and then doing that set tonight hopefully.

Set:

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Welcome to the lust B&B slut

I should thank you for helping me show it off with me as the new owner

But today you’re a guest

Another patron has generously paid to bring you here and has set up some packages for you

She didn’t have any money so she offered up her services as compensation

She said we could tie her up and use her however we wanted, really let her have it, that she would be our bitch for as long as we want

Of course we were already going to reward you with a free visit here for helping out, but she just wouldn’t stop talking

And who am I to deny such a slut who would willingly submit herself to us like that? Especially seeing her clit leaking through her panties

So hopefully you like what we’ve selected for you today

You can check out all of the areas or only a few but it may impact the end result

Good luck

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Voyeurism room:

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Here we’ve got a room with all glass windows so you can look in and see what’s going on inside

Today some groups of lesbians have decided to have some fun in there

They get turned on by having people watch them

So just watch and stroke and enjoy

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Dungeon:

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We’ve got 3 doms using the dungeon to play with visitors today

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Welcome. It’s good to see some fresh meat *she smirks

Get on your knees and switch to pain mode












Squeeze your balls tightly and hold them like that until I say otherwise

I didn’t say you could stop stroking though

Pull your balls further away from your body and stroke fast

Does that make it hard not to edge?

Then you aren’t squeezing hard enough

You can let go now. Go back to normal pain mode










You need to learn your place

Worship my heels like you would my pussy and edge for them

Imagine me stepping on you and kicking your balls with them until you beg for mercy

Massage room:

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Here you can have a nice sensual relaxing massage by a beautiful woman

While you watch other women get massaged

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All of a sudden the lights go out and you hear a click as all of the doors lock trapping you in this room. You hear Nancy’s voice playing through a PA system
“While this is the massage room, the girls here don’t particularly like the idea of happy endings

In fact they hate that men expect that of them

So at the last second they take their happy ending away from them

Are you catching on yet? The only way to get out of this room is to ruin 2 times

That’s right. Take as long as you want if you need to. Ruin to these pictures or this video or anything else that you like, but you can’t leave this room until you’ve ruined 2 times”
https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php ... 054060d7f

Nancy A’s room:

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What are you doing here?

My room isn’t supposed to be on the tour

I was just getting ready to meet you at your next room

You barged into my room uninvited, I should punish you for that…

But I think I will punish the person who paid for this trip instead

I know how desperate and horny she is already, it makes me so wet thinking about what I’m going to do to her to punish her for your mistakes

She can be a good girl she wants but I can punish her for any rules you break while you’re here

I might as well give you a show seeing as you’re here

And you’d better be on your best behavior or I’ll make sure that good girl never cums

So edge nice and hard for my sweet pussy

Done exploring the rooms:

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Explored 1-2 rooms:

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Wow, we put this together for you and you don’t wanna play with us?

Then we don’t wanna play with you either. Put your cock away, you’re denied

Explored 3 rooms:

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Not bad. Get to the edge and hold it…

Keep holding it…

Ruin it and hands off!

Explored all 4 rooms:

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Congratulations, you’ve earned a full orgasm!

You can go back and cum to your favourite picture

My Rules:

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Base rules:

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Will use these until I'm warmed up then it'll switch to edge slut mode. It will switch automatically once I’m TOLD to edge the first time in a set unless you state otherwise. Stacking rules still apply to every other mode
25 strokes per image clothed
50 strokes per image nude
1 edge for every 10/10 picture (stacks with all other rules)
1 edge for fishnet or garter with thigh highs or any lingerie that I find incredibly sexy (stacks with other rules)
5 ball slaps for high heels/femdom outfit
5 ball slaps for abs
Anybody on my list can be referred to as a mistress and they can add rules as you please except ruins so feel free to be creative and if I like it I will add it to my rules for that model.

Edge Slut Mode:

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This will now be my default mode once I'm warmed up unless you state otherwise. I love being taken out to be played with, having my brains edged out and denied
1 edge for every picture (stacks with any other rules)

Ballbusting Mode:

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10 hard ball slaps per picture (can be paired with other modes or can be used without touching my cock(default))
String can be used to tie up my balls if told to for hits but I don’t want to cum with them tied up
Ballcrusher mode: replace slaps with 20 seconds per image at whatever tightness you choose, default is hard. Cannot edge with it on, I can use precum to play with my head or not touch at all
Clothespins for my nipples or elsewhere can be used

Feminization Mode:

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This mode is all about me being extremely subby and wanting to be treated like a girl. It can be used to make me wear a bra, panties, bikini, heels, leggings, or sexy bodysuit, a collar, refer to my cock as “clitty”, suck on a dildo (bad dragon medium orochi), make me stroke on my knees, play with my nipples, tie me up with bondage rope, or eat any precum that comes out. There’s not really any set rules, it’s entirely up to the mistress to decide what they tell me to do. I like the idea of sucking a strap on or being forced to eat a girl out. I’m not really in a place where I can do anal stuff at the moment but have before and would like to again at some point. This mode can be paired with any other mode

Favourites:

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Mila Azul: +1 hard punch per picture (stacks with other rules)
Emily Bloom: +1 edge per picture (stacks with other rules)
Gloria Sol: will simulate licking her pussy for 30 seconds if she shows a close up of it before doing my strokes/edges/ball slaps for the image
Aleksa Slusarchi
Nancy A: +1 edge for her bare feet. +1 brutal hit to the balls if she’s wearing heels
Rilee Marks
Malena Morgan
Killer Katrin
Dainty Wilder
Krystal Boyd
Little Caprice
Elena Generi
Lexi Belle
Piper Fawn
Ekaterina Chernysheva aka Katti Colour
Gillian Barnes
Veronica Radke
Addie Andrews
Sabrina Lynn
Aidra Fox
Naomi Swann
Anya Olsen
Bryci
Eva Elfie
Alisa Amore
Eva Lovia
Elle Alexandra
Melena Maria
Katie Banks
Kendra Sunderland
Anastasia Morna
Niemira
Elle Tan
Katya Clover
Alix Lynx
Hailey Leigh
Hunter Leigh
Tori Black
Marta Gramova
Whitney Westgate – “The Destroyer” can punish or obliterate my balls how she sees fit
Carisha Maja
Liya Silver

General Idea:

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I love being edged and denied. I may regret this but I want to be denied 80% of the time. I would like sets to either end in a full orgasm or denial. I like to feel like I’ve earned my orgasm with edges. I like games with a chance to cum. I like mind games and I want it to feel like everything I’m doing is for their pleasure or them using me for what they want. If I’m denied I like homework tasks like edges per day. I typically don’t go longer than a week without cumming. I like lots of stroking and edging as we well as cbt. I am a sub that likes being told what to do and pleasing mistresses and treated like a good girl or pet. I really like girls forcing me to eat their pussy. I would like to be referred to as good girl, slut, little toy, my pet, slave, or stuff to that effect. Preferred pics are solo, femdom, lingerie, or lesbian. In order I prefer face, tits, slim body, pussy, then ass

Dislikes:

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Ruined orgasms, holding edges, cuckhold, scat/piss, pictures with guys in them

Punishment:

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If someone’s set makes me cum without permission, anyone can make me a punishment set where they can test the limits or break any rules and pretty much do whatever they want as long as it’s not in my dislikes. For example they could test the limits with extreme ballbusting or long denial period, etc.
The same punishment applies if I am told to cum and I disobey and don’t.

@Ecik17 fb on devastating set!

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Wow, that was really good! Thank you! Malena was very sexy. I decided to go shopping with her first and then visit the lust b&b. I was really hoping I would be able to also meet her friend so was glad to be able to do that as well. Caprice is on my favourites so the 2 of them together was incredible! I really liked the added rule for Malena and have added it for her in my rules. 5 seconds was nice but doable. 10 seconds... after being seriously horny before the set and then edging that much, I would start stroking fast and be edging within 3-5 seconds. I had a timer going to make sure I hit the 10 seconds and really struggled, I had to stop and take some deep breathes a few times to get through the final section. So I edged almost as much with that rule as I did with my edge for every pic rule because sometimes I'd fail 2-3 times on one pic edging from barely touching. So that was really enjoyable. Of course I will be a good girl and won't cum without permission so of course I will listen and be denied, I'm just incredibly horny and subby lol I'll do whatever the girls want
My favourite photos:

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In total I did 62 edges plus a great deal more from Malena's stroking rule, 80 medium ball slaps from heels, 60 hard slaps while shopping (I chose green), and 4 hard ball punches for Mila. Again, thank you for the really good set!

My Rules:

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Base rules:

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Will use these until I'm warmed up then it'll switch to edge slut mode. It will switch automatically once I’m TOLD to edge the first time in a set unless you state otherwise. Stacking rules still apply to every other mode
25 strokes per image clothed
50 strokes per image nude
1 edge for every 10/10 picture (stacks with all other rules)
1 edge for fishnet or garter with thigh highs or any lingerie that I find incredibly sexy (stacks with other rules)
5 ball slaps for high heels/femdom outfit
5 ball slaps for abs
Anybody on my list can be referred to as a mistress and they can add rules as you please except ruins so feel free to be creative and if I like it I will add it to my rules for that model.

Edge Slut Mode:

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This will now be my default mode once I'm warmed up unless you state otherwise. I love being taken out to be played with, having my brains edged out and denied
1 edge for every picture (stacks with any other rules)

Ballbusting Mode:

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10 hard ball slaps per picture (can be paired with other modes or can be used without touching my cock(default))
String can be used to tie up my balls if told to for hits but I don’t want to cum with them tied up
Ballcrusher mode: replace slaps with 20 seconds per image at whatever tightness you choose, default is hard. Cannot edge with it on, I can use precum to play with my head or not touch at all
Clothespins for my nipples or elsewhere can be used

Feminization Mode:

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This mode is all about me being extremely subby and wanting to be treated like a girl. It can be used to make me wear a bra, panties, bikini, heels, leggings, or sexy bodysuit, a collar, refer to my cock as “clitty”, suck on a dildo (bad dragon medium orochi), make me stroke on my knees, play with my nipples, tie me up with bondage rope, or eat any precum that comes out. There’s not really any set rules, it’s entirely up to the mistress to decide what they tell me to do. I like the idea of sucking a strap on or being forced to eat a girl out. I’m not really in a place where I can do anal stuff at the moment but have before and would like to again at some point. This mode can be paired with any other mode

Favourites:

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Mila Azul: +1 hard punch per picture (stacks with other rules)
Emily Bloom: +1 edge per picture (stacks with other rules)
Gloria Sol: will simulate licking her pussy for 30 seconds if she shows a close up of it before doing my strokes/edges/ball slaps for the image
Aleksa Slusarchi
Nancy A: +1 edge for her bare feet. +1 brutal hit to the balls if she’s wearing heels
Rilee Marks
Malena Morgan
Little Caprice
Killer Katrin
Dainty Wilder
Krystal Boyd
Eva Lovia
Elena Generi
Lexi Belle
Piper Fawn
Melena Maria: stroke as fast as possible for 10 seconds whenever I see her before doing my rules. If I edge, repeat
Ekaterina Chernysheva aka Katti Colour
Gillian Barnes
Veronica Radke
Addie Andrews
Sabrina Lynn
Aidra Fox
Naomi Swann
Anya Olsen
Bryci
Eva Elfie
Alisa Amore
Elle Alexandra
Katie Banks
Kendra Sunderland
Anastasia Morna
Niemira
Elle Tan
Katya Clover
Alix Lynx
Hailey Leigh
Hunter Leigh
Tori Black
Marta Gramova
Whitney Westgate – “The Destroyer” can punish or obliterate my balls how she sees fit
Carisha Maja
Liya Silver

General Idea:

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I love being edged and denied. I may regret this but I want to be denied 80% of the time. I would like sets to either end in a full orgasm or denial. I like to feel like I’ve earned my orgasm with edges. I like games with a chance to cum. I like mind games and I want it to feel like everything I’m doing is for their pleasure or them using me for what they want. If I’m denied I like homework tasks like edges per day. I typically don’t go longer than a week without cumming. I like lots of stroking and edging as we well as cbt. I am a sub that likes being told what to do and pleasing mistresses and treated like a good girl or pet. I really like girls forcing me to eat their pussy. I would like to be referred to as good girl, slut, little toy, my pet, slave, or stuff to that effect. Preferred pics are solo, femdom, lingerie, or lesbian. In order I prefer face, tits, slim body, pussy, then ass

Dislikes:

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Ruined orgasms, holding edges, cuckhold, scat/piss, pictures with guys in them

Punishment:

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If someone’s set makes me cum without permission, anyone can make me a punishment set where they can test the limits or break any rules and pretty much do whatever they want as long as it’s not in my dislikes. For example they could test the limits with extreme ballbusting or long denial period, etc.
The same punishment applies if I am told to cum and I disobey and don’t.

FB for GG's awesome set

GoodGirl wrote: Fri Jun 03, 2022 1:05 am

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Thanks for the set GG! Really enjoyed the build up with Liya, she looked so demanding. I really enjoyed stroking for Melena, it was the perfect warmup! Alexa's sex scene was very hot, too. That cumshot at the end almost made me lose it! Then Megan, haven't seen her for a while, she looked stunning and that scene was sooo challenging with all the edges. I really have to think about my rules because I was basically on the edge for the entire part. I was so happy to see Gloria again, some soft action to change the pace, and normally she is very nice to me. But I feared for the worst and she did seem a little jealous and meaner. That ruin was very clever and devastating, I hope I made up for not ruining last time.

However I must say, it was more intense ruining that way with the slaps, so I did have a harder time to get going again (my ruins need some practice I guess . I took a short break to calm down as I was too sensitive. Lily's scene was very cool and to her satisfaction I was still sensitive for the palming . The lesbian cuck scene was awesome! I was back to edging in no time - and desperate, and then suddenly Caprice came back. Oh wow, she really is mad right now . Awesome ending, I was really hoping to get out and cum but I was denied by her and fear for the worst going forward!

Great set, thank you very much!

Feedback on Goodgirls set

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Thanks for the set, and I liked the setting of the lust B&b! I hope others get to use it over time! I went to 3 of the 4 rooms. Went first to the dungeon…bryci was my favorite here…Second was the Nancy’s room…I have to make a rule for her. Third was the massage room…I really like the idea of “trapping a player” by not letting them leave until they do an action. I ruined twice, once to te video, and again to this photo

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At this point, I was almost empty, so I went back to Nancy to finish the set….and got a third ruin! So all in all, very empty, but still horny…

Favorite photos

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My rules
My rules (major revisions)

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I enjoy lots of stroking, a little bit of pain, edging, predicaments, unwinnable games, being punished for edging, and choices/homework. While I like glamour shots and models, I also like nasty stuff Bondage…bdsm…cumshots…milfs…bbc..gangbangs,thicc women, humiliation, etc… so if you have a lewd idea, go for it! Of if you are not sure, send me a pm with your idea, I’d be happy to respond! I’m also Open to alternative rules...feel free to stick with these or invent something entirely different! Also, love fun ongoing storylines..,but please keep them short, (1 to 3 set max)if you want to go this route. I also do not mind just straight up photos, as in the original spirit of this thread!

No hentai please.

Basic rules to make a set

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TLDR: post photos…make up a fun storyline around them…or just post photos. Orgasm is up to model.


Stroking per model

Blondes 10
Redheads 15
Brunettes 10
Other color 5
Tits (pair) 15
Nude 20
Nude with heels 25

Edging
I can only edge for pussy, or cum:
Pussy 1 edge
Cum - 1 edge
Edging without permission - if I edge before finishing my strokes, I hold the edge for the remainder.
Edging for favorite photos - after every set, I must provide feedback, and edge for every photo I really liked. This happens after the set.
Orgasms
Default is denial, but orgasms can be directed by models within the tease. Can take multiple ruins.

Wildcards
You can add up to 3 wildcards to modify the rules above, or make your own! Some fun rules in the past that I liked included: Bpm for stroke speed, Trading pain for edging, and edge ladders,for example.

Because I switch…
I’m not truly a submissive…the first time any model has a minimum of 2 photos back to back..if I think I’d dominate her, I double my strokes for her second photo. If I’d sub to her, all strokes are replaced with light ball slaps for the second photo

Videos
Default is to stroke 1 time per second, edge 1 time every 1 minutes. videos/pmvs/ audio is all good, (for videos, please keep to under 20 minutes, please, unless it fits with a specific story)

Looking for an idea for a fun storyline or mini Game? Try these…or make up your own! (All optional)

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Melena Maria Rya wants me to edge more

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Melena thinks I am boring, and needs more edge categories! She always has new ideas of things I should edge to…

The lust BnB.

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Owned by Nancy ace, the lust B&b is a place where all your dreams come true, through themed packages. Last time I was there, Nancy ruined my orgasm

Angela white is angry!

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Angela white is mad at me! For what? It could be a lot of things…The last time Angela was mad at me, she locked me in her basement and teased me for days with lots of homework.

France vs. England

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The two countries are fighting over who has the hottest models, and I am the judge. Last time they “fought”, it was a tie. Of course, they can set up their own mini competitions on how to settle their arguement…

France 1
England 1

Extra stuff (all optional)

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Special category (changes often based on my interest)

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Oil/lube 1 edge

Pain mode I like it, but not all of the time. If a model demands it, will follow these rules instead on top of my existing rules

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1 ball slap after every photo
Edges without permission- slap balls for remaining strokes
Blowjobs: add one clothespin. It stays until the end of the set.
Hardcore: slap balls once (escalates until,the end of the set)

* Homework assignments in case you want to leave something extra…

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None right now..

Favorites most of my favorites have a special rule attached to them. Dont feel like you have to only use my favorites…you can use your own, or someone new!

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Angela white - my absolute favorite. triple edges for cum
Nancy ace - runs the lust b&B. If she is in the lust B&B, her strokes double
Melena maria - adds a category to edge to
Others I’d like to see
Yui Komine
Amber rayne
Scarlit scandal
Gia derza
Yui Komine
Abella danger
Adriana checkic
Elsa jean
Kenzie reeves
Emily willis
Brooklyn chase
Lexi luna
Red fox
Capri

Toys

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Crop, clothespins, rubber bands, rope, icy hot, fleshlight, buttplug

#BBBeanie Set
#WBCensor_Slut

Before Set

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Here is a set for you. I hope you enjoy it, looking forward to whatever you were planning to send my way. I went with the number of hits idea, so I hope I understood your rules correctly. Regardless hope you enjoy it.

Set

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Hey BBBeanie, lets have some fun

The beach is so much fun, don't you like it.









































Well that's all for today

I cant wait for our next meeting

Hey! Yo! How's everybody doing!? I'm alright. Doing just fine. Got some free time ... just writing some sets and chillin like a villain!

I got a set here for a one "GoodGirl." It's a HELLA good set ... I would even call it a "masterpiece" ... Been working on it for a few weeks ... It weaves together and continues all of my storylines--if that is something you are into.

This set is LONG ... I would say it will take about 3 to 4+ hours (with breaks) to complete ... The pacing is good, so ... you should be able to handle it without too many endurance issues, GG!

Technically, I am supposed to "wait" to post this until AFTER my next "open letter to Caprice", but ... I didn't want to wait ... THAT post SHOULD be dropping soon ... I got some time today ... there is ANOTHER set I need to make for Mistypanda, THEN post that letter to Caprice ... THEN get out some feedback, update my rules, and send out some correspondence, so ... I got some hours today (a LOT ) So ... I'm optimistic I can get all that done ... we'll see. Just wait until I post my updated rules before sending out any sets for me--IF they are related to any of my main storylines (Read: NOT you, Censor_Slut! ), that is, but ... I SHOULD be getting all this shit out in the next 24 hours or so ...

Yeah, imma be taking a break from "masterpiece level" sets for a while after this! Had a concept for this one ... started small, then ballooned ... I'm sure I am not the ONLY ONE here who knows how THAT goes! Gonna try to keep my sets short and tight for the next month or so, and ... I've been in a mood for "shorter sets" too, so ... I'll tell ya'll about all THAT when I update muh rules here in a bit, but ... I wanted to get this guy here out in case GG wanted to play it TODAY, so ... Have fun, GG, and ... it's a good read for anyone else. Wank along if you wish ...

My next BIG goal is an "everyone set" with some experimental "switch stuff" I want to try out and get some feedback on, then ... after that, I'll probably start focusing on "Me and Malena's" 5 Day Set, which ... there is STILL openings for that if people are interested. (Helequin, imma hit you back with a DM and finish our convo after I get all this shit out.

GoodGirl wrote: Sat May 07, 2022 11:18 pm

#GoodGirlSet
#wbLeeroyJerkins
#wbFattsDynamo

Oh, btw ... this set features Caprice AND Sofi.

Before the Set:

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The story picks up after the Skirata mega tease ... I have acquired Sofi as my sub. Caprice hasn't decided whether or not to agree to my offer of a switch-switch relationship. I've already responded to her last tease with an open letter. She came by to visit me (an Ecki17 set) and get the ball rolling on getting me some subs by sorting through applications for/with me. In the timeline, I have "technically" responded to her efforts already with ANOTHER open letter (which I will SOON post), but ... the contents of that letter don't really affect too much here ...

This set WILL be long. Feel free to take breaks. (Probably over 4 hours with breaks.) Towards the end, there is a decision. I have fully pathed out both branches, though, I am pretty sure which one you are going to take ... There are a FEW things that I need to finish that will NOT impact the set if you choose to play it today, however, if you do, send me a quick DM and let me know which path you took ... you'll save me some time. Otherwise, I will put the "post set finishing touches" on when I get a chance to get to them ... which SHOULD be soon!

The Set:
Part 1:

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[Begin naked.]

You're upstairs in your room, when you hear the doorbell ring. As you head down the stairs to answer the door, you hear it open along with the sounds of two people entering your house. You enter your living room ...

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Hello, master.




You turn to your right and see Caprice checking her makeup in the mirror.

Bitch, that's GoodGirl! He's a sub--he isn't ANYONE'S master ... were you not paying attention to ANYTHING I was saying on the way over here!?




Sorry, mistress! ... I--I was ... I guess I just got nervous ... being a sub is a new experience for me ... I'm still learning.




Yes--and you have a LOT more to learn, don't you!? Malena wasn't kidding when she said you had a long ways to go ... but don't worry, we'll sand off those rough edges in no time ... Now, take a seat while I explain to GoodGirl what is going on ... He seems both excited AND confused ...




Yes, mistress!




So, I'm sure you've heard by now--and if you haven't--Leeroy acquired a new sub: Sofi. Sofi, spread your legs for GoodGirl. I'm sure he wouldn't mind a nice view of your pussy.




Yes, mistress!

Sofi smiles then opens her legs for you, revealing her delicate pussy.




So, Leeroy's been over the moon ever since he acquired Sofi. He's been running around telling everyone all about it, saying he's a "real switch now" since he "officially has a sub" ...




He is the first boy on here to get himself a sub--at least as far as *I* know ...

That's pretty alpha, right?

Caprice stops talking for a moment in order to play with her stocking.




I wouldn't have believed it, but ... I was there--I saw it myself.

It was pretty hot. Malena's a genius mastermind--watch out for THAT one, GoodGirl ...




Anyhow, after Sofi became his sub, Leeroy slowed down with the "Caprice, become my mistress-sub--let's be kinky switches together!" routine for about all of five minutes. During that time, which was a few days ago, he came up to me, acting like a normal person--or at least what passes for normal for Leeroy--and said,

"Yo, Caprice! You like to domme, right? I know you do--because you're a switch! But don't worry--I won't tell anyone ... your secret's safe with me ... but, listen. When was the last time you got to domme a girl? I know you're bi. You get to domme boys ALL the time, right? But have you dommed a girl lately? No? Well, I have good news for you! My name is Leeroy Jerkins, and I'm a MASTER dom--and I have a sub. Her name is Sofi. I'll lend her to you for an afternoon, so you can get your lezbo rocks off. She's still in training, so, it might be rough, but ... that wouldn't be a problem for a MASTER mistress like YOU, would it? No? Good! Take her by GoodGirl's place and have her tease the SHIT out of him. That dude's been REALLY good to me, and I owe him one ... thanks!"




That's really suspicious ... Why did Leeroy say he "owed you one?"

And I don't recall teasing you much--maybe not at all--and yet ... I feel like we've spent a LOT of time together ... like maybe a three day weekend, but ... the ONLY three day weekend I spent with anyone lately was brian ... strange ...

What have you been up to, GoodGirl?




Caprice: Anyway, I went to see Malena to get the 411 on Sofi. She assured me Leeroy wouldn't have her as a sub forever ... you don't believe that Sofi, do you?

Sofi: What!?

Caprice: Do you think you being Leeroy's sub is only a temporary thing for you?

Sofi: ... yes? ... hopefully?

Caprice: If I were you, I'd strap in for the long haul! We "boss bitches" don't exercise our privileges very often, but, when we do ... we like to remind everyone why we have them ... so everyone knows it's best to behave ... But, how bad can it be to be Leeroy's sub? I mean, you do think he's pretty hot, right Sofi?

Sofi: Ummm, yeah ... I guess ...

Caprice: Don't worry, Sofi! I'm sure once Leeroy learns to become a better master--and you learn to become a better sub--things will improve ... In fact, you might even like being Leeroy's sub, at some point ... you might even decide to stick with him and forsake being a mistress altogether ...

Sofi remains quiet.

Caprice: Anyway, Malena told me that Sofi just needed a good, hard lesson on what it means to be a good mistress ...




... and she felt the best way to achieve that would be to have Sofi gain some experience subbing ...




So, I guess you could say my visit here is more "community service" than "doing a favor for Leeroy," but ... it HAS been a while since I've gotten to command a female sub ...




... and of course, how could I say "no" to an opportunity to come visit you?

Your reputation as the thread's premier subby "good girl" has been spreading ... and the ONLY thing that gets me wetter than domming one girl ...




... is domming two.




Caprice hops down off of the cabinet.

Alright, Sofi, it's time to get to work. We came over here so you could "tease GoodGirl." Let's start with a nice "striptease" for him. You're probably used to getting out of your clothes fast for Leeroy so he can ogle your naked ass, but, we're going to take our time here. I plan on getting off while I watch you strip and GoodGirl stroke, so ... don't rush it. We're going to be here a while today, so there's no hurry ...

GoodGirl, I want you to stroke slowly and enjoy this. This will be your warmup. If you've already edged, reset back to your "normal rules" from "edgeslut mode." You aren't allowed to go to "edgeslut mode" until I say. Normal stroking for now, but SLOW STROKES--and do it sensual--for ME!

Sofi, start stripping!




Yes, mistress!

Sofi hops up to embrace one of the columns.




She raises her flexible leg while smiling coyly at you.

Caprice: Sofi, GG's a tit man, and you've got some ample breasts ... Why don't you show them off to him? I would like to see them, too!




Sofi leans in to show you her buxom bosoms.

Caprice: That's nice--keep it up!




You keep your attention on Sofi, but can hear Caprice behind you rubbing herself.

Caprice: MMmmm ... that's nice, Sofi. Now, rub your tits some more for GoodGirl!




Sofi turns around to show you her hind end.

Caprice: GoodGirl isn't much of an ass man, but ... I like what you got, Sofi! Massage those cheeks for me!




Sofi immediately does what she's told and begins fondling her rear. You hear a few soft moans come from Caprice. Commanding a female sub must be very arousing for her.




Sofi: Do you like what you see, mistress?

Caprice: Do not address me any more, Sofi! This is supposed to be a tease for GoodGirl. ONLY address him. I'll be quiet for a while now. You just strip and focus on GG.




Caprice: GoodGirl, focus on Sofi. I like the way you stroke for her. It makes me wet. Keep doing it, and HOLD BACK those edges ... This is just the warmup ...




Caprice: The edge storm will come later ...




Sofi thrusts her breasts out for you.




Then drops her dress.




She frees one leg ...




... then two.

Sofi stands before you, completely naked.




She hops back up onto the column.




Then squats for you, to show off her breasts and pussy.




She lays down on the floor ...




... then looks up at you with big, doe eyes.

Her breathing is soft. Her breasts rise and fall as she stares. Her features are soft and angelic. There is desire in her eyes. She would do anything for you.




Caprice: Good job, Sofi. That was very sexy ...

GoodGirl, 100 strokes, and make them SLOW. Lock eyes with Sofi. Count your strokes out loud. Think about how much more she is going to tease you. Think about how watching you look at her makes me happy. Let your eyes wander to her breasts and sexy tummy, then back down to her eyes. After every 10 strokes, say, "Thank you for teasing me with Sofi, Mistress Caprice," then continue your count. If you feel yourself starting to edge stop or stroke even slower. The three of us are going to enjoy this beautiful moment together.



Caprice: Very good, girls. Now, Sofi, go upstairs and get changed into your second outfit, and when you come back down, we're going to increase the intensity ...

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[Normal stroking. No "edge slut mode" until Caprice says.]

Sofi grabs her dress then bounds up the stairs. You turn your attention to Caprice who seems to be enjoying herself.

Come over here, GoodGirl. We need to talk.




How do you like Sofi stripping for you? Is it different for you?




You're used to girls stripping for you, but ... usually they are the ones who are in charge ...




Sofi is my sub right now ... she'll do anything I say ...




What arouses you, GoodGirl? Is it Sofi's willingness to tease and please you so eagerly? Or does that do nothing for a subby good girl like you?




Probably not very much, but ... clearly you are aroused ... Is watching me dominate Sofi in front of you the thing that is getting you so hard? Perhaps ... That wouldn't be surprising. The thought of domination should trigger the libido of EVERY subby boy and girl ... but no, I think it is something else ...

Yes, I think I know what it is that is making you SO hard and SO eager to edge right now ...




It's the thought of pleasing me, isn't it?

You know how much watching you stroke for me while I command Sofi to tease you makes me wet ...

... and you stroke your little clitty like such a good little girl!




Well, get ready. I just heard a bedroom door open. Sofi's about to come down the stairs.

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Caprice: Turn on your EDGE SLUT MODE, slut!

Sofi: Are you ready for my teasing, GoodGirl?

Sofi strikes a pose for you.




Seeing the spark of desire in your eyes, Sofi smiles.




Sofi: You're not going to blow for me, are you, GoodGirl?




Sofi innocently plays with her hair.

Caprice: He better not--if he knows what's good for him!




Sofi: I want you to cum. I want you to edge so much that you lose control and have an accident. I want you to find me SO fucking sexy, that the cum inside your balls erupts in a fountain of worship to my goddess body ...




Caprice: Tread lightly, Sofi ... You're a sub right now, and NOT a mistress ... Don't forget your place ...




Sofi smiles confidently as she positions herself higher on the staircase. She turns back around, watching you stroke your cock emphatically as you edge for her.

She's enjoying the power she has over you in this moment.




Sofi: Oh, but Caprice ... You commanded me to tease him, didn't you? Aren't I doing a good job?




Caprice: That's "Mistress Caprice" to you. I'll overlook your infraction this time, because you're doing such a good job teasing GoodGirl ... I know he wants to please me--like a good girl--but does he have the discipline to keep that cum in his balls with all of this relentless edging?

Sofi continues to watch you with an innocent expression on her face, but her eyes are piercing and cold. You can tell she's hoping you mess up.




Caprice: Spread yourself, Sofi.

Sofi widens her legs. She looks almost impatient, like she can't wait for you to edge, waiting for the moment you will tip over too far and fail. You hear the sound of Caprice rubbing herself as she watches both of you.




Caprice: Don't forget that GG is a tit man, Sofi! Don't neglect your breasts!

Sofi begins to nonchalantly play with her boobs.




Caprice: Now, come down from there, Sofi.

Sofi turns around, flashing her ass and pussy for you.

Caprice: Hmmm ... that's nice. You are Leeroy's sub, right? Show me how you would tease Leeroy if he were here, Sofi. I want you to tease GoodGirl with your ASS!




Sofi turns to her other side, spreading her legs wide enough revealing her pussy. You hear Caprice moans softly a few times. Apparently Leeroy isn't the only one who enjoys Sofi's ass.




Enjoying the attention, Sofi stands up, bending far at the waist.




She wiggles her ass back and forth at you as she teases you, trying to get you to edge too hard.




She turns around and comes down the stairs, pausing at the bottom to strike a pose.

Caprice: Good work, Sofi!

GoodGirl, edge three extra times as a tribute of thanks to Sofi's superior teasing. She may be Leeroy's sub for now, but she still commands the room like a goddess ...

Sofi maintains eye contact with you, playfully daring you to cum with a look.




Caprice: Now, lay down on the ground, Sofi.

Sofi stares up at you sweetly. She almost seems genuine.




Caprice: Kick up your legs, Sofi! Give us a show for your finale!




Sofi alternates her kicks back and forth between her legs, holding each pose for a moment in between.




Caprice: Now, both legs up, and hold them still!

Look at that pussy, GoodGirl. Look at how warm and inviting it looks.

Sofi smiles alluringly at you.

Caprice: Now, I know a subby boy like you wouldn't take her by force, but ... what if I commanded you to take her, right there on the stairs!? What if I said, "GoodGirl, I WANT to see your submissive dicky thrust DEEP into her waiting cunt?" How would that change things for you? Does the thought of me ordering you to take her by force get you hard?

Look at her ... she's just so willing to swallow your hard cock with her pussy ... and I want to see that SO MUCH--your subby clit inside of her disobedient pussy ... You're a good girl--a nice little subby girl, but ... she's a bad girl ... she needs to be punished! ... I think you should be the instrument of her torture ... I think I would even make you penetrate her asshole with your hard cock, too ... but ONLY if you wanted, but ... Does the fact that *I* REALLY want to see all of that change the math for you? Think about it, GoodGirl ... and give me EIGHT edges ...




Caprice: Mmmm ... that was hott girls ... well done.

Caprice stops rubbing herself. She came at least once, maybe twice while she was watching you edge for Sofi.

Caprice: GoodGirl, one more edge, and then we're done. I think Sofi's due for another costume change ...




Caprice: Good. Now Sofi, go back upstairs and get changed again. I need to talk with GoodGirl some more.

Sofi heads back upstairs, and you find yourself alone again with Caprice ...

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So, how is Sofi doing with her teasing? Has her performance been more than adequate? If not, I'll have to report back to Leeroy that she did poorly ...




And how is it for you? You're not used to girls being submissive in front of you, are you ... You like it when they take charge, don't you? I'm sure having me as the dominant presence in the room has been helping to keep you ... aroused--helping you to keep the fantasy alive ...

... let me tell you a secret.




Sofi is a bad sub. She's disobedient, rebellious. She was ONLY made Leeroy's sub because she fucked up--bad--AND she lost a bet to Leeroy, but ... Sofi's not really a submissive ... she's a domme at heart ... and sure, dominating her is fun, and punishing her and asserting myself as the alpha in the relationship gets me wet, but ... when it comes down to it ... Sofi's a pretty shitty beta.




Yes, "putting her in her place" is fun ... Yes, having her obey my every whim is pretty hot, but ... that doesn't really satisfy me as a mistress. That doesn't really make me happy--not deep down. I can only take the "rebellious sub" routine for so long before it starts to become boring and stale ...




Do you know what turns me on, GoodGirl?




Caprice finishes taking off her dress, then tosses it to the side of the room. She sits on her legs, wiggling her ass back and forth a bit to tease you.




She lays back on the chair.

Stop stroking and edging, GoodGirl, and listen to me. I want you to hear me. I want your full attention--no distractions. Just look into my eyes for a while and think about how much you want to please me. Think about your devotion, and how you would do ANYTHING for me ... [Spend at least 30 seconds in silence, without touching, as you think about pleasing Caprice.]




Some time passes. You and Caprice stare at each other in silence. More time passes, and then she sits up in the chair.

What turns me on, GoodGirl ...

Is a true beta male. A true beta submissive. [Still no touching. Just read and stare. Caprice will tell you when.]




I want someone who is loyal and submissive ... someone who puts my desires above their own ... someone who is truly selfless and really cares ... about me ... THAT is what I find truly attractive in a sub ...




Caprice spreads herself wide for you, holding the pose for a minute. She's testing you, testing your resolve NOT to stroke. [Stare at her for a full minute. No touching still.]




Now edge for me, slut! Edge slut mode is back on!




I want to know, slut ... Are you as "good" as they say? Are you the "alpha tier" beta sub I've been looking for?




The girls have been talking, and so far, everyone has been impressed, but ... *I* have been dying to know ... is the hype real? Is the talk true? Is GoodGirl as "good" a sub as everyone says? I've decided to test you personally and find out for myself!




It's not enough for me that you simply "obey" ... *I* want you to obey and do things that you don't like--things you don't want to do ...

... and I want you to LOVE doing them anyway ...




... because that's what makes me happy ...




... if you can't live up to that, then I suppose I could still play with you from time to time ... as a toy ...




... but what I really want is a pet--a devoted pet--that loves his mistress and would do ANYTHING to please her and make her happy ... even if it makes him uncomfortable--even if he doesn't like it--I want my loving, devoted pet to do the things he doesn't like and have them STILL bring him joy, because that is how much he LOVES serving his mistress ...

... that is the TRUE beta sub I am looking for--someone who is selfless in their devotion ... NOTHING arouses me more than that ...




Caprice leans back and opens her legs to you.

*I* know what *I* want ...

Do you know what you want?




Some girls would make you eat them out because that's what they wanted, but ... I'm not going to do that.

You know what *I* want ... I'm not going to force you to do anything here. If you eat me out, you'll do it because you want to please me ...




Now here's your chance to prove your devotion. [Simulate eating out her pussy for as long as you think appropriate before continuing with your edges and strokes.]

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That was good, but I think you can do better ...




Try again, and this time, go longer--and give me one extra edge when you're done! [Simulate eating pussy again, but do it for longer than before if you want to make Caprice happy.]

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Hmmm, that was good, but ... I think you're STILL holding back ...




Eat me out again if you want to prove to me that you are TRULY a "good girl"--and this time TWO extra edges when you're done! [Simulate pleasuring pussy for at least 3 minutes or longer than your last time, whichever is longer, if you want to make Caprice happy.]

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Stop. Stop stroking and edging. [Until told to do so again.]

Very good, toy--you've done well, but ... that is all you are to me right now ... a toy.

I'm going to test your resolve--test your devotion. That last task was easy. You wanted to eat me out, and I let you. When you start doing things for me that you don't want to do ... THEN I'll start being impressed. If you can prove to me that your desire to please me is SO great, that even UN-pleasurable activities become pleasurable to you, well ... that's when you will have proved you're that true beta sub I have been looking for ...




A good girl like that would make me really wet ...




... and the things I would do to her would blow her mind ...




Now, get prepared, your next test is coming up ...




... and I promise you, you're not going to like it ...


[This is a good spot for a break if you need to take one ...]

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You may begin stroking again, GoodGirl, but here is the catch ... [Just stroking, no edging.]




I'm turning your edge slut mode off ... only "normal stroking rules" for this scene--NO EDGES ALLOWED!!

And every time you do happen to edge ...




20 hard ball slaps.

And keep track of the number of unauthorized edges. There is going to be a special punishment at the end that I am sure you won't like, so ...




... be a "good girl," make mistress happy, and she won't punish you ...




... but be a bad girl, and you'll make mistress angry--and she WILL punish you! ... so ... stroke and stroke but don't edge!

I promised Leeroy I would have Sofi tease you ... stroking without edging after you've already been warmed up and edged SO much is a pretty good way to tease you, don't you think!?!




Oh, what's the matter--you want to edge, my little edge slut?

I told you I would make you do things you didn't want to do ...




Now Sofi, come down here! GoodGirl is allowed to stroke but not edge. You better tease the FUCK out of him! We're testing his resolve NOT to edge! You better not hold back, or I'll force you to eat me out again!

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And by the way, GoodGirl ...

Double your number of strokes per picture, and stroke no slower than 100 bpm. [Use a metronome if you need to.]

You didn't think I would make this easy for you, did I?

Sofi comes down the stairs and enters the dining room ...

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She takes a seat on the table before you.




She stretches herself out, displaying her flexibility.




She's quite supple.




She stretches out her arms, placing them behind her head. She looks past you, pretending not to notice you stroking for her. Her exposed breasts hang gently down from her chest.




She then turns her head, looking directly at you. She smiles a knowing, yet mischevious smile. She's aware of your predicament, understanding the power she has over you in this moment.




Sofi laughs.

Sofi: Oh, GoodGirl ... it's hard to hold those edges back for me, isn't it?




Sofi: Well, then, I should make it even harder ...

Sofi leans back, then spreads her legs. She watches you stroke enthusiastically, patiently waiting for the next edge to come.




You glance briefly to your right and notice Caprice smiling at the scene. Her hand is resting near her thigh. You can't tell if she's rubbing herself or not, but, you don't want to displease Caprice who has ordered Sofi to tease you. You quickly turn your attention back to Sofi ...

Sofi raises her knees and points her toes. Her breasts mound atop her chest. Her legs are so beautiful and smooth.




Sofi: Is the teasing unbearable yet?




Sofi: How bad do you WANT to edge? ... if ONLY you were allowed ...




Sofi raises her right leg high into the air. She pretends not to notice how much this position exposes her pussy.




Sofi: You're fun to watch! You want to edge so bad ... yet you're trying so hard to hold back those edges ... Can you do it?




Sofi: Or do I just make your task impossible?




Sofi: It's not easy for me, you know? Being this sexy ...




Sofi: But, it does make my job of teasing you MUCH easier ...

As Sofi wiggles her ass at you, she gives you a wink.




Caprice: Alright, hold position there, Sofi ...

GoodGirl. For every unauthorized edge you failed to hold back, you will now edge again and follow it up with 30 seconds of head palming. Edge, palm, edge, palm, until you have done so for every time you failed. Then, because I am a generous mistress, I will allow you to edge as many times as you wish to this one picture. This part is neither a test nor a punishment. You haven't been allowed to edge, so ... I'm just curious about how horny you are ... and, I want you very worked up for this next part ...


Caprice: Thank you, Sofi. You may leave us for now. I need to spend some more time alone with GoodGirl ...

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[Still only stroking. Normal rules, but NO edges allowed. No minimum speed.]

Hmmm … I don’t know … I think you enjoyed that too much …




Yes, the goal WAS to tease you and NOT let you edge, but … I think that maybe you actually enjoyed that little exercise … and that wasn’t my goal.




*I* want to make you do things you DON’T want to do …




Let’s try this. More of the same, except THIS time … you are going to stroke VERY slow–just teasing strokes. I don’t even want you CLOSE to the edge. You are just going to stroke VERY slowly and tease yourself. You are going to want to go fast–but you won’t. You are going to want to edge--but you won’t. *I* want you to get REALLY frustrated … so, since I know that you want to stroke fast for me … *I* am going to make you do the opposite and stroke SO SLOW …




… and that little look of desire and frustration … seeing in your eyes how badly you want me–how much you want to stroke fast and edge for me … Those little frustrated, eager, BEGGING glances will turn me on SO much …




… and do you know what will turn me on even more? You’ll set that desire aside for me. You’ll be a good girl and do what *I* want, even though it pains you … and THAT will send ME over the edge AGAIN and AGAIN …




Let’s try it … are you ready?

Before we start though, lie down on your back so that you are looking up at me. I want you lying on the floor with me standing above you. Lie down as yet another sign of your subservience to me ... Your happiness in obeying my requests makes me happy ...


[25 strokes per image, no faster than 30 bpm. If you feel yourself approaching the edge, stop and cool down, then continue your stroking. You don't actually have to lay down and face up ... that part is optional.]



You lie down and Caprice stands over you.

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Good ... I like you in this position ...




She lets down her hair.

The eye contact makes your slow, worship strokes that much more delicious ...




Are you excited, or nervous, pet?




Whoops! Slip of the tongue on my part, TOY ... I guess it was wishful thinking ...

You will graduate from "toy" to "pet" only after you have demonstrated your loyalty to me and your pure desire to put what *I* want ahead of what you want ...




You want to lick my pussy again--don't you, toy!? Well, not yet. Keep stroking. In fact, I want you to stroke even slower. Cut your current pace in half. [Still 25 strokes.]




Same halved pace. Do ALL 25 of your strokes ... THEN you may lick my pussy as a reward. Do it for 1 full minute, and NO TOUCHING THAT HANDSOME COCK OF YOURS while you lick ... okay, toy?




I liked that. You lick more aggressively when you're desperate to cum and desperate to please me, toy ...

Maintain this pace. You're going to do it again ... Are you ready for that? Look at my juicy pussy lips ... I'm spreading them for you. Your tongue is going to be ALL over them in a minute here ...

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So wet inside ... for you.

Same as before. 25 extra slow worship strokes, then, 1 minute of licking while you keep your hands OFF of your cock ...

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Oh, toy! You make your mistress SO happy!

You may speed back up to your original speed now. [No faster than 30 BPM.]

I know you prefer to give me licks, but ... what if I asked you to put your throbbing cock inside of me ... would you do it?




Edge for me, GoodGirl. Edge for me at THAT pace. After you've hit the edge, cool down by licking my pussy for 30 seconds ... of course ... you can always go longer ... if you think that would make me happy ...

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Edge again, GoodGirl. Edge again at THAT pace, then ... see if you can hold that edge for me ...

I know YOU don't like it, but ... *I* do.

Try to hold the edge for at least 30 seconds, and try to hold it while you stroke at that pace. If you need to stroke slower to avoid tipping over, that's okay ... and if you can't hold it for the full 30 seconds, that's okay too, but ... if you can keep trying for me until you do manage to hold an edge for at least a full 30 seconds ...

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Oh, what a good girl you are! What a good toy!

Okay, stop the slow stroking. Lick my pussy for at least 30 seconds, and then I'll let you have your fun! Stroke for me. EDGE for me. Lick me some more. Slap your balls for me. Do whatever you think will make me happy, but ... I give you permission to do the things that will make you happy as well! I want to see your devotion. I want to watch you enjoy my body ...

This is a test, toy. Pets enjoy spending time with their masters. I want to see if you enjoy spending time with me. I'm going to watch you enjoy yourself. Seeing your kinky devotion on display gives me SO much pleasure. Show me how eager you are to enjoy my body. There is no time--it's just us. Take as long as you want. Watching you pleasure yourself to me makes me SO happy ... You can do ANYTHING you like ... except cum, of course ...

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[Normal stroking rules, no edging.]

Oh, toy, watching you work ...




... it warms my heart ...




... AND my pussy!

Now, mistress is going to get HER dream to come true! Remember how I said I wanted to domme two girls at once? Go put on your lingerie for me, naked boy. What I need right now is a good girl to serve me obediently. Transform yourself into the good little subbie girl I know you are, then meet me and Sofi in the spare bedroom ... We're going to find out how well two submissive little girls can serve their mistress and make her happy ...

Now, hop to it, toy!

[Go put on some lingerie. Put on your fanciest, most elaborate set. (Garters, hose/stockings, clips, if you have it ... You need to try to impress Caprice, after all.) You will now be in "Feminization Mode." You may take a short break if you need to, either before or after changing, then continue. When you begin again, use your normal rules. Caprice will tell you when it is time to go into Edge Slut Mode.]

Part 2:

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[Normal mode is on. You will only edge on command and only go into "Edge Slut Mode" when Caprice orders you to.]

You enter the bedroom, dressed in your lingerie, to find ...

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Caprice waiting for you.




... and Sofi sitting patiently in a chair by the window.




Oh, there she is! There is my little good girl, ready to do her mistress' bidding ...

Sofi, greet your sub sister by turning around. GoodGirl needs to get another look at you ... perhaps she's forgotten the shape of the curves of your ass ...




Sofi turns around and kneels on the chair, arching her back slightly to best show off her rear.




Oh, this is going to be fun! Two female subs at once ... it's been a while ...

Sofi, spread yourself out. Your mistress and GoodGirl both want to see the length of your perfect form stretched out for us.




Sofi obediently does as she is told.




Very good, Sofi. You may relax a bit.




Are you getting excited, GoodGirl? Excited for the things *I* will make Sofi do for you? Excited for the things *I* will make you do for her? Excited about the things *I* will make you both do for me?

Caprice slowly fondles her breast as she lets her words hang in the air.

Sofi, sit up and face GoodGirl.




GoodGirl, get on your knees and slowly stroke your clitty to the edge. Maintain eye contact with Sofi as you do it.

She performed for you, now it's your turn to perform for her. You're both my subs right now. I don't want either of you to get the impression that there is some hierarchy between the two of you. There are only two levels: me at the top as mistress, and then you, my two subs, far below me. So, give Sofi some respect as a fellow sub by giving us both a show, GoodGirl. And be sure to make the strokes leading up to your edge slow and sensual. I need us all aroused in order to accomplish the things that are swirling around in my head right now ...

And every time your eyes wander from Sofi's GoodGirl, slap your balls 10 times and try again ...

Sofi stares at you expectantly. She likes what she sees. She's enjoying watching you put on a show for her. You can tell she is getting aroused.




Now Sofi, cup your breasts. GoodGirl, stay on your knees. This time, you will edge twice for Sofi while stroking slowly, and every time your eyes wander down to her breasts, slap your balls 20 times.

Sofi, knead your breasts while GoodGirl strokes. We don't want to make this easy for her ...

Sofi gently and slowly massages her breasts while staring at you. Her expression is one of confidence. She's daring you to look down. She wants to see you mess up. She wants to watch you slap your balls.




Caprice: Alright, GoodGirl. I think it's time we allow you to edge for Sofi's magnificent tits, but ... I don't think we should let you edge for them "for free" ... Sofi, what do you think GoodGirl should pay in order to edge for your tits?

Sofi: Hmmm ... I think he should have to slap his balls 10 times before every edge.

Caprice: Mmmm ... I like that. Let's do that ... good suggestion, Sofi.

Sofi: Thank you, mistress.




Caprice: GoodGirl. You are going to edge at least five times for Sofi's tits. Before each edge, you must slap your balls 10 times. After each edge, you must say, out loud, "Thank you for allowing me to edge for Sofi's tits, Mistress Caprice." Being the generous mistress that I am, I will let you edge for Sofi's tits more--as much as you like--but ... you'll have to "pay the price" each time. You may begin.

Once again, Sofi fondles her breasts as you edge. She's enjoying the attention. Having been a mistress herself before being punished by Malena to be Leeroy's sub, Sofi seems to be getting off on you acting as her sub--at least in this moment.

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Two subs at once ... one boy and one girl--just like I like ...




... or, one bad girl ... and one good girl ...




Caprice: Sofi, you know you're the bad girl in this situation, right?

Sofi: Yes, mistress.

Caprice: And GoodGirl is the "good girl?"

Sofi: Yes, mistress.

Caprice: Excellent. Well, "bad girl," I want you to go sit up on the bed and prepare to stroke.

Sofi: Yes, mistress.




Sofi sits on the bed. She spreads her legs wide in order to give herself easy access to her pussy. She hasn't been permitted to stroke much today. She smiles in eager anticipation.




Caprice: Sofi, I want you to stroke for my pussy.

Sofi frowns.

Sofi: But mistress, I'm only a little bi. I'm not as bisexual as you are ... It's true--I do enjoy playing with other girls from time to time--but ... I'm not even much of a sub at heart--especially when it comes to other girls being my domme ... being your sub today hasn't really been doing much for me--though things got a LOT more fun since we got here and started playing with GoodGirl. I want to stroke so bad, but ... honestly, I'm just not worked up enough to really enjoy stroking for your pussy right now ... Could I stroke for GoodGirl's dick instead? I've been an obedient sub for you today, mistress. Could you at least give me that?

Caprice goes silent for a moment as she considers Sofi's request.

Caprice: Sofi ... Why did Malena allow Leeroy to take you as a sub?

Sofi: To teach me a lesson.

Caprice: About?

Sofi: About learning to become a better mistress and treating my subs better.

Caprice: If I grant your request and give you what you want, do you think that will help you to learn your lesson?

Sofi: ... yes?

Caprice: Wrong, Sofi. It will not. Today's "theme" is about doing things you don't want to do. Despite your well-deserved reputation as being a "bad girl," you've actually been quite "good" and obedient today. Perhaps being Leeroy's sub is having its desired effect on you ... I decided I wanted to reward you for your performance so far today. I honestly thought having you stroke for my pussy was something you would enjoy. It's certainly something that would bring me pleasure ... BUT ... "Good girls" do things they DON'T want to do because they will bring pleasure to their mistress. Of course, you're a "bad girl," so ... it makes sense that quality of subservience is lacking in you which might propel other "good girl subs" to press past their personal preferences and do what their mistresses or masters ask for and even enjoy it, but ... setting that aside ... I thought all of today's activities would have worked you up SO MUCH, that, even if it's not something you might normally be into, your horniness and desperation would have driven you to the point where you would have jumped at any opportunity for release ... I guess I'm just not doing my job well enough to push you there, to get you to that point where the horniness and desperation overcomes the inhibitions and you gladly do what I say ...

Sofi: I'm sorry, mistress ...

Caprice: There, there ... It's not your fault ... Either Leeroy hasn't trained you properly, or there hasn't been enough time to progress you in your training ... or *I* just haven't done enough in our time together today to really make you desperate ...

Sofi looks nervous, as each one of those possibilities will only result in more hardship for her in this current session.

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Caprice: Tell you what, Sofi. Since you--my little bad girl--have been SO GOOD today--and you haven't asked for anything else from me ... I'll grant you this one request and let you stroke for GoodGirl's clitty instead of my pussy--which is what *I* want, but ... think of this as your "special reward" for your hard work so far today ...




Sofi looks surprised.

Sofi: Thank you, mistress!

Sofi gets up on her knees. She gets herself into a position where she is about to start stroking, then stops.

Sofi: Umm ... mistress?

Caprice: Yes, Sofi?

Sofi: Do you think we could get GoodGirl to remove his lingerie before I start stroking for him? See, I am bi--I just like boys more than girls--and while I do appreciate this opportunity you have given to me ... I ... I think I'm just too much of an alpha ... I do like beta boys--when I'm commanding them and they are stroking for me, but ... right now ... we're both just subs, and ... stroking for another SUB while--while he's dressed so ... subby ... it ... it's kind of a turn-off for me--almost as much as being forced to stroke for your pussy, so ... Could you order GoodGirl to remove his lingerie so I can stroke for his dick better?

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Caprice: Oh, Sofi ...

Caprice gets up and kneels down on her chair, showing off her ass and exposing her pussy to both of you. Despite putting herself in such an inviting and subservient position, she turns around and STILL manages to come off as commanding and dominant.

Caprice: You really are an incorrigible bad girl ... when a mistress--from the generosity flowing deep from within her heart--gives you a gift--a "special reward"--you accept it--without hesitation. Doing ANYTHING else is just ungrateful, disrespectful, and ... rude.

Stand up, Sofi.




Sofi stands up.

Caprice: See, the problem, Sofi, is that our session today--right now--requires two girls ... My dream today was to domme TWO girls, and ... if GoodGirl takes off her lingerie ... then I will only be subbing one ... you see the problem?

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Caprice: Request denied! You should have taken the opportunity to stroke when I gave it to you, Sofi! Now, there will be NO stroking for you for the rest of the day!

Sofi: Mistress, I'm sorry! I take it back! I'll stroke for GoodGirl's clitty! I'll be a "good girl" for you! I--

Caprice: Silence, Sofi.

Sofi stops protesting. She does look pretty desperate and appears nervous about what might happen next.

Caprice: Well, someone needs to be punished for your insolence ... GoodGirl ...

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Caprice: Bust yourself 20 times HARD ... Sofi's been through quite a lot today. She won't be stroking any more for me for the rest of the day, but ... that punishment is just not quite enough to make up for her spitting on my generous offer. You like being punished, right? So then you will be Sofi's whipping girl. Show this bad girl how a good girl obeys her mistress ... Sofi, display your breasts for GoodGirl while she busts.

Sofi puts her arms behind her, arching her back slightly. Her shapely boobs sway gently at the sudden motion.

Sofi smirks at you. Her desperation to stroke temporarily subsides as her mistress side comes out. Knowing her actions resulted in your punishment seems to make her happy. With every bust, her smile seems to get a little brighter. She's clearly enjoying watching you bust yourself. For a moment, she's able to pretend she's a mistress again and you are busting yourself for her amusement.




Caprice: Oh ... do you like that, GoodGirl? Do you like being punished--even punished for things you didn't do?

I hope so, toy ... I know it makes me happy ... which means it should make you happy, too!

If you keep busting yourself well for me--like a good little subby girl--I'll let you lick my pussy again ... would you like that?

Caprice lifts her legs and spreads her pussy for you.




Caprice: Alright, now bust again, GoodGirl. 20 more HARD ball slaps, and THIS time ... make them even harder than you did last time!

Sofi leans in. Her smile stops growing. Since she can't get pleasure from stroking, instead, she allows herself to become aroused at the sight of you busting yourself. Watching you being ordered to bust is clearly turning her on.




Caprice: Very good. Again. 20 more hard slaps again, but this time, they don't need to be harder than last time ... it would make me happy if they were, but ... I won't force you to go harder GoodGirl ... only make them harder if you want to please me ...

Sofi, turn around. You're enjoying this too much. I don't want you watching GoodGirl bust anymore. The sounds of the busting will have to be enough for you ... and make sure to bend over--enough so that GoodGirl and I can see your pussy peeking out at us ...

Sofi turns around and bends over for you, exposing her pussy.

Caprice: Bust, GoodGirl. 20 more--then your reward will come ...

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Caprice: Alright, Sofi. Now you're going to watch for a while. Lay down on the bed, and hands above your head! I don't want you getting weak, falling to temptation, and touching yourself ... as a bad girl, I KNOW you can't be trusted, not like our good girl GoodGirl can ... you may only watch ... for now ...

Sofi follows Caprice's orders and lies down on the bed. From her eyes, you can tell she was happy to get you in trouble, but, she feels a little remorseful that she can now "only watch."




Caprice: Edge for me, GoodGirl. Edge for me three times. I want you worked up again. You're going to eat me out. I want your pussy dripping for me while you lick mine. It'll be SO hot ... and make mistress SO happy ...




Go. Eat me out for a two full minutes. You can go longer if you wish. NO touching that clitty of yours while you do. This is for MY pleasure ... and feel free to lick my asshole as well--if you want to make your mistress happy ... you don't have to put your tongue inside like Leeroy would ... just licking around the edges will be enough for me today ... After you finish, you may edge yourself as much as you like again. You've been a good girl. You deserve this. Feel free to finger your asshole, if you wish. Just don't cum, and don't push yourself too hard with all of the "free" edges ... I still want to play with you MUCH MORE today, so ... don't tire yourself out completely just yet!

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That was good. Thank you, GoodGirl.

I don't think mistresses should be in the habit of showing gratitude to their subs, as good service is expected, but ... thank you, GoodGirl ... You're a toy that goes above and beyond ... I like that ...




But, there is something else I require of you ... something else your mistress needs you to do ...




I need you to eat Sofi out for me. Can you do that, GoodGirl?




I've seen how you've been looking at her. She's been teasing you for so long--and she's been doing a fantastic job of it ... I've been impressed with how much she's made your little clitty leak ...

Now, she's not allowed to stroke--not for the rest of the day ... and she has been SO obedient--until the point she disrespected me and turned down my offer--but ... I'm not a heartless mistress ... she does deserve SOME kind of reward ... and since she's not allowed to stroke herself--and *I* am CERTAINLY not going to do it ... I suppose it falls to you to get Sofi off--with your tongue.

This is NOT a request but an order. I've gotten my pussy licked plenty today--not enough, but ... I feel it's time to watch my two girls go at it. So, get ready to eat Sofi out, GoodGirl. Lick, lick, lick. Are you ready?

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Caprice: Sofi, assume the position: face down, ass up.

Sofi turns around, leaning down. She raises her ass into the air, revealing her pussy.

Caprice: I said "face down," Sofi.

Sofi: But, please, mistress--can I watch! I have been SUCH a good girl today!

Caprice: You really haven't, Sofi ... you've been quite bad, but ... fine. I'll allow it this time, however ... it will cost you--later.

Sofi: That's fine.

She smiles as she watches you prepare.

Caprice: GoodGirl. Since Sofi is a sub, I want you to do your strokes and edges first. Give her ass and pussy one extra edge each, and after that ... since she insists on watching ... edge once more while you stare into her eyes. Don't break eye contact. If you do, slap your balls ten times. You may stroke as you like for the other edges, but, for the eye contact edge, stroke slowly--no faster than 30 BPM. I want the anticipation to build. I want to give Sofi the illusion that she is in control--apparently that appeals to her inner mistress. Then, after you've completed ALL of that, eat Sofi out--for at least one full minute. You may go longer if you wish to further please me. I'll be jilling myself off as I watch. No touching your clitty while you lick.

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Caprice: Good. Now stop, GoodGirl.

Sofi, no more watching. GoodGirl will continue in a moment, but I will permit you to watch no longer. Get down on all fours. Arch your back, and stare at the wall.

Sofi: Yes, mistress.

Caprice: GoodGirl, I want you to slap Sofi's ass 20 times, 10 times hard on each cheek. [You may go get a pillow to slap so you can simulate slapping. Stare at the screen (Sofi's ass) but slap the pillow HARD.]

I know you're a subby boy at heart--but I don't care. Sofi needs to know that she is not in charge here. My subs are of equal standing. You will do this to reassert yourself whether you want to or not. Then, to remind you that you are not in charge here either, YOU will slap yourself on the ass, twenty times--HARD--10 on each ass cheek. You require a reminder as well ...

After this, take off your panties. Rub your dick between Sofi's ass cheeks for 30 seconds. [On the pillow.] Say, "This dick is going to make you cum SO HARD, Sofi!" over and over again for the 30 seconds. You will NOT penetrate Sofi, but ... the idea of you dominating her makes me wet ... I just need you to pretend for a little while ... maybe later, I'll see if Leeroy will allow me to watch one of this sessions with Sofi, but, for now ... THIS is what your mistress wants and will make her happy, so ... as a "good little girl", THAT is what you are going to do--take off your panties and rub your dick on Sofi's ass!

Once that is done, put your panties back on. I only need you dominant long enough to prove my point to Sofi. Then, I need you subby again. You will edge again. Edge once for each ass cheek, once for each of her feet (I heard you were into that sometimes.), and then twice for her pussy--the one you are about to lick.

After ALL of that, you may do what YOU want--what you have wished to do since the moment you saw Sofi's sweet, sweet pussy ... I will FORCE you to lick it, doing the thing that you want to do--which ALSO happens to be the thing which *I* want to see ... After ALL of your tasks, you will lick Sofi's pusy for a full two minutes ... and, since she's NOT your mistress and ONLY a sub ... this is NOT just about her pleasure, so ... I will allow you to stroke and even edge while you lick Sofi's pussy. You must lick her cunt for at least two minutes, but ... you may lick and stroke and edge for as long as you want--just don't let Sofi cum ... at least not until *I* say ... Doing ALL of this will make your mistress happy, GoodGirl--SO very happy ... Now get started, toy.

Caprice pulls out a dildo and begins pleasuring herself as she watches you. She rubs her clit with her fingers as the dildo goes in and out. You can't see her, but you can tell watching her "good girl" obediently carrying out her wishes makes her very happy. You hear her moan quietly several times as she watches you work.




As a result of all of your licking, Sofi's moaning is getting louder and louder ...

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Sofi: Mistress, I'm getting close!

Caprice: Don't cum, Sofi. You're not allowed. If you do, there will be dire consequences ...

GoodGirl, continue licking Sofi as you have for another 30 seconds ... Don't hold back!




Sofi: I'm about to cum ... I'm getting close ... I'm about to ... [Open the next spoiler after the 30 seconds of licking has passed.]

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Caprice: STOP LICKING, GOODGIRL! [Stop licking and stroking.]

Sofi: PLEASE, mistress ... but--but I'm SO close!

Caprice: No, Sofi. You're denied. As I said, you've been a bad girl, unlike our GoodGirl here. Bad girls get denied. I thought that was obvious.




Caprice: Does Leeroy let you cum after you've been "bad?"

Sofi: Well, yes ... sometimes ...

Caprice: Interesting ... I think perhaps I should speak to Leeroy about this. It seems that perhaps his love of cumming is causing him to be lenient with his subs and letting them cum when they shouldn't ... If he's going to be a proper master, he needs to do a better job of instilling discipline ...




Caprice: Lay down, Sofi.

Sofi lays down on the bed.

Caprice: You've been bad and will be denied until *I* say. However, GoodGirl and I are going to have fun ... You just get to watch ... it's a part of your punishment.

Given no other choice, Sofi lies on the bed with her arms above her head. For the first time in a while, she appears submissive, not pouty or angry or defiant. She seems willing to accept whatever pleasure Caprice is willing to allow her.

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Caprice: Now, GoodGirl, we are going to have some fun. I want Sofi to witness firsthand the pleasures that good girls receive when they pleasure and obey their mistresses.

You will eat me out as you did with Sofi--but I want some edges first. Edge once for each of my breasts, then once for my pussy. Then, bring yourself to the edge by stroking slowly while staring into my eyes. [Stroke no faster than 30 BPM for this edge.] While you stroke yourself slowly to the edge while staring into my eyes, I want you to thank me over and over--out loud--for allowing you the opportunity to lick my goddess pussy. Tell me how much you enjoy serving me. Tell me how much pleasure obeying me brings you. Thank me over and over and BEG to lick my pussy. While looking into my eyes, do not stop begging and thanking me until you reach the edge. You may even hold the edge for a while if you hit it too quickly and wish to thank me more while staring into my eyes.

After this fourth edge, you may open the spoiler, and then you may eat me out.

Followed the instructions, finished thanking and begging and the fourth edge ...

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Caprice: Now, lick my pussy, GoodGirl! THREE minutes! Don't hold back! You may stroke and edge your clitty as you service me.

I will allow you to lick and stroke and edge longer if you wish. I would like to cum multiple times today ...




Finished licking Caprice's pussy ...

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[Stop stroking until the end of the scene.]

Caprice: Very good, toy. Your eagerness to pleasure me makes your mistress VERY happy ...

Sofi, I am done with you for now. I need some time alone with GoodGirl. You will report immediately to Kyla's basement where you will wait for me. When I have finished with GoodGirl, I'll come for you and decide how to best punish you for your rebeliousness and disobedience. I will call ahead to let them know you are coming. If you delay at ALL, your punishment will be doubled. Understood?

Sofi: Yes, mistress!

Sofi hurries out of the room, leaving her clothes behind. She must not feel she has time to retrieve them.




Caprice: Well, there you go, GoodGirl ... Leeroy told me to send Sofi over to tease you ... Have you been thoroughly teased?




Caprice: I'm a woman of my word. What I set my mind to I accomplish. That's how it is with us alphas ...




... but you're "alpha" in a different way ... You're shaping up to be a superior beta-sub--just as everyone claimed ...




... but, I'm not quite done with you yet ... toy.

We need some "alone time." There are some things I need to discuss with you, and with Sofi gone, I can finally put your obedience to the last test I have for you ...




Don't worry, toy, we'll have fun--or at least *I* will ...

... and if you really please me, toy, perhaps I'll let you graduate ...




... to "pet."

Take a break. 15 minutes. Mandatory. You can break for up to 30 minutes if you wish, but no longer. Go drink a glass of water. I want you rested just a bit and cooled down. I like how you get excited for me. Now that I have you ALL to myself, I want to warm you up again and experience ALL the joys of a sub giving me her full attention while enjoying my body with her eyes …

[Take a break before the final scene. After Caprice calls ahead to Kyla's to let them know Sofi will be arriving, she'll need a little time to prepare. Leave your subby uniform on (panties) ...]

Part 3:

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[Begin in your normal rules mode.]

It's just me now.




Does that make you nervous or excited?

Perhaps a little bit of both?




Good! Now put yourself in Ballbusting Mode and put one clothespin on each of your nipples! [No touching your clitty. ONLY bust your balls.]

Seeing you hurt yourself for me gets me SO wound up! Your obedience is SO HOTT, GoodGirl! Knowing how far you are willing to go to please me REALLY puts a smile on my face! You're just the best toy!




Subs that simply want to be used and abused are a dime a dozen.

I can find PLENTY on here ...




The busting sluts ... the denial sluts ...




... but in the end, it's always about them and what they want …




What I'm looking for--what I'm hoping for ... what I've been waiting for for SO long ...




Is a TRUE beta sub …

... are you her, GoodGirl?




You bust so nicely for me ...




... and you edge OVER and OVER on command ...




... and you hold back that cum like a good girl--JUST to please me ...

... and devotion like that makes me orgasm SO HARD!!




So then we have the final test ...

... you do ALL of the things that a good, well-trained sub should do, but ...




... when you do those things that you don't want to do ...




... does the pleasure of pleasing me outweigh your discomfort? Does making me happy overcome the pain and displeasure--so much so--that you find yourself truly enjoying those things that you "dislike?"




That's the thing that I want to know, GoodGirl. For me, that's the hallmark of a true beta sub.

If you can answer "yes" truthfully and mean it ...




... then you'll graduate from "toy" to being my "pet" ...

... and OH how I would cherish and love and care for a pet like that!




I have a reputation for being a hard mistress--and I am--it's just ...




... I have a soft spot for "pets."




Most of the boys can't measure up, but ...




... a good girl like you would bring me SO much joy!




Okay, GoodGirl. I'm naked now.

Stop busting. Go back to your normal mode, but don't edge until I say. Take off those clothespins, and start playing with your sensitive nipples while you stroke for me ...

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I want to give you a full orgasm today, GoodGirl, but ... in order for you to earn that ...




... you'll need to pass my final test, toy ...




... and become my pet.




The test is simple: you just have to do the things that you don't like to do ...




... some edge holds ...




... a ruined orgasm ...




... and there's one more thing ...

... by the way, EDGE, slut! Turn on your "Edge Slut Mode!"




While you're doing these things for me--things that your rules CLEARLY label as "dislikes" ...




... I need you to LOVE them.

I know you dislike them, but ... it's because you dislike them that I want you to do them SO much!




I want you to be SO eager to please me, that the satisfaction and pleasure you get from obeying me COMPLETELY OVERWHELMS your pain and discomfort.

A true beta--someone who is loyal and really derives sexual pleasure from pleasing her mistress--would get on that edge and ride it--for me!




I want to look you in the eyes while you ride that edge--OH! And you hate it SO MUCH! You LOVE to edge but you HATE staying on that brink of orgasm--so close--but you CAN'T tip over ...




... and you suffer on the edge! Your eyes plead to stop, but you CAN'T! I see how you suffer for me--how you do so willingly--and it makes me CUM! I see how far you are willing to go to please me, and it fills me with unmitigated sensual arousal! It makes me cum AGAIN ...




... and AGAIN ...

... your self-sacrifice and devotion to MY pleasure and needs fills me with an indescribable erotic high, and seeing me in that state ...




... becomes so pleasurable for you, that you begin to enjoy holding the edge ...




... and at that moment, you will choose to ruin your orgasm for me.




... and if you can do ALL that, and after the ruin, you can say that you really did enjoy it, because despite the discomfort, your desire to please me and the pleasure that it brought was SO overwhelming that it outshone the suffering ...




... at that point, I will have no choice but to make you my pet, and reward you with a full orgasm ...




So, what do you think, toy? Could I make you my pet, or am I just dreaming?

I won't force you. It's something that you have to want.




But, if you're the sub that I think you are, then you'd be fine with doing some things you dislike ...




... and if you are really the good girl that I hope you are ...

... then your pure desire to please will crush those grapes of suffering into a sweet wine of pleasure!

So, will you do it, GoodGirl? Will you hold your edges and ruin your orgasm for me? I promise to not make it easy for you, but ... that will just enhance the pleasure for both of us, will it not?

The Choice:

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“I’m not the superior beta-sub that you hoped I was, Caprice. I just HATE edge holding and ruining SO much, that there is just NO WAY the pleasure of pleasing you could outweigh them …”

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Very well, toy. I appreciate your honesty. It takes a LOT of guts to shatter my hopes and tell me what I don’t want to hear, but … I respect your truthfulness. A lesser man would have lied to me, and you didn’t do that.




Alright, so, you failed my test …

Caprice sighs.

You may not be ready to become my pet–yet–BUT … that does NOT mean that you cannot be my toy–right now.




Get out your dildo, slut! You’re going to suck it it while I get myself off.




Now, edge and SUCK, toy! I need more stimulation than this toy to get off right now!




You’re probably wondering how this is going to end for you …




You’re probably assuming I’ll just deny you, but … that would be too easy …




Oh!? Was that a flash of panic I saw in your eyes just now? Do you think I will ruin you?




That would be what you deserve–for building up my hopes and smashing them to the ground, but … I respect boundaries …




… only a bad mistress forces her subs to do things which they truly despise doing … and I am NOT that–a bad mistress …




No, my “ruin test” was just that–a test. I was only going to have you ruin if you were willing to try it …




… and had you chosen to ruin–despite your stated disapproval–that REALLY WOULD have gotten me off SO many times–had your devotion surpassed your displeasure …




No, denial would be too easy, and a ruin would go against my principles, but … perhaps there is a way I can punish you with something else that would be even more punishing than either of those …




See, I’m betting that you want to be punished right now, because you let me down, but … If I punish you in the normal way, I would just be giving you what you want, so …

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I am going to punish you by giving you a full orgasm.




“What!? How does that work?” you ask? Simple: receiving a reward you didn’t truly earn is its own kind of punishment–for the honest person–and you just proved to me that you are an “honest person” by your admission.




Sure, the orgasm you receive from me today will be pleasurable–I’ll see to that--but … the guilt that precedes AND follows that orgasm will make it bittersweet … the guilt for being improperly rewarded for your failure, well … THAT punishment will lodge within your psyche and sting you for WEEKS–far more than any denial or ruined orgasm I give you now … with those, the “scales will be balanced”, but … a full orgasm? You’ll still owe me. Maybe I have lost a pet, but … at least you’ll be a good toy I can play with. A pet is more fun than a guilt-ridden subby, but … I guess I’ll just have to take what I can get …

Alright, sub. I am going to edge you into a frenzy, and THEN you are going to cum BIG for me ...

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Get on your knees. Then, slap each of your balls HARD 10 times ... I want to see that pained look on your face one more time before we begin our finale ... then, edge once ... we'll do a little edge ladder 1-3-5-CUM ... now EDGE!

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MMMmmmm ... good job, toy ... Your obedience gets me SO wet ... Now, edge three times for me ...

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Oh ... now edge five time! Say, "Thank you for playing with me and letting me cum, mistress!" after EACH one of your edges ...

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Now CUM FOR ME, TOY!!! Enjoy the reward for your obedience!

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Very good, toy. Despite denying my request at the end, I really did have a good time teasing you today ...




I'm sad you weren't able to become my pet today, but ... there will be other opportunities ... maybe ...




... but, while that orgasm was your reward for today's activities ...

... you're still on my shit list.




If you want to get back into my good graces, you'll have to make it up to me ...




You're going to be denied for the next three days. Each day you will be expected to complete a short homework assignment. There will be NO touching yourself outside of these three assignments ...




... and after that, your denial continues ...

On the fourth day, you may touch yourself as you please, but ... you will be DENIED until myself or someone else gives you a full orgasm ... after THAT, you and I will be "even" and you may go back to "business as usual" ...


See you tomorrow, slut! And after that, the day after and the day after ... If you won't agree to being my pet, then the least I can do is build you up to make you more compliant for the next mistress ... maybe then you can really live up to your name ... GoodGirl ...

“I’m not sure, but … I want to try, Caprice!”

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Good girl ... THAT is what I wanted to hear! Keep edging, slut.




I know you don't like edge holds, but ...




... that is exactly why we are going to do them!




You're going to look into my eyes as you hold the edge, and seeing that sad but brave little look on your face while you edge for me ...




... it's going to send ME over the edge again and AGAIN!! It's just SO fucking hot--I won't be able to stand it!




But don't worry, toy ... we'll start the edge holds short and gradually lengthen them ...




The trick is to hit the edge but not ride it too closely ...




You have to maintain that edge and discomfort without falling off completely ...




OH! ... You're going to suffer SO GOOD for me, toy!

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Okay, first edge hold ... 5 seconds! [Don't worry about following any of your other rules ... just do the holds for Caprice, resting in between as you need to.]

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10 seconds! Look me in the eyes! I want to see how you suffer for me!

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15 seconds. Don't hold back--but don't push yourself too far, either!

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20 seconds. How high will the count go? Does not knowing make you nervous?

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25 seconds. Keep yourself in that uncomfortable place, where you want to cum but can't! FUCK that's SO hot! You're going to make me cum again, GoodGirl!

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30 seconds. Suffer for me, toy. Thank me--out loud--for letting you hold the edge this long for me!

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45 seconds. Now beg me! Beg me out loud to let you hold the edge even longer, GoodGirl! Don't stop begging until your time for this edge is complete!

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Very well, toy! Hold the edge--one minute! Now, beg me to let you ruin! I'm going to give you permission, but ONLY if you can ride the edge for a full minute without falling off! If you fall off, try again. [Stay on the edge as you open the next spoiler.]

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Now, RUIN THAT ORGASM FOR ME!! Push yourself over, then HANDS OFF!!

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How was it? I'm sure you didn't like it, but ... was ruining for me enough to make it an enjoyable experience?


[Break for now. Your rules are temporarily suspended.]


"It was, Caprice!"

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That's SO good to hear ... my pet!




Oh, GoodGirl ... your obedience and devotion are something I have been searching for for a while ...




I've finally found a pet who truly wants to be my pet ...




You've made your mistress very happy today, GoodGirl ...




... you really are my good little girl ...

"I REALLY tried, Caprice, but ... I failed. If I'm being honest, the sting of the ruin beat out the physical pleasure of trying to please you ..."

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All you can do is try ... pet.




That’s right. I called you “pet.”




You gave it your all, but ... it just didn't happen ... and that's okay.




Your willingness to try and surrender is what matters most to me. Your honesty is commendable.




If your aversion to edge holding and ruins physically outweighs the pleasure of pleasing me, then ... perhaps that is something we can correct in training ... my pet.




We'll just keep building you up and making you do the things you don't want to do, until that inner good girl's strength improves to the point you will do anything for your mistress and truly enjoy it!

I gave my answer ...

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I don't often find myself becoming attached to my toys, GoodGirl, but ... you're my pet now.




The "strong, dominant mistress" that everyone sees is who I really am--it's NOT just a "persona"--but ...




... sometimes, a girl just needs to let her hair down ...




I don't do that with everybody, GoodGirl.




You've demonstrated you're a person I trust, because you've proven yourself to be someone who is selfess and ACTUALLY cares about me ... and that's rare.




Now, my pet--I'm going to take care of those blue balls.

You've been SUCH a good girl ... You've done SO many nice things for me ... I think it's time I do something REALLY nice for you ...


[You may take a break for up to 10 minutes while Caprice prepares.]

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[Start in "normal mode."]

Oh, my little pet! What a good girl you are!

You've done everything I have asked and given your best effort ...




Are you ready for your reward?




Are you trying to sneak a look at my pussy! Naughty girl!




... but, you've been so good ... I'll allow it.

Edge for me. ["Edge Slut Mode" on]




In fact, you've been SO good, that I am going to allow you a "special privilege" ...




Your normal rules are suspended. For the rest of the tease, you may stroke and edge for me without limit. I want you to enjoy yourself ... we're not in a rush--unless you want to be!

*I* would prefer to end slowly and take our time--so we can spend even more time together ... that's what would make me happy, but ... You've made me cum SO MANY times today ... I think you've earned the privilege of setting the pace, so ... if the teasing has just been too much, and you need to finish quickly ... I'll allow it THIS time, pet.




Okay, I lied ... First, I want three edges from you, AND, I want you to acheive them by stroking slowly ...

... before I hand you a little bit of decision-making power, I just want to take in the sight of you patiently and devotedly stroking for me one more time ...




Alright, pet ... Now you may stroke and edge as you please--at whatever pace you wish, however much you like ... You're just SO devoted to me ... I feel like removing the limits will give you a chance to really impress me, but ... you may proceed as you wish. You've earned this "special privilege" ...




And now, for the matter of your orgasm ...

Today, I found my beloved, favorite new pet ... Today is a day to celebrate! I want you to feel REALLY good, GoodGirl, when you cum for me, and I want you to cum a HUGE load!

I want to feel like a queen, giving her handsome knight a reward after returning victorious from his long quest ... Ask me anything you like, and I will grant your request ... but you have to ask for permission first, my pet ...




Now kneel for me--as a sign of respect and submission. Ask for what you want, and I will grant it.




[This next section is "free form." You may explore the options in any order you wish, and even repeat and go back to them if you want. Each option includes a "May I cum, please?" Choose one of these, when you are ready to cum. Take your time and enjoy. After you have cum, finish the tease by opening the "Thank you for letting me cum, Mistress Caprice ..." spoiler.]

May I eat out your pussy again, Mistress Caprice?

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You mean this pussy? Very well, pet. If that will make you happy ... I know eating me out will make ME very happy ...




[Eat Caprice out for as long as you like. You may stroke and edge as you do so.]




May I cum for you while eating you out, Mistress Caprice?

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Yes you may, pet! CUM HARD for me!

May I look deeply into your eyes, Mistress Caprice?

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Of course you may, pet!




Looking into your eyes, I get to see into your soul ... observing your affection and desire for me makes me so happy ... and wet.




May I cum for you while looking into your eyes, Mistress Caprice?

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Yes you may, pet! CUM HARD for me!

May I marvel at your magnificent breasts, Mistress Caprice?

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Yes you may, pet!




Seeing you so aroused at my boobies turns me on, too ...




May I cum for your breasts, Mistress Caprice?

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Yes, you may--CUM HARD AND DON'T HOLD BACK!!

May I inspect your asshole and pussy, Mistress Caprice?

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Of course you may, pet! Whatever you ask, I will grant!




May I inspect them more closely?

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Please do! Watching you enjoy my body fills me with the warmest kind of pleasure, pet!




May I cum for your asshole and pussy, Mistress Caprice?

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Absolutely! Just make sure you cum VERY HARD for me!

I came ...

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Oh, pet ... our time together today was glorious ...




You just have to keep the details of this last encounter between us ... The "nice domme treatment" from me is only something my "special pets" get to experience ...




... and you have to earn it ...




... every time ...




... but, knowing what a "good girl" you are ...




... I don't think that will be something that's particularly hard for you ...




... It'll just take a lot of effort.




Well, I better go ... Sofi's in Kyla's basement right now, getting punished in all sorts of ways ... I have to complete her punishment, then return her to Leeroy ...




Leeroy wanted to send Sofi over to tease you as a "reward" for all of your hard work on the thread ... Of course, I turned his "reward" into more of a torture for you, but ... I did manage to reward you--in my own way.




I think at the end of my time with Sofi today, I'll have her eat me out. It's certainly something you like, but ... It would be a nice, fitting punishment for her ... then I'll return her to Leeroy COMPLETELY denied and horny ...

Of course, if you ever want me to truly punish you cruelly, I can do that ... Today was a picnic compared to the things I have been known to do ...




Just make sure you piss off some OTHER mistress--and ask her to let ME punish you!




After seeing the lengths you were willing to go for me and your sincerity ... I just don't think you're capable of pissing me off enough to get me to that level ... and if you DID, it would break my heart, pet ...




... so, if you're fishing for THAT kind of punishment, I can deliver ... Just promise me you'll remain my good and faithful pet--okay?




I almost feel bad about how cruel I'm being to Sofi today ... almost.

But, when I get to dominate two girls at once, and one is CLEARLY "good" and the other is CLEARLY "bad," well ... it's just so hard NOT to compare them ...

... next to you, poor Sofi never stood a chance!




Short term subs is one thing, but, long term ... I kind of agree with Malena ... Masters and mistresses really need to keep the well-being of their subs in mind ... I know *I* wouldn't agree to being ANYONE'S sub long-term--unless I knew they actually had my best interests at heart ...

Expecting more and pushing boundaries to reach even greater levels of pleasure is one thing ... In fact, I don't think I would submit to a master who wasn't like that, who didn't occasionally attempt to push me out of my comfort zones ...




I'm just not sure about Leeroy--if he understands all of that ... He probably thinks being a master is just about giving orders and having fun, which, I mean, it IS, but ... there is a LOT more to it than that!

I think I will strongly recommend he eat Sofi out tonight. I am pushing her pretty hard today. I mean, she deserves all of this punishment and it WILL make her a better mistress, but ... Leeroy should REALLY TRY to "model" what a "good dom" looks like for her ... I'm curious to see if he would actually follow my advice, plus ...




... I'd like to hear from somebody firsthand about how good Leeroy is at eating pussy.

I doubt he's as good as you, but ... That's a piece of information I would like to have--before I make any long-term decisions, you know?




Anyways, I better go ...

This was nice, GoodGirl! Now that I've tested your dedication myself and seen what a good pet you are, maybe we can start things off more ... softly. Now that you are one of my "special pets," perhaps I don't need to treat you so harshly, but ... if you wanted to be "harshly punished" AND move up from "special pet" to my FAVORITE pet ... there's something you could do for me ... next time you're with a mistress who isn't me ...




... disobey her. It doesn't have to be the "next mistress" per se, but ... If you want to move up in the sub rankings for ME ... I need to see even MORE dedication from you!

You ARE a true "alpha level" beta ... it's not in your nature to displease and disappoint your mistresses, but ... I like it when you do things that you don't like to do! And ... when you do shit like that for ME ... it makes me want you even more ...

It can be ANY mistress you like, even one you don't particularly care for, but ... it needs to be MORE than an "accident." You need to straight up disobey her ... Yes, it'll hurt your reputation, and in the moment, you will HATE disappointing her--I know--but ... if becoming my favorite pet is something you want, well ... you have to do something to show you are worthy of becoming mutual favorites with me ... and pissing someone else off--when it isn't in your nature and goes against your core--and doing it JUST to please me ... it will show that you don't just want to be EVERYONE'S pet ... what you REALLY want is to become my favorite pet ... and how can a girl say "no" when her pet shows that kind of commitment and loyalty to her?




But, if you want to be more of a "community slut," I understand ... We're all lucky to have you on the thread, GoodGirl, and ... and after today, I will ALWAYS consider you one of my "special pets", but ... Well, just think about my offer, and, if you accept ...


... I'm sure I'll hear ALL about it from the other girls!

See you around, pet!

I took the first option ...

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I'll put the three days of denial homework here ...

LeeroyJerkins wrote: Mon May 23, 2022 10:01 am

Mini set for leeroy

#leeroyjerkinsset
#wbEcik17

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You run into malena…who looks like she has been out all night. She seems tired, but excited…
Leeroy! If it’s not too late, I got a last minute application to join our 5 day set! It’s from Ecik17! He and I just had an interesting talk about it…

Ecik only edges for pussy and cum. He will edge for other things as well..but we will have to make him. It may actually be meaner to force him to stroke, and punish him for edging…

Also…he hates hentai…but likes almost everything else! He likes all body types…but prefers realistic bodied women doing perverted things…. I asked him to show me 8 examples… and he showed me thisShe shows you some photos…

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As you can see…once you get past all of the cum, bondage, and lingerie, you can see that ..he likes normal looking women, being lewd, and the nastier the better! he has nothing against slim thin models…but he prefers a lady with an ass that can fit his palmprint on one cheek if he spanks her…full tits he can grab…a waist you need 2 hands to control when fucking. Is that too much to ask for?

I asked him who his goddess was, and he showed me this photo..

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I asked him for another photo of Angela white…without cum on her face…and he didn’t have one. All of them had cum…Like I said. Ecik is pretty perverted. Oh, and leeroy? One more thing. Ecik is a switch!

I…spent some time tied up listening to music.you don’t need the details…but I’ll share with you what we listened to. You should stroke to the beat…and cum at the end, if you can!

Anyway, this Ecik fellow…I’m thinking we should consider him. But we will have to be careful to not give him any loopholes!

Malena puts back on her clothes and leaves, but not before playing this video. Stroke to the beat, cum at the end if you can.
https://xhamster.com/videos/ass-apocalypse-12291769

Ecik17 wrote: Mon May 16, 2022 4:28 am

The drama continues on our HMCP Milovana Original soap opera: "Days of Our Jerkins." Last time (in the set linked in the quote), Caprice surprised Leeroy with a friendly visit where she revealed she had been going through his mail ... and sorting the 30 applications he had received for subs! And now, the EXCITING continuation ...

Dear Caprice,

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You threatened to withhold yourself from me, but I just knew you couldn't stay away. I knew you came at the behest of Ecik (Naughty girl!), but I find it quite odd that you show me an ass pic "from him" of YOU in BONDAGE!


What are you trying to communicate to me, my darling?

I'll be honest ... THIRTY APPLICATIONS of women to be me sub! ... at first it was a little overwhelming ... daunting ... unexpected--but don't tell anyone I was nervous at first! Many perceive me as unflappable, indomitable, brazen, humorous, brilliant, witty, and jaw-droppingly handsome ... and indeed, I am ALL those things. I am ALL those things and more. But, I am human. I bleed red, piss yellow, shit brown, and cum white. At times, despite my deepest, sincerest efforts, my human weaknesses manifest and slay my better angels. (Weak little fuckers ... don't get slayed, fools! ) Perhaps it is wishful thinking that you might one day become my switch-girlfriend, or, perhaps it is my deep, pulsating infatuation for you ... but, whatever it is, sometimes I feel like I can share things with you that I would share with no one else, so ... come what may, I will say that I was nervous about the prospect of having 30 women interested in me at the same time ... but, that was a brief, fleeting moment ... because a few seconds later, it hit me what a macho, studmuffin, panty-collecting, lady killer I am!

Anyway, sorting the applications for me ... I have some thoughts on that ...

First, thank you. As my sub, I will be assigning you menial tasks that I don't want to do from time to time, so ... I thought it was quite a proactive move on your part to begin practicing for that sort of thing.

Second, I felt your instincts on some of the applicants were quite good and immediately recognized the superior wisdom and insight of an alpha such as yourself at work in the decision-making process. But, I believe in fairness. I don't think that we should just be throwing applications away. (Well, maybe some of the uggos ...) The Leeroy Jerkins is a man who believes in equality AND merit. Equal opportunity, BUT ... you gotta PROVE that you can do it. As part of the application process, before I accept ANYONE as a sub, they are going to need to complete an interview which contains three parts:

1: Teasing (strip tease)
2: Submission/bondage (taking commands and/or getting kinky)
3: Service (POV sex and blowjobs and/or JOI ... ability to get me off)

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Hmmm ... funny that ... one could ALMOST select 3 different photo galleries and script them according to certain themes and fit an entire interview snugly into a single set ... interesting ...

As I consider these to be the three pillars of what it means to be a good sub, I would want to make sure--personally--that EACH applicant was able to achieve HIGH marks in EACH category ... So, in the "spirit of fairness", I think that, perhaps ... I should interview EVERY woman who applies ... I mean, I can't command 30 subs--ain't NOBODY got time for that--NOT EVEN THE LEEROY! BUT ... if women want to prostrate themselves in front of me and BEG to allow me to let them become my sub ... and work REALLY hard to demonstrate that they are worthy of the position ... who am *I* to deny them that opportunity? It would be CRUEL to tell them no!

As for the Red Fox, I agree ... Leeroy's got ENOUGH drama in his life ... don't need no more from a succubi ... Been there, done that, bought the t-shirt ... PASS!!

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It's a XXXXL, and it's a LITTLE big for me ... I want to say it fit me when I bought it, and there was definitely some demonic transmogrification going on (I distinctly remember having horns for some reason that night ...), but ... If you wanna borrow it and use it as a blanket or a beach towel, I wouldn't mind ... It has this REALLY cool print of a goat--fucking a llama. I'm cool with interracial marriage, so ... well ... the purchase made sense to me at the time ...

As for Angela White and Kyla Cole ... you SAY that those were troll applications, but ... I don't think we should be so hasty! Now again, imma let down my hair with you and say, that ... in certain moments of weakness (when my better angels are absent, off wanking in the clouds and spurting cum clouds of their own) sometimes I get insecure. Having such POWERFUL, DOMINANT women subbing for me ... that'd be SUPER hot, yo! MAYBE it's a trick, BUT ... on the chance that it is NOT ... How can I pass that up!? I will assume the risk.

DAMN, lady spider--you spinning webs for me again!? This some kind of trap? Well, imma fool. Imma do it!

Now, MAYBE it IS possible that such BEAUTIFUL alpha honeys are EXACTLY like you--hidden switches that want a bad boy alpha to just wreck them physically, mentally, and sexually ... I mean I AM the hottest dom around here.

::Looks around. Sees NO ONE else.::

See!? I AM ... ain't NO ONE else around here trying to get into the dom game like your boy Leeroy Jerkins! Imma trailblazer, bby! This thread has been up 3 and a half years. I seen a lot of subby switch posers, but ain't NO ONE with a dick domming around here ... your boy Leeroy came, and that trend is gonna reverse! I came to change the GAME. It's a switch revolution. Just call me George Washington. I came to raise up the switch wanker army. In six months, I GUARANTEE I won't be the only switch on here with subs. BELIEVE IT! These scrubs just need a leader. Someone who inspires and can show them the way. I am that man.

Anyway ... you's a CRAFTY lady spider, Caprice. I feel like you just laid out the PERFECT trap for me ... My DOM side be like, "MMmmmm ... Angela and Kyla for subs? ... Yes, please! " But ... my SUB side be like ... "If this is a trap ... Yes, please! " It's too big a pick up opportunity to IGNORE even if it DON'T pan out, and ... it's gonna be something if it's a trap, too ... Damn, babe! Your mind games are NEXT LEVEL. That's part of the reason I fell SO HARD for you!

The OTHER thing ... is that SOME of them girlies that applied ... I REALLY liked ... like I REALY REALLY liked ... some, it was just the Mr. Libido talking, but ... some it was the Mr. Libido DEMANDING, so ... we might have to revisit some of those in your discard pile--I mean they ALL gotta apply ... I mean ... those girlies ALL deserve at LEAST a CHANCE to interview ...

Now, the THIRD thing ... see, as you was going through the applications, my brain got to wandering a bit ... See, you don't always take the time to grace me with your WONDERFUL presence, so ... I was enamored by your alphaness and goddess level honey looks, and goddess level honey brains ... and THEN I got to thinking, "What if this wasn't a solo gig for me? What if--instead--this was us going through apps for subs for us ..."

I started imagining us--"Leprice"--That's our "power couple name" btw, (because Cap-roy SUCKS DONKEY BALLZ). I get the first two letters--because I'm the front man for us, but ... you get more letters because your the ROCK of our switch-switch relationship ... So, I start picturing us BOTH clad in leather, sipping wine, sitting in the living room of our palatial mountain villa. We're laughing, talking, going over sub applications for BOTH of us ... there's a LINE of subs waiting outside the door to be let in to interview ... but fuck them. WE'RE the doms. THEY are the subs, and let's face it ... our alpha laughter and making them wait while we talk about how SHIT the applications are ... that just makes them MORE hot for us.

So, as you're reading through applications for ME ... I'm just dreaming about how MUCH MORE AMAZING it would be if we were doing it TOGETHER ... as a TEAM.

I'm straight and you're bi, so ... OBVIOUSLY you get all the boys ... but ... we'd share the girls. What's yours is yours and what's mine is ours. See!?! I would TOTALLY be MORE than fair ...

... and THEN you got into the final 5 applicants--YOUR top picks for me. See? Picking out SUBS ... for ME! You'd be THE BEST switch-girlfriend EVER ... if ONLY you'd say YES!

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"Don't cry, Leeroy ... you'll come off as desperate! Just put on those "cool guy" sunglasses to cover ... NO ONE will notice the tears if you do that ..."

And THIS is where things STARTED to get out of hand ...

You said, "And then there was ..." which got me wondering: What if, you snuck your OWN application into the pile. WHAT IF you were ABOUT TO TELL ME THAT YOU HAD APPLIED FOR A SUB POSITION!

That thought started as a seed, and then it began to grow.

As for the top five, there was some redhead chick who was pretty hot ... then some Asian girl who was SUPER fine ... some slutty chick who liked to give sloppy blowjobs ... and THEN ... there was Nancy Ace ...

Now, Nancy ... She's like my NUMBER ONE goddess fantasy girl ... As pretty as YOU are, I don't know ... Nancy is just like PERFECT to me ... as misogynistic as it is, I've got my goddesses ranked in my rules from hottest to still goddess ... ALL them honeys are DAMN FINE ... and the rankings DO change, so--just saying--if you tried a LITTLE harder, you might move up ... A lotta times, the ladies just want to know where they stand with me, and the Leeroy--he's an open book. I'm like one of them Japanese school teachers who posts ALL the grades outside the classroom door. EVERYBODY sees their rank, and ... the competition is GOOD. Clear communication is best. And the competition just, well ... it inspires the best in EVERYONE, and ... I just want them goddess honeys to be the BEST they can be--you feel me?

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"I REALLY hope she bought that ... Yessss ... She DEFINITELY did ... "

So, I was fapping and edging to my NUMBER ONE goddess fantasy girl, but ... something funny was happening. That little seed--that little idea that just MAYBE you snuck YOUR OWN application into the mix, I ... I ... I-I just could NOT stop thinking about that! THIRTY applications ... SMOKING hot babes ... and YOU ... YOU picked out some of these for me! I was like, "Maybe she just thinks she's doing me a solid," or "Maybe she's trying to get me a sub to get me off her case ..." ... and SOMEHOW, I manage to pull NANCY fucking ACE in my pile of sub apps (and, smart girl that you are, you recognize talent, and decided to send some my way ) ...

... and like, if it was ANYBODY else, I woulda been SO focused on Nancy and so HAPPY she was considering subbing for me, but ... I just kept thinking about you, Caprice ... I didn't care about the WHOLE STACK OR MY NUMBER ONE GODDESS NANCY ACE ... I realized in that moment, the ONLY girl I truly wanted for a sub ... was you.

And then you said,

Anyway, last, but not least, is …

And I thought, "OH, SHIT!! THIS IS IT!!! THIS NEXT ONE IS GOING TO BE CAPRICE!!! PLEASE, PLEASE PLEASE, PLEASE LET IT BE CAPRICE!" So there I am, fapping away, tryin to edge toNancy's ass--my FAVORITE body part on my FAVORITE girl--and there *I* am, saying, "Please, Caprice! PLEASE, CAPRICE!" Over and over ... and as HOT as Nancy's ass is, the thing that is REALLY getting me the MOST excited ... is the thought that maybe YOU had finally relented and accepted my invitation to become switch-partners ... Like, my switch-queen is just TEASING me and got this brilliant play all planned out, and I'm just sitting on the edge (literally) HOPING my dream is about to come true ...

... and then it was some other random chick that I don't even remember ... the only important thing was that it was NOT you.

So, then you finished going through the applications. You probably didn't notice--because I was playing it SUPER cool ... but ... I was GUTTED--ABSOLUTELY gutted ... but, then, you coulda went all vindictive domme on me (which WOULD have been hott, btw ) but instead, since I FAILED that last ass quiz and you earned a "mistress privilege point" ... you COULD have ruined or denied me, but ... you did the CLASSY thing, and let me cum ... Thanks, babe!

Now, you were a little chilly and did NOT show me your ass ONE TIME (except that INCREDIBLY hot pic in the beginning, which you DEFINITELY did NOT encourage "Ecik" to "choose" ::cough, cough, wink, wink::), but ... I had SUCH a nice time--because I got to hang out wich YOU --That I almost didn't care that you didn't flash your ass at me ... (ALMOST ... almost didn't care ...)

So, here's the thing ... YOU said I could cum (which was classy--VERY classy ), and you said,

In the meanwhile, I’ll just leave their applications here…and you can cum on them all you want…

which we BOTH know you meant it literally, and we BOTH know--cumslut that I am --that under NORMAL circumstances, that PROBABLY would have happened ... So, you left, and you walked away ... and ... BECAUSE I was playing it SO COOL ( ) You probably had NO IDEA how much I was DYING that you did NOT include your OWN application ... so, you left probably thinking that you did a good thing for me, but ... you kinda didn't ... you thoughtfully gave me a PILE of GREAT applications, but ... for whatever the reason, you left out the ONE APPLICATION THAT I WANTED THE MOST ...

Now, I could cum on the applications as much as I wanted, and I am SURE you EXPECTED me to be POURING over the applications, looking for the HOTTEST ass pic that I could fine and blowing ALL OVER IT--and on a NORMAL DAY, you woulda been right ... but while I wasn't denied in my cock, you denied me in a WORSE place--my heart--and my DREAMS, and ... well, anyway ... just remember that when I tell you the part that happened next ... I just gotta PROMISE you won't get mad ... 'kay?

So, you figured you were in the clear and I would be good with just cumming to some ass pics, now ... there was ONE ass pic of you in the pile, but ... it wasn't an app, so ... Since you said you did NOT want me cumming for your ass today, i was like, "No, sir, Leeroy! You CANNOT cum on THAT (incredibly hott) pic of Caprice's ass--no way, sir--don't do it--NO HOW ... NOPE!" So, THAT one was out ... BUT ... I, uhh ... you kinda left behind one OTHER shot of you on the pile, and, well ... it wasn't an ASS shot of you, and, well ... you said I just couldn't cum on your ASS, so ... I uh ... I decided to cum on THIS pic:

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LITERALLY came on--like the Sofi pic, but ... I'm not a creep, so ... I didn't photo it and post it AGAIN because that would be, uh ... creepy and gross, you just gotta believe me that I did AGAIN this time ...

Just so you know, it was at THIS TIME, that I decided that, even though you were NOT my mistress--which means I can cum for ANY ass I want as MUCH as I want EXCEPT NEVER for mistresses without their permission ... that, because, well ... You kept getting sad and offended whenever I would cum for your ass whenever *I* wanted, well... I just decided--because I respect you SO much--that ... Well, I am NO LONGER going to cum for your ass UNLESS you give me permission. This is me trying to reach you halfway, okay? You are NOT my mistress, so ... by the PRINCIPLE of it, I can cum for you WHENEVER I want, but ... since, like ... you want to be respected and shit, I ... I decided right then that I would NO LONGER CUM FOR YOUR ASS WITHOUT PERMISSION, so ... That's a thing, now, you're ... you're like a "pseudo-mistress" now until you inevitably accept my switch-switch proposal, which is like, TOTALLY gonna happen, because, like ... you're a secret switch and have been DYING to get subbed on the thread in front of EVERYONE, but ... you-you just never found the right guy, but ... now you have, and it's ME, so ... you being my "pseudo-mistress" is just temporary until you read this letter and accept ... (and if not this one, than after the next, or the next after THAT one ... or the next after THAT one ... etc., etc--you get the idea ...)

Now, here's the thing ... I owed you a RUIN for my next orgasm--since I FAILED that ass quiz. (Damn my lack of KNOWLEDGE about your ASS! If the ass quiz were given again TODAY ... I SWEAR I would do better ... If ONLY someone would give me ANOTHER OPPORTUNITY ...) So, I RUINED my orgasm for you ... I ... as MUCH as I LOVE to cum, it's just ... I just wanted you SO BAD ... I just HAD to do it, because, well ... after I got that ruin out of the way, THEN I could orgasm for you AGAIN--which I DID!

So, my FIRST attempt at a ruin, I didn't push myself very hard ... Nothing came out. I was like, "Dammit! I want to cum WELL for Caprice on the second time ... if I ruin as a trickle, the FULL orgasm will be SO nice, but ... ah, fuck it ... don't fail AGAIN and try to ruin but fail because NOTHING came out, just ... stop being a pussy, do it right, then make the SECOND one great ... " So that's what I did!

So, as I was taking a break from the ruin--waiting for my soldier to recharge--I had a little daydream, and, of course, the daydream was about YOU, so ... allow me to share it with the class ...

This is a mini-set that is "part of the letter" but can also be played as a stand-alone: (Misty and GG, DON'T play it until I give you the "all clear" ... i PROBABLY will have you play it as part of a set ...)

#EveryoneSet
#wbLeeroyJerkins
#wbFattsDynamo

Leeroy's Daydream about Caprice mini-set: (from his third open letter to Caprice for Caprice--AND the various thread wankers who are fans of Caprice ... it's fun and jokey and light-hearted ...)

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I was daydreaming about you and one of your Czech besties: Melisa Mendiny--the CUTEST of ALL of the bubble butt honey goddesses ...

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I was thinking, "Wouldn't it just be THE BEST if I could dom Caprice AND Melisa ... at the SAME TIME! If only Caprice were my switch-girlfriend, I could make this happen--OR ... if I had a fantasy about it, I could just pretend that it was happening, which ... it wouldn't be as good as the real thing, but ... it would be ALMOST as good as the real thing ... and that would be good enough."

So, I was dreaming about domming you AND Melisa at the SAME TIME, and ... You would BOTH just LOVE it-trust me. BELIEVE it! ...

You and Melisa would be sitting on a red couch, and Melisa would say ...

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Melisa: Oh, Caprice--he's SO handsome--it makes me nervous! Do you think we can quench his insatiable lust for our hot, hott bodies!?

Caprice: I don't know, Melisa ... Leeroy IS pretty handsome--and insatiable--but ... I think if we give it our best, we--awww, fuck it ... are you horny, Melisa?

Melisa: Yes. Very.

Caprice: Then let's just forget ourselves, enjoy the moment, and GO FOR IT!!




Caprice: Turn around, Melisa. He likes that ...

Leeroy: Oh, Caprice ... Can you slap Melisa on the ass? NOT because she was bad, it's just ... I want to see it jiggle ...

Caprice: Like this?

Melisa's ass wiggles after Caprice slaps it. She leaves her hand there.

Leeroy: Yes, girls ... that's PERFECT!




Leeroy: Now BEND OVER! Show me the BEST SIGHT in the world!

Caprice and Melisa giggle gleefully. Caprice even slaps her OWN ass--quite handsy, that one ...




Leeroy: Now, onto the couch ... please undress each other a little more ...




Leeroy: Melisa ... the beautiful visage of your ass makes me draw breath and hold it ... I'm SO captivated ... I MIGHT forget to breath ...

Melisa: Well, Leeroy, if you like that ...




Melisa: How about this!

Caprice smiles knowingly.

Leeroy: I-I ... I don't know WHERE to look! EVERY place I turn to look, I end up looking away from something GORGEOUS, to something else that is JUST AS BEAUTIFUL!! You girls are making this VERY hard on me ...


Caprice: But we can do BETTER ...

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Caprice and Melisa get on their knees, exposing their beautiful pussies. Leeroy's nose starts to bleed. Melisa looks back at Leeroy curiously.

Melisa: Is he going to cum soon, Caprice?

Caprice: Never--except when he wants--which is always, but ... don't worry. Leeroy's a cumslut with an above average refractory period, and ... he'll probably eat us out while we wait for his thingy to regrow ...

Melisa: Oh ... okay.




Melisa: Oh, Caprice ... your breasts are IMMACULATE ... I just can't help myself!

Caprice leans into it and arches her back. She's loving every moment of the attention she's getting.




Melisa: Oh, Caprice ... I'm so wet ... being here with you and Leeroy has gotten me SO excited ... with a master dom like him ... My pussy just starts up like a fountain ...

Caprice: Mmmm, I know ... Here, let me lick it up for you, Melisa ...

Leeroy: Bup-bup-bup! Not yet, girls! Onto the bed, first!




Melisa and Caprice: Yes, master!

Leeroy: Now, just pause there a moment, ladies ... You angels have just arrived at heaven's gates, and St. Leeroy needs to inspect your asses--I mean wings--for, uhh ... damage. On your flight here. I heard there was turbulence ...




Leeroy: Now, just lay there nicely and wait a moment ... The waiting builds anticipation ... (And gives me a chance to slide in a few more edges before the main event ...)

Melisa: Oh, Caprice ... I can hardly wait ... I can't stand it--can you! I'm trembling with desires ... will it always be this way with Leeroy?

Caprice: Yes, Melisa. I have had a LOT of experiences with Leeroy, so, I would know, but ... One does get used to it, but ... the trembling from anticipation ... it actually just gets WORSE ... He's THAT GOOD!!

Melisa: Oh, my ...


Leeroy: Melisa, can you lay back on the bed, and Caprice ...

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Caprice begins to lick Melsia's soft and wet pussy.

Leeroy: You--you didn't even need me to ... it's like you read my mind, Caprice!

Caprice: I know what you want, Leeroy ... we've been switch-switch lovers for a while now ...

Leeroy: (This is the BEST dream!)




Melisa: Now, it's MY turn ...


Leeroy: That ... that's REALLY good, Melisa, now, if you could just--

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Melisa: Start rimming Caprice's asshole, master?

Leeroy: Yes! ... yes, please! You're doing what I want BEFORE I even command it!

Caprice: That's how it is with daydreams, master! The subs move as fast as your thoughts!




Melisa: His dick is so ... average in size--but handsome and PERFECTLY formed! I bet he knows how to use it!

Caprice: He does, but ... I think this fantasy is about to end ...

Melisa: How do you know?

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Caprice: He's out of pictures, and, if I'm being honest ... Leeroy can barely handle ONE goddess at a time ... two? Forget-about-it ... He's confident in real life, but, online, he's actually about 40% hype.

Melisa: How do you know all this?

Caprice: Well, he tells REAL Caprice all KINDS of things, hoping the authentic vulnerability will "come off as being attractive," and ... since I'm fantasy Caprice, I know ALL of that, plus, since I come from his head, I know ALL about his ...

Leeroy: Okay, okay ... fantasy OVER ...

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So, THEN I had ANOTHER fantasy ... NOT about domming, but, since I'm a switch and was dreaming about you being my switch girlfriend, it was about that ...

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... We were at one of our scenic, country villas ... you were perched on a chair when you said ...

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Caprice: And why do we need ANOTHER mansion in France? We already have TWO!




Leeroy: Yes ... one outside of Paris, and one in the south of France on the Mediterranean coast, but ... we need one on the NORTH COAST, TOO! Sometimes I like to swim the English channel for my morning exercises! It helps to keep me youthful. I thought you appreciated my stamina in bed. Weren't you just saying you wanted to pick up another DOZEN subs next month? Switch Daddy needs his exercise ... you need me FIT!




Caprice: When I agreed to be your switch-girlfriend, Leeroy, I knew we would become the premier switch-switch power couple of Milovana, but ... Well, I guess I just never realized that there was SUCH a vacuum for switch-switch power couples in the world, that we would immediately rise to prominience, instantly find funding from deep pockets on the dark web, and begin our meteoric, global rise to fame all inside of a single week ... forgive me if I haven't adjusted yet ...




Leeroy: It's fine, Caprice. Fame hits us all in different ways. It's like grief. It affects everyone differently. *I* was born for it. You clawed your way to the top ... This ... it's just at another level. Give it another week, and I am SURE you'll be used to it by then ... You'll be SURPRISED at how quickly you'll adjust!

Caprice: So, who's the acting dominant right now?

Leeroy: It's you.

Caprice: Oh, good ...




Caprice: Then edge for me, Leeroy. Three times. Hold the last one. 30 seconds. Don't break eye contact with me while you hold, and ... slap your balls and say, "Thank you mistress!" while you ride the edge!

Leeroy: Damn you, you unholy, sexy vixen! I lust you SO much right now!

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Caprice: Being the world's first openly switch-switch power couple is EXHAUSTING! It's not even lunch and I'm already tired!

Leeroy: I know what you mean! And there are already a dozen subs lined up outside, waiting to be interviewed!

Caprice: Any talent?

Leeroy: Not really ... well, some. This one gal wrote "scrappy in the bedroom" on her application.

Caprice: Oooo ... I like that. She sounds fun ... Does she give good head?

Leeroy: I don't know ... I guess we'll both find out soon enough ...




Caprice: There is no one else IN THE WORLD I would rather be in a switch-switch relationship with than you, Leeroy darling!

Leeroy: And I you, Caprice ... and I you ...

Say, it's my turn now in our completely egalitarian and interesting switch-switch relationship ... say, subby dear ... would you sit up on the table and ... flash your ass at me?

Caprice: Only if you say, "Pretty please, mistress!" And bat your eyes at me while you say it!

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Leeroy: Fuck that--sit up on the table, bitch! And flash your ass AND pussy at me ... I want a SHOW!

Caprice takes it in stride, knowing she'll have her turn in a moment.




Leeroy: Now, bridge position, Caprice! Show me your flexibility! I want to be reminded why I tried SO HARD to make you my sub ...

Caprice: First of all, are you trying to piss me off?

Leeroy: ... yes.

Caprice: Is it because you want me to punish you?

Leeroy: ... yes.

Caprice: Leeroy! That stunt would be getting old by now--if it wasn't so IRRESISTABLY cute!

Leeroy: ... I know.

Caprice: Don't keep going back to the "well of bastards" every time you want to be punished, Leeroy ... you HAVE to mix it up ...

Leeroy: Okay, you're right, Caprice ... As the era-defining switch-switch global power couple of the age, I really must do better to up my game.

Caprice: Thank you.

Leeroy: Now, ARCH dammit!




Caprice: Yes, master!

Leeroy: That was a supportive yell, by the way.

Caprice: I know, Leeroy. It's only been a week, but ... I'm already familiar with ALL of your various screams, shouts, moans, groans, sighs, and gasps and their myriad intonations.

Leeroy: You're amazing.

Caprice: Yes, I know, master. And second ... *I* was the one who tried harder to make you MY sub ...

Leeroy: I've finished my edges. Now get down, and explain yourself.




Caprice: Well, YOU were the one who started putting all this red tape between us--passing "ass quizzes" and "doing interviews" ... *I* was the one who just said, "Fuck it, I just can't STAND not being your mistress-sub ... just cum on my ass already, master, and let's get this shit ROLLING!"

Leeroy: You make a good point, Caprice.




Caprice: Call in the "scrappy girl." She's going to shove this up my cunt, then YOU are going to lick my clit till I cum FIVE times why she sucks YOU off ... then, we'll switch.

Ha! Get it? "Switch!?"

Leeroy: I see what you did there, Caprice ... My affection ONLY grows more for you--truly!

Caprice: THEN, *I* am gonna shove this thing up YOUR ass, give you a tug job, and scrappy girl will eat ME out ...

Leeroy: I'll get scrappy right away, mistress!

(WOW my switch-girlfriend is a genius ... We'll BOTH get head--in the SAME scene--and we can "yay" or "nay" a sub applicant in 30 minutes ... 15 if I can up my tongue game and scrappy "warms up" my asshole while she's jerking me ...)




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Leeroy: Shove that glass dildo in there, scrappy! She can take it! That hole has seen FAR LARGER!! Not mine, but ... We've got some tentacle scenes next month in Japan that Nancy is organizing for us ... The Japanese don't impress easily, but ... We need Caprice taking MUCH MORE THAN THAT if we are going to make waves ... pun INTENDED!!




Caprice: WHAT did you just say, scrappy? Did you just say you wanted to implant Leeroy's seed into my baby hole ... with your butt!?

Leeroy: She's a keeper, Caprice! I don't care if she sucks at giving head ... we're taking her to Japan FOR SURE, and that is FINAL! They are into some FREAKY shit over there, and we NEED to--

Caprice: "Make waves." Yes, I heard you the first time ... I have my doubts, but ... as the better half to the world's first premier switch-switch power couple ... I trust you implicitly, Leeroy!

Now, get over here and start licking!


Leeroy: Yes, mistress!

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Caprice: FUCK that feels tight ... now, get in here with that god-tongue of yours, Leeroy! Remind me why I chose you for my dom-sub ...


Seeing Caprice spread eagle reminded me of ANOTHER time I remember her spread ...

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When she was part of a Russian cabal of secret porn agents led by Michaela Isizzu that had captured me in a ...

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... "Russian Invasion."

Caprice was spread eagle ... helpless.




I fastened her ball gag and prepared my ram rod ...

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... until I "snapped out of it," remembered I was ONLY daydreaming, and saw again, the picture before me ... All of those applications spread out on the floor before me ... and Caprice, awaiting my cum ...

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So, there I was ... I had already ruined ONE orgasm on that picture ... After some imaginative fantasizing, I was locked and loaded and ready to cum ... so I did.

I came again on that BEAUTIFUL picture of you that was NOT your ass ... and that's when it hit me. That picture was on TOP of the ENTIRE STACK of applications. My cum soaked through them and RUINED THEM ALL!

Now, was it an "accident" that I maliciously destroyed ALL of the other applications (the ones that didn't matter, because the ONLY one I wanted was yours ) through honest mistakes, as some kind of grand romantic gesture that MIGHT prove once and for all that I'm the switch-boyfriend you NEED in your life ... Yes? No? Maybe? Who's to say, I mean ... honestly ... WHO'S to say ... I mean ... only GOD can know and judge a man's intentions ... right?

I think what we need to focus on right now, is the fact that the ONLY application that DOES matter ... is yours, Caprice! And ... it's safe, right? Is it in the mail? Saved safely, in the cloud, in the draft folder of your Milovana email account? PLEASE tell me it is AT LEAST backed up on your desktop/laptop AND an external drive ... You need TWO locations ... If it's sitting into your printer tray--that counts! Do you need to borrow a stamp? I got you, babe! It's a little archaic, but ... fuck ... I would EVEN set up my fax machine and add a WIRED phone connection and monthly bill back into my life if THAT is what it took to get your application--NO trouble those things ... ANY of them at all, sweetie ... just ... waiting for that application ... the ONLY sub application that matters ...

If you're STILL thinking about it, hey, that's cool ... no big deal, take your time ... no sense "jumping into a switch-switch relationship" and becoming the threads FIRST switch-switch power couple, you know ... BIG commitment ... LOT to consider there on that ... anonymous Internet forum ... yeah, it's uh ... pretty high risk ... FOR SURE ...

But, "real talk" for a minute here ...

Maybe sometimes you feel lonely … like no one understands you ... You got this "subby side" that you feel you can't let out, and ... maybe that is something you WANT to let out sometimes ... and, maybe you don't feel like you can here, or ... maybe you haven't met the right person yet?

[NOBODY else read this EXCEPT Caprice ("Interpol" and yada-yada-yada...)]

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I'm new at this, but ... you seem REALLY experienced, and ... I think I could learn a LOT from you, and ... it could be whatever you want ... I've been talking to Malena and Helequin and thinking about what kind of dom I want to be ... Sofi's whatever--she's my "nemesis sub" ... who KNOWS how long THAT will last, but ... I want to be known as the "Platinum Dom."

The "Golden Rule" is "Do unto others as you would have them do unto you," but, the PLATINUM, rule, well ... that's ONE step higher, it's "Treat others the way THEY want to be treated." I want to do that with my subs. Malena's been teaching me that being a master is NOT only about doing the things that YOU want to do and having power and shit ... To be a good dom, you gotta be a LITTLE bit selfless and "plugged in" to what your subs want, so ... I want to be able to do that for MY subs ...

I'll ALWAYS respect you, Caprice, and if you REALLY don't want to go switch-halves-ys with me, that's cool, but ... at THIS point ... I don't think I could EVER become "just" your sub ... it's switch-switch or NOTHING ... I'm sure we'll see each other around, but ... I will NOT call you "Mistress" unless I can ALSO call you "sub" ... and that's just the way it's gotta be!

... and that's when she said, "DAMN, Leeroy! That is the BIGGEST load I have EVER seen ... and it was your FIFTH one? Did I count that right?" And I was like, "Yeah, baby! Go big or go home! The Leeroy ALWAYS saves the best for last ... you know it! "

... and THAT is why you should be my sub AND my mistress, Caprice.

Whelp, see you around, future switch-girlfriend! As the ONLY male switch-dom on the thread with a sub, I just HAVE to get out there and represent ...

That Sofi ... DAMN she is fine, but FUCK if she isn't trouble! Needs a strong hand, that one ... Fortunately, the Leeroy ... he's has TWO. Made strong from years of ...masturb- ...master-gripping those squeezy weights at the gym ... yup!

Let me know if you want in on the Five Day Set, girl! Nobody's been asking for you ... YET, but ... it's probably because they aren't sure whether or not you are available yet, so ... just holler at Malena's people if you want to ... SHit. I AM Malena's people, cause I'm her sub ... fuck. Well ... just let me know if you want in, and, uh ... Yeah, we'll make some room for ya. More the merrier, right! Sofi would LOVE to have another sub of mine to work alongside ... JUST saying!

Be well, girl! Catch you on the flipside!

Leeroy OUT!!!!

GoodGirl wrote:

Feedback for GoodGirl

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Better late then never.
Thanks for the set. I had a lot of fun. Story was good, simple and not to complex. I like it.
The pics are very nice choosen. The Lenght was ok, but I dont like the Beach part where there is no text just, pics. This kind of picture series with no text is ok for like 5 to 10 pics or so, but this was way too long for my liking.
I really liked the Ballbusting Part. Iam really into CBT recently, eventough my hits arent that hard.
Iam really into Feet. There were plenty of them thanks.
I choose to Ruin my Orgasm... just one more Edge that would have been so easy... well nice move of yours.

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Iam sorry Girl, but Iam not into piercing at all.

Favorite pics

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I love how elsa covers the pussy.

I love this picture. And the sand on the asses.

The way she covers her pussy. I love it.

Fb on FB for Good Girl

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The Set was kind of risky, because I dindt knew anything about your Relation to Feet. Iam happy it was the was it was. You werent supposed to like them but either dont hate them.

I like your added Rule for Feet. In no Time you will like Feet, just like tits, ass or pussys.

Her Name is Lauren Chelsea

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MY RULES:

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Horny_CHabos Rules

Basic Rules (everything accumulating!!!)
Girl 20 Strokes (per Girl)
Pussy +1 Edge (per Pussy)
Ass +20 Strokes (per Ass)
Tits +20 Strokes (10 per Tit)
Feet +20 Strokes (10 per Foot) (You can expand the Rules for Shoes or/and Socks)
You can influence these Rules in your Sets.
You can add: Strokes, Edges, Ballslaps, clothspins, tie up balls(max. 5-10min.).

Special Rules
Elsa Jean: doubles for Feet. (40 Strokes (20 per Foot))

Turn ONs
Check out my List of favorite Girls.
See my Profile for Turn ONs/OFFs

Wishes / Ideas:

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Censored / Beta
Feet
Ball Busting

Story
SIMPLE Story is necessary!!!
(maximum of like 1 or 2 lines of text per Image)
Simple Neighbor, School Friend, Ex-Girlfriend Storys,...,... will be fine.
Create a single Story Set or start a Set series. I like both ways.
But keep the Story SIMPLE. No complex character Sets.
Dont have more than 10 pics without any Text/Story.

Edge
I have pretty bad Stamina. I need breaks after Edges. Try to stay under ~30 Edges.
Iam getting better at Edges :D

Cum
PreCum eating is possible. Never committed to Cum Eating. Unluckly I will do it.
The Set needs to have an Full Orgasm or a ruined one.
Can be decided by Luck, Guessing, my behaviour through the Set, Cruel intention of the Girls, etc.

Feedback on @LeeroyJerkins' Masterpiece set:

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Wow... just wow. I am exhausted lol. In a good way. Your writing for Caprice was just incredible and it's clear how much work was put into the set. I enjoyed the name calling and dressing up and I think you had a good understanding of all that and it was done very well.. The dynamic between Sofi and me was very interesting, it really felt like we were 2 subs battling it out to prove ourselves to Caprice. So everything with Sofi was good but then every time Caprice came back in it was just awesome I think you have the most flushed out relationship and understanding of Caprice's character and it really shows. The pacing was really good throughout. Suspending my edging rules to just have me stroke to break it up and give rests was definitely the way to go for a set this long. The edging for every pic makes even a short set without much dialogue more engaging and intense but for a long set it could definitely become impossible or too much. Now going into this set it'd been over a week without cumming and I think 4 sets of teasing so I was very desperate to cum. So I was really scared she'd ask me to choose to deny myself to prove myself. And then she tells me I'd have to edge hold and ruin in order to cum but if I did I could cum. It was perhaps an even more difficult choice than if she just asked me to deny myself. Ultimately I decided I would try to do it because I just can't help it, I want to please them and do what they say, especially when it's Caprice being so dominant like that. I don't actually hate edge holds or ruins inherently, I think the bigger issue is that I just really suck at executing them properly which ends in me failing doing what I was told and it just ends up an all around bad time for me. That's because while the idea of ruining turns me on, almost every time I've done it I fucked it up so I got no feeling but I wasn't able to continue afterwards. And then with edge holds I'm just not very good at and have accidentally pushed myself over the edge quite a few times in the past resulting in bad ruins. So I was sufficiently scared of attempting them again and fucking up but I wanted to try for Caprice to be her pet. I came close to failing a few times with the edge holds and had to attempt every one at 20 seconds and beyond at least twice but I managed to do it. And then the big test for me, ruining properly. I was so close I would stroke a couple times and let go and start shaking and I kept doing this until I eventually ruined and this time it just made me even more sensitive and lubed my cock with cum. So I was genuinely able to say that yes, I enjoyed the ruin. And then at long last I was finally able to cum and I came so hard to this picture:

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. There's too many excellent photos of Caprice to put down as favourites but it's so easy to just edge and get lost in her eyes. So thank you for the fantastic set and for me finally being allowed to cum. I hope I made Caprice happy. Her giving me incentive to disobey another mistress is VERY interesting. As much as I love being a good girl and the more soft domme natured stuff that usually comes with that, a part of me was already tempted to disobey just to get punished harshly so that is definitely something I will have to think about. I've got 3 other sets on the go at the moment that I'm struggling to try to finish up, but then I'll try to make it up to you for this one. If it's ok I might go with a couple smaller sized sets instead of one large one, I'm with you in that I don't feel like writing a super long set right now. And I will probably go through the letter to Caprice and everyone set tomorrow or Tuesday

GoodGirl wrote: Mon Jun 13, 2022 3:40 am

Quick (in time but long in length) response to GG: (lengthy discussion of the last "masterpiece" set and my process ...)

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SO glad you liked it, bro! (I knew you would.)

Yeah, it started with "let's lend Sofi out to Caprice to tease GG ... THAT would be fun ..." into "Let's make it a 'battle between subs' ..." to "let's work that 'alpha level beta sub' thing ..." ...

I am VERY good at character development ... The tricky thing with Caprice, is that I DON'T want to simply write her in a way that she "automatically" becomes my switch-girlfriend ... I want to be surprised ... And, she's been on this thread for YEARS ... I guess Roundhound and Helequin really developed her into this kind of "intense and dominant" personality, but ... I haven't read/played through enough of their sets to REALLY know her, so ... This has been, like, "my" version of Caprice ... an outline of SOME of what I HAVE scene, but ... the details are fleshed out a bit more and probably NOT consistent with OG "canon" Caprice ... and THEN ... since I have been intentionally putting a "question mark" over the whole "will she won't she become my mistress-sub", I have specifically, consciously NOT fully fleshed out her motivations to the point where I "know" what decision she would make, which ... is kind of interesting, because usually I "know" my characters VERY well and how they will behave ... and for her, I have been INTENTIONALLY keeping her "part of a mystery" because I don't want to "know the ending" ... and I have SPECIFICALLY tried to keep her "neutral" on the whole switch-switch thing ... because as a player who also sometimes writes for Caprice, I don't WANT to know her mind or what she will decide ... so, it's been interesting ... Now, often times, I will "discover" things about my characters as I am writing them--interests and quirks and little backstory bits that I never knew they had, but ... I feel like the core of their character, psyche, and motivations "is known", so ... having had SO MUCH of Caprice "not filled in" has been ... interesting ... I still feel like I have influenced her development "more than I would have liked", but ... I think that it's fine ...

So, Sofi is interesting ... I made her out to be the bad guy from the start. She was actually quite neutral when Skirata first sent her my way, but ... I took the VERY little bit he started with (only two scenes) and sort of built her up into this selfish, vapid, bratty "villain" character ... and she's pretty cool and fun to write ... I sort of know how the Sofi storyline plays out (when she will "stop" being my sub and when Malena finally "releases" her), but ... I don't know if her character will change or not ... THAT part is unknown to me ... we'll just see how she develops as I continue to write her and as others do as well ... I would say 50:50 at this point she changes versus stays static ... Either way is cool for me ... If she changes, then, she'd develop into a cool kind of sub that I would WANT to keep ... we'd have history--which would be fun ... She'd show character growth ... and of COURSE it would speak to me being a "master dom" who rehabilitated her ... a "taming of the shrew" situation ... on the other hand, maybe she just STAYS vindictive and nasty, but ... when she's released, she would become my "nemesis" ... I mean, in the Skirata set, she ALREADY promised to ruin me EVERY TIME she saw me ... having a "bad guy" out there in the world like that COULD be fun ... so, whichever way she goes, it's kind of a win ...

And then there was YOU YOU were the "third character" ... So, I knew your preferences fairly well from our previous conversations ... and actually, I tailored Caprice a LOT to what I "thought you wanted" combined with thread historical "OG" Caprice mixed in with the more responsible "switch-curious" Caprice ... who is ALSO a "boss bitch" and "friends with Malena", so ... she was QUITE the amalgam!

Your writing for Caprice was just incredible and it's clear how much work was put into the set.

I think you have the most flushed out relationship and understanding of Caprice's character and it really shows.

THANK YOU for all of these kind words!

They mean a LOT to me ... they TRULY do ... BELIEVE IT!

Obviously, there is no "right" version of Caprice ... this was just mine, and ... since I do "characters first," everything I wrote flowed out from that ...

FO SHO this was WITHOUT A DOUBT my best work yet! Like, adventures are good, and ... that Skirata set was just ONE LONG STORY that was basically independent of the recipient, but ... HERE ... I feel like HERE I REALLY delved into the characters and worked to craft an experience that REALLY integrated the characters into the player's rule set, so ... I feel like that was a BIG achievement for me ... Obvs, it took a LOT of effort, but ... I did it--I'm GLAD I did it, and now ... probably not again for a while! It was just SO HARD ... once I started to go "all in" and decided to pull out ALL the stops ... time constraints just went out the window! But I am SO GLAD you liked it ... Like, EVERY little thing I designed and crafted JUST for you ... it worked ... it worked WELL ... they ALL sort of wove together and contributed to the whole, and ... it landed and you REALLY appreciated it, so ... thanks again!

Scenes involving more than one character besides the player are TOUGH to write and script ... they tend to go LONG as well ... In the beginning, I kept Caprice more on the sidelines when Sofi was "just teasing you", but ... yeah, in that "dueling subs" scene ... that was pretty cool. I intuited you pretty well from our DMs, yours posts, and your rules, so ... I am SO GLAD that I was able to make that immersive for you ... it's always a gamble that you will swing and miss, but ... from reading your feedback to other sets, I "knew" about your "good girl tendencies", so ... I just played those up TO THE MAX! ... and yeah, having Sofi "play opposite" of you ... SO fun ... I go "characters first", then, put them in these situations, and then, how they react just sort of jumps out at me ... like, that whole bit about her wanting you to take off your panties so she could stroke for you ... like ... that ALL made sense to me ... when you know your characters and all of their motivations line up right ... it's a GOOD feeling

SO MUCH fun writing pretty much EVERY scene of that ... Caprice is SO dominant ... and, actually, a LOT of that came from YOU!

That version of Caprice that I wrote here WAS inspired, in part, not ONLY from OG Caprice sets I have seen, but probably MOSTLY on her "reaction" sets to me (by you and brian), your 3 Day set to brian, and ALSO Ecik's latest set (that's almost a month old at this point but the one that inspired my most recent letter) ... I sort of mixed ALL of those Caprice's into my own ... She "treated me like an equal" in Ecik's set, which told me she wasn't "all domme all the time" ... which, allowed me to show some thinking about "what makes a proper mistress", and ... since she wasn't directly "domming" you through some of that ... she could talk a bit here and there about her "domme philosophy" ... The demanding "put you in your place" and "push you hard" stuff seemed pretty standard across the board ... she's not typically a "nice" domme that "takes it easy on her subs" ...

For this set, I decided she had taken a personal interest in you, and, she doesn't strike me as the type of person to take the words of others ... she's going to see for herself, partly because she doesn't trust others, because their work is NOT always up to her level ... and, you have been getting teased by a LOT of girls--I have seen--but not Caprice, so ... THAT whole angle made sense to me ...

Wanting to "make a connection" with her sub ... THAT was a bit that I added that (as far as I know) came COMPLETELY from me ... I haven't seen that elsewhere ... I didn't expect that going in ... Partly, I was trying to figure out reasons that Caprice would WANT to go switch-switch with me ... If that's one of her criteria, then, it could explain--either way--why she decides to "say yes" to me OR turn me down, so ... that was some of "me" adding my "own ingredients" to the "Caprice soup" ... BUT ... I ALSO did it for you! You had Caprice host a LONG set for brian ... partially, I thought you might appreciate her developing a "special affection" for you, but ... I would say MOSTLY ... you have this desire to "be a good girl", and I wanted to bring that into the story, so ... having a domme that REALLY understood it AND appreciated that behavior BOTH would play on your deeper preferences, drawing you MORE into the story AND validate you AND her actions ... "I've got a dude who WANTS to be a "good girl" ... let's USE that!" So, not ONLY was she acknowledging that, she recognized that desire, fed it, and leaned into it ... So, yeah ... she was "looking" for a "loyal sub" ... THAT part came from ME because she's thinking about her decision on Leeroy's offer, but ... from that, wanting to "test you" ... that was mostly FOR you, because ... YOU want to be a "good girl", so ... I needed to domme you with a mistress who wanted and NEEDED a "good girl" ... I don't think she's often looking for that, but ... it kinda made sense to me that maybe she WOULD ... because, if you REALLY ARE this "alpha level beta sub" and she has an eye for quality, then ... maybe the reason she was "behaving differently" and "testing you on the good girl angle" was that she "spotted quality" of a kind that she normally doesn't see, so ... that made sense and seemed to jive with even OG Caprice ...

Okay, but, here, I feel, is where I REALLY took some artistic license ...

I have NEVER seen "OG Caprice" be THAT "nice and vulnerable" with ANYONE else before ... I mean, I've seen her kind of polite, matter-of-fact and classy ... I seen her bitchy and cruel ... "hair down" Caprice was a "new" side of her, but ... I felt it worked ... it COULD be a side of her that DOES exist just doesn't come out very often ... AND ... if you WERE this AMAZING beta, then ... yeah ... hell, I didn't even think of it, but ... I wrote a mini set for her a WHILE back where she hinted she was into beta guys, so ... idk ... but, characters are interesting WHEN THEY HAVE QUIRKS, so ... she's intense and dominating and kind of cold to most, but ... she's got this soft spot for you? That is INTERESTING ... but ALSO in line, because she has HIGH standards, and you "passed" so ... Yeah, writing is fun and collaborative writing is SUPER interesting to me!

Yeah, so, I thought you had this like primordial aversion to edge holds and ruins ... if I had known it was performance-based, I would have written that WAY different, but ... it STILL worked, because the task was challenging and made you nervous, and ... I just ASSUMED the reasons behind your aversion, but ... now that I know ... that's just one more thing I can bring in.

And then at long last I was finally able to cum and I came so hard to this picture:

You came for her EYES, bro! ... you fucking romantic! I'd give you a hug and a noogie for that next time I saw you IRL, dawg! Don't let the girls know, but ... I'm a romantic too! But ... I gots to keep up my "bad boy image" and just drop HINTS to make them SUSPECT but keep them guessing ... you know? But, good for you, bro!

'Kay, so ... some SPECIFIC feedback questions/comments:

1) Glad the pacing worked ... set was long--knew resetting back to normal over and over would work ... good job me.

2) How was the Sofi "teasing" you stuff? Caprice made some comments and straight up asked about it ... like, what was your answering? Was the "pure teasing" just okay? Does it get like 70% better when the girl is ACTIVELY domming you? How did you like Caprice "commanding" Sofi? She wasn't commanding you, but ... was that still hot? Or just okay? Since I plan on introducing more "switch elements" into my sets, I would REALLY like to know ... I want to know if it "works generally" and also if it works for specific players (or not) so I can know whether to include it or not ... Now, you have an aversion to seeing dicks in your porn ... I kind of get that ... I prefer solo and lesbian as well (tho POV is GREAT) though, it's not a "hard pass" for me ... just adds NOTHING and in some cases LOSES points, but ... not a lot ... So, how did CAPRICE commanding Sofi play for you? Second, I originally thought about ME "coming over" and domming Caprice in front of you, but ... with your STRONG aversion to dicks in sets, I felt that was a risk putting a dude into the scene--even if he was "backstage" and out of sight ... Could I have Leeroy "domm Sofi" for you? ... or would that kill it? Or just be an "okay?" I took a number of low chance risks making this set, and while some guys have even asked for "domme sofi in front of me", it was too high for me to want to try, so ... that was actually a MAJOR factor in my originally choosing Caprice ... because I wanted to "show off" that "I have a sub now", but ... it couldn't be "me" showing her off ... and ... since Caprice was on your favorites list, you had written her extensively, AND I had "story reasons" for trying to impress her ... she was a LOGICAL choice ... and, she's bi in the lore, so ... worked out for ALL of the reasons ... and THEN ... assuming I "acquire" Caprice (bad word choice--we'll be switch partners) ... if you had an aversion to me domming SOFI "off camera" how would the math change if it was Caprice instead?

Also, along a similar line ... how did the "pretending to dom Sofi for Caprice" with the pillow stuff land for you? Was it actually as awkward as I assumed? Of course I am SURE you did it, but ... did I call that correctly?

3) I asked like a CRAP TON of questions in that last point, but ... you said you LOVED the Caprice stuff and enjoyed the Sofi stuff ... Obviously, all the Sofi stuff worked generally ... was there anything specific that REALLY worked or anything that REALLY flopped or was meh? There were 4 scenes of stuff ... if you could scroll through real quick as a reminder ... I know the writing and shit was GOOD and would work for most people ... I guess I want to more specifically nail down YOUR preferences ... it seems to me the "teasing in generally and for plain teasing sake" is just kind of "okay" for you in general, maybe like a 6 or 7, but ... is just being dominated automatically make the experience an 8 for you? And then, if it is a domme you like and "know" ... instant 10? 11? Asking MOSTLY for future sets ... and also if anything from the more "generic teasing" that Sofi offered hit harder or softer for you ... because, if you LIKE steak and can afford to have it every day over cheeseburgers, then ... why ever choose cheeseburgers? We make custom sets ... I COULD just make a generic teasing set for you, but ... with the SAME EFFORT, if I make it a "domme set" and I can ramp that up to a 9 from a 6 for the SAME EFFORT ... THAT is a NO BRAINER! Now, writing Caprice WELL that ... that takes some time, but ... if I am throwing a set together for you quick ... I want to figure out how to get the most bang for muh buck ... ALSO, I want to SELFISHLY just write some scenes *I* want to write and if you are OKAY with Leeroy domming sofi in front of you ... imma do it and show off. And if you wanna see me domme Caprice, well ... FUCK! There is ALL KINDS of NASTY shit I can do with THAT! I just thought of one that I am going to write down ... it is THAT GOOD!

4) Did you say the shit out loud I told you to? Did that enhance the experience?

5) How'd the pussy licking go? Were the times appropriate?

6) What do you think of Sofi as a model? Character? How did you enjoy those few moment where she got to dominate you? How would you feel about Sofi domming you in the future?

7) Was the ball busting sufficient? Too easy? Not frequent enough? Just the right amount mixed in?

8) How were the multiple instructions pics? I like to do that from time to time to mix it up and break up the rules, but ... sometimes I wonder if it would disrupt the flow too much ... sometimes people complain about being stuck on one picture too long ... I like them, because they go outside of a person's normal rules, but ... they end up taking a lot of time to type out, but ... I often integrate them into the story, which is nice ... they also let me get more mileage out of a set ... What's your general opinion? Do you have any specific opinions that worked REALLY well or did not?

9) No offense, but ... how are you bad at ruining? I thought it was easy, like ... you start cumming, just take off your hand ... I know people struggle with accidents, and I get that, but ... what about the technique or process makes it hard for you? Just curious, mostly ...

10) The edge holds ... several things ... Was the teasing done well? Did it make you want to hold the edge more? Was the whole process just SO fraught with fear and frustration, that you really can't comment? Is it something you would want to experiment more with or get "trained" on?

11) How was the finale with the choices? Now, IN GENERAL ... I like to have a little bit of flexibility in my teases when possible, and when it cums to the way I cum, that is EVEN BETTER! They take some effort to write well (with organizing the pictures and ALL of the spoilers), but ... for a LONG tease like this, man ... you just HAVE to avoid fucking up the climax or else ... yeah ... it's like a Stephen King novel ... AMAZING story ... HORRIBLE ending ... don't wanna do that! So, with a set THIS LONG ... imma ALWAYS put in that extra effort to make the cum ending GOOD! And I was ALREADY pulling out all the stops, so ...

Anyway, for switches, an ending like that where you get some choice and/or get to take charge, well ... that's just a SLAM DUNK ... BUT with you submissive types ... you WANT the mistress "commanding" you, so ... I did NOT want to get the framing wrong and RUIN the experience RIGHT AT THE END, so... I framed it like I did, and gave some shitty excuse that SORT OF made sense about why you were "getting to choose" and having some freedom (it actually was pretty good lemme know how that flowed for you and if it kept you immersed ...) ... and for a SWITCH, you could just give them control and it would be a BONUS, but ... for a SUB, I was like, "Mmmm ... the options MIGHT already be too much, I don't know ... I DO know that SOMETIMES dommes give their subs choices, so ... I guess it ain't TOTALLY out of character ... but ... just to be safe, let's have him be a "good girl" and ASK PERMISSION to do EVERYTHING ... THAT will probably "keep him in the zone"" so ... let me know how all of that went for yah ...

12) Check out the other endings. You picked the "best" route, but ... I had shit for the other ones too ... "pulled out ALL the stops!" I just didn't have the denial homework done, but ... it was gonna be "play the Caprice mini sets I already wrote" plus ONE "custom scene" with Mila busting your balls and NO touching

13) The cliffhanger "disobey them to get promoted by me" thing just kind of came to me at the end ... did NOT plan it, but ... I wanted to give the storyline a way to continue ... that made sense, and ... I wanted to connect Caprice in some way to your continued play experience, since I have NO intentions of writing another set like this ANY time soon ... and I got SO many plot lines going ... might be fun for someone else to pick this one up, but ... ball's in your court, AND ... imma let this one go for a while, but ... I PROMISE you ... if no one has acted on it inside of two months (or shorter) ... I can "force the situation" and make this happen for you. Or not ... I just got ONE idea, but ... imma let you and others decide how this one plays out ... I have no IMMEDIATE plans for it ... if you CHOOSE to fuck up, i think imma let someone ELSE write your Caprice "punishment" set, but ... if no one steps up after a while ... I'll do it ...

So, I think there is a NUMBER of ways you can let this play out ...
A) DON'T advertise ... just don't think much about it, and ... if the situation comes up organically and you feel naughty or like you SHOULD disobey ... do it!

B) Advertise: Put it in your rules. Explain the situation. Say you WANT to disobey someone to "prove your loyalty to Caprice." You'll be putting a target on your back, but ... that might be fun. People can get HELLA crafty IF you give them a good prompt ... you'd be opening the doors, but ... you said you were toying with it anyway ...

C) Request specifically: Do like me and WRITE YOUR OWN SHIT! Just straight up say you want THIS model with THIS personality to domme you and put you in a situation where you are GOING to disobey ... and THEN you can get punished in THAT SET and NOT EVEN HAVE TO WAIT ... now, if you wanted CAPRICE to punish you in THAT set or later or ... maybe the mistresses who are "on hand" can help to step in, but ... This is a place where dreams come true. If you have a dream/particular fantasy, REQUEST SPECIFICALLY, and SOMEONE will step up ... just include it at the TOP of your rules ... Usually people have free reign, but ... think of it more like a writing prompt, and actually, giving people some constraints can give them MORE freedom, because they don't have to be so conservative and worry about going outside the lines on accident because they KNOW where the lines are ...

Also on ALL of that ... for SURE there are WAY better "punishment writers" on here than me ... maybe you set up your own storyline ... have one person write your "disobedience" set ... another one write your punishment with Caprice set (if the aggrieved mistress "demands" Caprice be the one to punish you), AND ... if you want and request it ... *I* would be willing to volunteer and write your "reward with Caprice" set, since I got all this in motion, so ... we don't OFTEN work collaboratively like this, but ... there is no reason we can't ... People don't like getting involved into intense stories because that creates commitment to keep/maintain the plot with a single author, and that creates obligation which can be disruptive to how this thread normally goes, but ... Fuck, dude, I just gave you a three part storyline set ... IF you want it, you can just ask for it, and the people can each pick up and write one part ... and I will gladly "bat cleanup" for that 3rd set if you like It's just people don't want to get bogged down doing the whole thing, you know?

But, those are just ideas. I think being more spontaneous and just seeing how/if/when it plays out can be JUST as good, too ... then, it's like a little thing in the background that your mind always wanders to ... and THAT can be its OWN kind of fun ... just craft your OWN experience and grab it by the horns if you wish--THAT is the Leeroy Jerkins way!

and the more soft domme natured stuff that usually comes with that

I didn't know that about you ... I don't THINK it was in your rules that that was your preference? You PROBABLY mentioned it in feedback, but ... I didn't read all of your feedback on sets, just some ... I actually *ahem* played through a couple of sets written for you as "research" and THEN read your feedback ... but I didn't get through EVERYTHING ... that's why Caprice wasn't quite sure if you had met yet or not, though ... I KNEW you hadn't had an INTENSE or LONG Caprice experience like this before, but ... figured you wanted one after your Brian set!

BTW ... I am TOTALLY good with "softer" sets, too ... a nice "girlfriend experience" kind of set, where she's just "helping me to unwind" after a long day ... more basic, playful teasing ... lighter stuff like that can be GREAT with shorter sets! When I kNOW that I am going to cum at the end ... that actually helps me to relax and enjoy the set more, many times ... but ... getting dommed is HELLA fun, too! It just depends on the day, but ... you can NEVER go wrong with a "lighter" or more relaxed or even "teasing and playful" kind of set ... not EVERY set needs to be some intense session ... at least not for me ... but, knowing you like "soft domme" ... imma write you one somtime ... prolly the next "normal length" one ... UNLESS you say you're good with me "showing off" sofi ... then ... imma do that. Actually, 50-50 ... it will depend on my mood i think ...

I've got 3 other sets on the go at the moment that I'm struggling to try to finish up, but then I'll try to make it up to you for this one. If it's ok I might go with a couple smaller sized sets instead of one large one, I'm with you in that I don't feel like writing a super long set right now. And I will probably go through the letter to Caprice and everyone set tomorrow or Tuesday

So, I was planning on updating my rules tonight and getting out old feedback that I was behind on tongith ... and THEN I got into this!

It's ALL GOOD though ... I didn't log my hours, but ... that set I wrote was probably in the 15 to 20+ hours range ... idk ... but, I worked like REALLY hard on it, so ... actually ... giving me good feedback and answering all muh damn questions that'd probably be better for me than some lengthy set in return ... this thread had become a bit like my "writing club" so ... since I tried REALLY hard on this one ... I'd actually like more feedback more than I would like a big set ...

And ALSO my good man ... this is a RETURN set! Technically, for the one that helped to START all this, haha, but ... I haven't played those emily bloom sets again that you made you (I'm too chicken ... 100+ edges! Lord have mercy! ) I WILL at SOME point, but ... that's like a 4 hour affair ... I got be RESTED up before ... it's a production ... not often in the mood ... idk ... I will at SOME point!

My ONLY other crazy ass long set was for Skirata, and that was for a FIVE DAY SET, so ... those were "equal length." I am NOT expecting "equal time." People usually spend like, idk ... 3-8 hours on a set? Then I go and pull out ALL the stops because that's how I roll? No no no ... I don't want to be putting THAT kind of obligation onto people every time I spit out a set like THIS ... This set was 12 galleries. If you count the Bloom mini-sets, I'd say we are square. If you don't, then okay, prolly 1-2 smaller sized ones is good, but ... I went full overachiever ... that should NOT create obligation for YOU! This was a RETURN set ... you sent me one VERY good set and two minis ... I say we're square. (And when I play those minis, by playing time, *I* will be in the negative FOR SURE.) IF you wanna write me some crazy ass "masterpiece level" thing ... just push that off to some future date ... don't worry or pressure yourself ... let some time pass. Let your muse come to YOU and just let that shit happen organically--DON'T force it ... that'll just be more stress than you need ...

And if you feel like we AIN'T square (even though *I* am still insisting we ARE), then ... sent me a couple shorties back (like two 2 scene sets). when I post my rules, i'm actually bout to put that as a PREFERENCE for receiving short sets now ... for real! So, don't clog your queue with any more shit for me ... UNLESS you wanna take the reins and write the "next" Caprice set ... because THAT is "first come, first served." I think Ecik has some ideas, but ... I would ONLY push yourself and go bat-shit about getting me a set out ONLY if you REALLY wanted to in order to decide how Caprice responds in this moment, but ... it will be an evolving story, and I GUARANTEE there will be other and BETTER opportunities to write her

BTWs ... that letter is SUPER hilarious, and them sets are TOO! I musta read them like 3-5 times AFTER I posted them and just laughed again and again reading them ... PRETTY fucking funny shit ... a REAL look into the mind of teh Leeroy Jerkins ...
Peace out, GG! Glad you liked the set! Thanks in advance for answers to your questions! I don't usually "demand" such lengthy feedback, but ... here I am. Dude, even consider your answer HERE as you "paying me back" ... because 12 questions and ALL of this ... like ... I sat down 3 hours ago, and now three hours later ... all this shit is getting posted, so ... in that time, I could have written like 2 mini sets or even a 4 scene short set so ... consider your time in responding as part of you "hitting me back"

Appreciate you, bud! SO glad you liked the set! I meant what I said (through Caprice) about you ... you been SUCH a good dude on here and pumping out sets like a CHAMPION ... I figured for all of your hard work, you deserved the FULL Leeroy treatment for being such a good thread member, so ... this is just like Karma or something, so ... it was EASY for me to "pull out all the stops"

i have a set for @Helequin . i started making this one a while ago but never finished it, so here it finally is. have fun

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Welcome to my Mansion Helequin

Today i have a very tough challenge for you

But i am sure a man like you can handle it, right? Just stroke to me for now

I have invited some girls over to help me out

They will tease you relentlessly

and at the end of each round they will ask you a question

you will need 12 points to beat my challenge, each correct answer gives you one point. But for each wrong answer you lose one point

If you dont know the answer to a question you can just leave without giving an answer. You can return to the question later, but you have to do the girls tease all over again. Or you can just guess the answer if you feel lucky. You will soon understand what this game is about

Now give me an edge!

You can visit the locations in any order you like. Now dont leave the girls waiting, return to me once you have 12 points

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Living Room

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Hello Helequin, grab your vibrator

i want you to tease the head of your cock with that vibrator as you stoke to me

this should add a little extra challenge

just dont cum!

does that vibrator feel good? its my favorite toy you know

keep going

now give me and edge without stroking, just use that vibrator on your head

good boy, you made it

Ready for my question? what can you seee in the background when you meet Carlotta Champagne?

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You can see the ocean of course. Hope you got it right

Terrace

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Hello there

get ready for a simple round of teasing

just let me take this off

do you like the ocean view?

stroke that cock for me Helequin

make it feel really good

give me three rapid edges!

now punch your balls as hard as you dare. good boy

My question is this: whar color are Marry Queens panties?

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She is wearing white panties today. Did you know it?

Garden

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Welcome Helequin

isnt it a beautiful day?

its the perfect day for some sumbathing

and i might aswell let you stroke to my naked body while we are out here

what part of me do you like the most?

ist it my face?

or maby you really like my tits?

are you a ass guy?

or are you weak for my pussy like Zerg? Anyways my question is this : What does Kyla make her sluts do?

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She makes them eat their cum! You knew that im sure

Field

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Hello Helequin

tell me, are you already struggeling to keep controll? yes or no?

If you said yes i will give you a little break. No more edging for the rest of my round. Replace every edge with 20 strokes

if you said no go watch this video, play with your normal rules and hold the edge from minute 5:30-6:30 : https://de.pornhub.com/view_video.php?v ... 1881332236

i wana help you beat this challenge

you could return to me any time if you need a little break from edging

am i not the nicest goddess?

okok, my question is this : What piece of clothing does Mila Azul not take off?

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she never takes off her shoes. Got it?

Meadow

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Hello, i was waiting for you

do you have your ball crusher ready? Tighten it lightly on your balls. You dont need to hold any edges for my round.

i know how hard it is to edge while getting your balls squeezed

so i dont wana go too hard on you

screw it a little tighter now

even tighter now

I hope you had no accident just then. You can go back to a light squeeze.

allright ready for my question? what is Aleksa Slusarchi favorite toy?

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Her favorite toy is a vibrator. obviously

Guest Room

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Hello Helequin

Get ready for a simple teasing round

stroke that cock for me

nice and steady

now give me three rapid edges for my naked body

worship me Helequin. do you remember Aria Alexander’s Worship Rule? Add either 1 edge held for a minute or 1 flooring hit to your balls.

And again

one last time.

My question is : What is Lorenas favorite toy?

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Its the fleshlight. Easy queston right?

Balcony

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hello Helequin, i want you to use your fleshlight for this round

its my favorite toy. I want you to fuck that fleshlight instead of stroking to me

does it feel nice around your cock?

i bet it is much more difficult to stay in control

now immagine shoving your cock inside my tight pussy

feel my hot pussy around your cock

fuck me Helequin!

faster! make me cum

can you handle my goddess pussy?

immagine how amazing it would feel to bust your load inside of me

good job you almost made it

Allright, here is my question : What jewelery is Orsi Kocsis wearing today?

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She is wearing a necklace. did you get it right?

Construction Site

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finally you are here, i was waiting forever

Listen, i have been waiting for so long, i need to pee really badly. So lets make this round quick

For the rest of the round, replace every edge with rapid edges.

no holding and no breaks, go fast!

just dont lose controll

how fast can you edge Helequin?

Almost done.

Allright quick question : With what vehicle did Ivette Blanche arrive here today?

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She drove here in her car. Easy right?

Entrance

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Hello Helequin

To celebrate pride month i put on this extra colorfull dress, im wearing all the colors of the rainbow

And even tho i am wearing it, my dress now counts as me touching red, yellow and blue.

this should add a little extra challenge

here ill give you a little peak

do you like what you are seeing?

dont stop stroking

Oh right, i was gona ask you a question. Gloria Sol knows what body part zerg is weak for. do you know it too?

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Zerg is weak for pussy. I made that one easy for you

Bridge

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Hello Helequin, i was wondering when you would show up

How is it going? is the challenge too tough?

isnt it beautiful out here?

Did you know Zerg grew up in the Alps. This place looks just like his home area

how is your cock feeling Helequin?

I wonder how many points you have collected already

im sure Lexi will have a nice surprise waiting for you at the end

I have a question for you : do you know what Sonny Leone is celebrating?

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She is celebrating pride month with her colorfull dress. Did you know it?

Parking Lot

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Welcome

What do you think of my car Helequin?

Would you like me to take you for a ride?

Oh no, no thtat kind of ride. Keep dreaming

You know my goddess body is out of reach for you

you are just here to worship me

stare at my ass and stroke your cock

show me how much you love me

Here is my question : Ariel know in what area Zerg grew up, do you know it aswell?

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He grew up in the Alps. Got it correct?

Office

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Hello Helequin.

Get ready for a simple stroking round

do you like me tits?

show me how much you like them

Good boy

Keep stroking it for me

Make that cock feel good

now slap your balls hard once

My question is this: What toy is Niemira making you use today?

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its the ball crusher! Sounds kinky

Forest

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Hello there, i want you to play my round in Ballbusting Mode
"
You know how much i love torturing your balls

Hmm sould i take this top off? what do you think?

i thought so, much better.

remember, even with my shoes on this counts as fully nude.

give me some nice hard hits for my pussy

harder!

even harder now! come on, i know you can take it

mm good boy, now one last view at my butt before we get to the end

ok my question is this : Does Heather Vandeven show you her tits today?

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of course she does, you could have guessed this one.

Dining Room

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Oh there you are, i was wondering when you would show up. I want you to play my round in slut mode

because you are my little slut arent you Helequin?

just the tip now slut

dont lose controll

i know how badly you want to cum, resist the urge

just worship my perfect tits as you stroke your cock

are you leaking any precum yet?

if so lick it up for me

and in case there was no precum on your dick to lick up, i want you to ruin an orgasm right now and eat it!

see i get what i want either way. Just like the time you asked me to convince Zerg to finally eat his load. Thats what i make my sluts do

now before i have to go give my 3 rapid edges for my tits

and three more for my ass

Allright slut a have a question for you. Do you know why Caprice was in such a hurry earlier?

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Its because she was holding her pee while waiting at you. you got that right?

Return to Lexi (need 12 Points)

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Welcome back Helequin, do you have all 12 points?

i am impressed, i think you have earned my price

you get to enjoy a nice full orgasm

and i will even give you full controll over your orgasm

you got to choose with who and where you want to cum. So think well about your pick

Get really close now, get ready to blow a huge load

Who do you want to cum for?


You!

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And where do you want to cum?

On your face!

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on your tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on your ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of you

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Lorena Garcia

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Kyla Cole

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Aleksa Slusarchi

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Orsi Kocsis

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Caprice

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Ivette Blanche

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Mila Azul

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Heather Vandeven

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Ariel

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Sunny Leone

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Niemira

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Marry Queen

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Gloria Sol

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

Carlotta Champagne

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And where do you want to cum?

On her face

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Cum for me! Give me a huge facial!

on her tits

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Cum for me! Cover my tits in your hot cum!

on her ass

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Cum for me! Shoot your load all over my ass!

inside of her

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Cum for me! Shoot your load deep inside of me!

@LeeroyJerkins response:

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Sorry, there's a lot to break down in that set with everything you tried and I wasn't sure if you wanted me to break it down scene by scene or if that would feel like I was critiquing your masterpiece too much. I just wanted to get across that it was really good and I worry if I'm overly critical of every little thing you'll get the wrong impression and think that I didn't like it. I know how much time and effort went into it so I'll give you the most comprehensive feedback I can. So even if I say I didn't really like something, know that these are just minor things and personal preferences and nothing was bad or a turn off. That being said I'll start by answering your comments and my number will correspond to the numbers you had in your response.
So 2/3) So the first scene with Sofi stripping I think it very easily could've felt uncomfortable for me with her being forced to do that and not actually want to which is a major turn off for me, but with Caprice talking from the background it more felt like Caprice was just teasing me with Sofi's body and domming me through her while maybe trying to embarrass or use Sofi as well and it worked. Then when Sofi came back to tease me with the edging rules it more felt like she was enjoying it as well and maybe a bit of her dom side coming out which was nice. Apart from the choice about ruining this was the part that give me the most pause for thought I think

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Caprice: Now, both legs up, and hold them still!

Look at that pussy, GoodGirl. Look at how warm and inviting it looks.

Sofi smiles alluringly at you.

Caprice: Now, I know a subby boy like you wouldn't take her by force, but ... what if I commanded you to take her, right there on the stairs!? What if I said, "GoodGirl, I WANT to see your submissive dicky thrust DEEP into her waiting cunt?" How would that change things for you? Does the thought of me ordering you to take her by force get you hard?

Look at her ... she's just so willing to swallow your hard cock with her pussy ... and I want to see that SO MUCH--your subby clit inside of her disobedient pussy ... You're a good girl--a nice little subby girl, but ... she's a bad girl ... she needs to be punished! ... I think you should be the instrument of her torture ... I think I would even make you penetrate her asshole with your hard cock, too ... but ONLY if you wanted, but ... Does the fact that *I* REALLY want to see all of that change the math for you? Think about it, GoodGirl ... and give me EIGHT edges ...

I was really asking myself if I would be able to fuck her on command and I came to the answer of no. If a dom ordered me to fuck another sub I couldn't do it and would have to disobey, if Sofi wasn't willing and eager for it I just couldn't do it. Seeing another girl teased and played with was nice but the I was still focused on stroking to please Caprice so that's what aroused me the most.
Then she teased me with the really slow stroking which I wasn't a huge fan of which was exactly the point, making me do stuff I don't like for her pleasure, not mine. In principle I really like the idea, I feel it went on a bit too long.
Having my balls being punished for things other people do I really liked and is something I've been trying to write into some of my sets coming up. I do want to be punished but don't really tend to disobey or do anything to warrant punishment because I just want to please them, so someone else's mistake giving them a reason to punish me I really liked.
Pretending to dom Sofi for Caprice with the pillow stuff is the one thing that I honestly skipped. Even in real life I sometimes like tying up girls and teasing them cause they look hot as shit but it has to be with toys, I honestly can't even get it up to fuck them if they're tied up and wanting it, it just makes me feel weird. I'm sorry but you domming anyone in front of me would be a turn off for me.
In terms of writing sets for me in the future, a quick and easy way for a guaranteed great set is take one or more of my favourites, have them be dominant and get me edging for every picture. Mix in some ballbusting and/or dressing up and end in denial or some sort of game/random chance/test for orgasm. The biggest factor between a good set and great set usually comes down to the dialogue and feeling some sort of connection with the girl like BBBeanie did with Mila, Brian did with Gloria, and you did with Caprice. I will say that the other 2 have both softened Mila and Gloria to be nicer to me which I do love especially with Gloria as a soft dom. You did the same sort of thing with Caprice and I think I picture Caprice as harsher and meaner I guess which is the feeling I got in the beginning and I think you softened it for me by the end. I do want to be her pet but maybe she isn't as nice to her pets or maybe I pee on her rug or me or someone else gives her some reason to punish me.
4) I still live with my parents so I couldn't say anything too loud, I did whisper it, but it didn't really add anything for me
5) Honestly, eating pussy has got to be my favourite sex act irl but pretending to do it just doesn't really translate that well. I like all the dialogue referring to it and making me go down on her but I got a bit bored pretending to do the act itself for minutes on end. It was just really hot where I am and my mouth was dry and the first time it came up it said to go for as long as you want so I did 5 minutes to try to please her and then it said to do more and I had kind of lost interest so after that I didn't do it for as long as you said to. I know it's a rule for Gloria but that's more of an exception and it was a lot less frequent. So that was something while I really like the idea of just doesn't necessarily translate to this type of medium for me which isn't your fault.
6) There's nothing wrong or negative about Sofi, she doesn't do a whole lot for me in terms of her looks, nothing bad just nothing great for me so I'm fairly neutral towards her. I liked her the most when a bit of her dominant side came out and when she was getting greedy and being a bad girl. That being said I don't think I'd want her to dominate me in the future, I'm just not a huge fan of her face and face is the biggest thing for me.
7) The ballbusting was on the very mild side for me. Sets don't require ballbusting, it really depends on what you're going for and I don't think you were really trying to punish me with ballbusting apart from a couple of times. If it fits in the story and I'm being punished I could definitely take a lot more and harder but I don't think this set needed or was missing ballbusting.
8) Do you mean just being told to edge like 5 times for one pic? As long as it's a good pic I don't have a problem with that at all. Not every pic but mixed in is absolutely fine
9) None taken. I think it's not really something that I ever practiced for or tried for much if at all. So pretty much every time I've had a ruined orgasm it's not cause I was told to do one, it's cause I accidentally went over the edge and then it started coming out and I tried to save it by stroking and then I shot my whole load and felt nothing and then was upset that I couldn't obey and hold out. So this may've actually been my first time TRYING to ruin my own orgasm PROPERLY. I still don't know if it's something I want more of or not though.
10)I was just desperate to cum and do anything for Caprice. The teasing was good. I might be willing to try being trained on them a bit. I just really suck at holding the edge so it's more something I need to be walked through which you did and was good.
11)I thought the ending was very well executed. The first choice between attempting to edge hold and ruin was a very tough choice and I think very necessary to the story, it seems the whole tease was leading to that point. And especially considering you were pushing me to do things explicitly in my dislikes, giving another option was a good idea. Ending with a choice that may have unknown consequences and makes you nervous of your outcome is always good for me. I think it fit especially well in this set to make that decision to prove my devotion to her. To be completely honest I did think that maybe she was just saying that she'd ruin me but actually she just wanted me WILLING to do that for her but I wouldn't actually have to and the other choice was denial. The other choice I had was which body part to cum to. This type of thing I like a bit less because generally I don't like knowing if I'm allowed to cum until the last second for maximum suspense. If that was a secret test where the fate of my orgasm was decided by which body part I chose that would be interesting but with a set this long and everything I went through I'm grateful there wasn't a twist like that and I got to cum and I'm happy I got to choose that picture to cum to, it was really intense just starting into her eyes and she's definitely someone I could cum to just looking at her face. It definitely nailed the landing.
12)So I'm probably not supposed to but once I'm done with a set I always go back and read all the other routes. It seems like such a shame that someone put all that effort into writing out another option to have noone read it. Even after just cumming the consequences for the other route definitely peaked my interest. A punishment and homework like that really turns me on, I've just been too much of a good girl to be hit with that yet. I definitely think you're right and cumming would've been a punishment there but also necessary before the denial given how long it'd already been for me. And I also think it's nice that even if I hadn't enjoyed the ruin that she would've been ok with me trying for her.
13)I think I'm going to try to let it play out naturally at least for now. I don't want to hurt my standing with Mila or Gloria so it'd have to be with someone else but I think I may choose not to cum for someone if I'm not super into it or if I'm really horny I may use this as excuse to break my rules and cum anyway. So I will probably break the rules sometime soonish, I've been kinda wanting to be punished, I just didn't want to disappoint any of the girls. When I do I'll add it to my rules about needing a punishment set and that Caprice is the one to punish me.
I'm not always into the softdomme stuff, usually I'm more bratty and push buttons hoping to get punished and played with but recently getting into the crossdressing more and being "Good Girl" on here seeing the kinder side of some of the girls was unexpectedly nice. That doesn't mean I don't like them being rough or mean with me sometimes too. As long as I don't feel like they're ACTUALLY mad at me I like it. Them being "mad" in order to punish me is amazing, I just don't want to feel like I actually let them down.
I think I've encountered Caprice maybe once or twice briefly on here before but nothing more than a quick scene I don't think, nothing like this. I think she may shoot up near the top of my ratings after this. I did definitely gain more of an appreciation for her writing her for Brian and you and was hoping to see her at some point and you certainly delivered. I'm going to be slowing down my writing on here I think. My sets haven't been nearly up to my standard lately and have been more quantity over quality and I've just spent so much time that I need to do other stuff too. I'm still going to be active and involved, just not pumping them out at such a crazy pace and try to just write ones that I have good ideas for. Idk if you're caught up with everything you had on your plate or not. I had an idea for you a while back that involved me trying to write some girls as subs because that would be something new and interesting for me. It's kinda interesting, we both joined around the same time and since then we've been 2 of the most active people on here and I think shaping things a bit in our own ways. So keep up the good work and doing things in your unique way that only LeeroyJerkins can. Your first post on here I really wanted to say "Yo, is this guy ok?" lol. And your first letter to Caprice was hilarious, I couldn't stop laughing You certainly keep things interesting around here and I look forward to seeing how it turns out.
Hopefully that answers your questions and gives you more insight from my perspective. If you have any other questions feel free to ask, I'm happy to answer. Again, I really enjoyed it, thank you for the awesome set. It really shows that you took the answers from our conversation before and used that really well and put in a ton of work. Thank you