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Awesome man, I commend you, I don't mind there is no stroke meter, actually find it better to concentrate on the action.

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the last few rounds is just what people have been asking for in a CH movie, fast challenging beats, not much chance of winning, a super fast end. Cumming is the endgame for me, I don't want to whack off for over an hour then have to call up some mainstream p0rn to jizz. One little suggestion for improvement would be to make the beats slightly more prominent in your next edition, I found it a wee bit hard to hear in the last few rounds, maybe I'm just an old b4stard.

An awesome movie - thanks a lot boobe! I really enjoyed this one. I particularly like the fact that you choose soft-core beautiful girls. The production values are excellent, music is great, I like the voice you are using to give instructions and the detailed instructions on how to stroke (short, long, etc.) are splendid.

If I were to make suggestions on what to improve for the next episode (mind you, these are not necessary - the videos are already very good), I would echo what wangchungass had to say about making the beats a bit louder (but not too much). You may also want to fix some English mistakes - "fallow" should be "follow", and in the context you are using it "your" should be either "you're" or "you are", but these are minor things that only appear at the beginning of the video. Hmm, trying to think of more suggestions... the detailed instructions on stroking are one of my favorite parts of the video and they are extensive, which is great. Perhaps these could be expanded to also include the area which should be stroked? I don't know whether it would work well, but it might be worth a try.

Humblest wrote:An awesome movie - thanks a lot boobe! I really enjoyed this one. I particularly like the fact that you choose soft-core beautiful girls. The production values are excellent, music is great, I like the voice you are using to give instructions and the detailed instructions on how to stroke (short, long, etc.) are splendid.

If I were to make suggestions on what to improve for the next episode (mind you, these are not necessary - the videos are already very good), I would echo what wangchungass had to say about making the beats a bit louder (but not too much). You may also want to fix some English mistakes - "fallow" should be "follow", and in the context you are using it "your" should be either "you're" or "you are", but these are minor things that only appear at the beginning of the video. Hmm, trying to think of more suggestions... the detailed instructions on stroking are one of my favorite parts of the video and they are extensive, which is great. Perhaps these could be expanded to also include the area which should be stroked? I don't know whether it would work well, but it might be worth a try.

thanks for the fedback and for telling me the right words(English mistakes ) to use , you see i'm french canadian and i've learned my english by ear, talking with clients and while traveling, so i'll try to correct my mistakes, at least the words you let me know.
i already try to wright very basic not to make mistakes... but i still do, and i'm sorry for that.
i'll do my best not to make english mistakes in the next episode... which i started working on already!
as far as the beats, sometimes it's what i want, a les prominent beat to focus on what is being said in the scene... anyways thanks for all the great comments!

Definitivly one of the best video I have ever play. not for the visual quality, but for how it has been done. Voice instruction is fun, quality of scene is good, speed is great, the final is perfect and the most important thing this is the first one I haven't been able to finish the first time :)

I really enjoyed the finishing scene and speed.

The beat was a little bit too low to ear it. Beat meter is great but not that important.

vitesse wrote:Definitivly one of the best video I have ever play. not for the visual quality, but for how it has been done. Voice instruction is fun, quality of scene is good, speed is great, the final is perfect and the most important thing this is the first one I haven't been able to finish the first time :)

I really enjoyed the finishing scene and speed.

The beat was a little bit too low to ear it. Beat meter is great but not that important.

thanks, i tried some new things that i would like and i'm happy to see that you guys liked it!

Boobe,

Your work progresses by leaps and bounds, and is absolutely excellent. With these two latest episodes you had me gooning and wailing in absolute agony. You are truly an inspired leader in this new genre and a gifted artist of the erotic... A worthy principal in the pantheon of Cock Hero "Iron Chefs"

Well done.

Thanks boobe! I guess its just me, but the video is only 40 something minutes long, using hjsplit to join them. I've downloaded all 6 parts, all are 355 MB in size except for part 6 which is like 255. the properties of the file say its one and a half hours long.......so i guess im doing something wrong :(
anyone else have the same problem?

weenerboy wrote:Thanks boobe! I guess its just me, but the video is only 40 something minutes long, using hjsplit to join them. I've downloaded all 6 parts, all are 355 MB in size except for part 6 which is like 255. the properties of the file say its one and a half hours long.......so i guess im doing something wrong :(
anyone else have the same problem?

try the torrent link
http://www.milovana.com/forum/download/file.php?id=771

Boobe, first off congratulations on putting up CH Babes Series episode 2 and it sounds like many are satisfied with your work so far.

With that said, I think you can do better.

First off, I like to think I'm one of the more critical fans of the 'Cock Hero' series of videos, and have given some fair and pretty critical feedback to past video tease creators. Keep in mind, I'm critical not only because it's my nature, but also to keep encouraging improvement in future video teases. So don't take my critiques as negatives, but as a way to keep improving the quality of your work. While it may be unrealistic to try to match the quality of andyp and/or vindicare, we all should aim for it to be.

So overall, this is a decent video tease. Now, I haven't seen any of your previous works; as I'm not a fan of fake boobs, never checked out your previous works. But for the most part, I liked all the girls you picked for the most part and all your songs choices (save one - didn't care for Guns N' Roses) were pretty good.

But I think you should aim higher than just making a "decent" video tease. And throughout the video tease, here are something you should try focusing on:

1) Polish
Maybe it's just me, but I get the feeling you really tried to push this out sooner than you would've liked. I say this because the overall video lacks polish with various visual and audio bugs, some messy transitions, frequent stroke beats that were "off beat" to the music, etc., I just felt the video was a bit rushed.

2) More is not necessarily better
I didn't play your previous version, but it seems many want you to have more variety with the stroke beats and you seemed to do that - and I think you went a bit overboard. While I do like variety with stroke beats, you did it too often and with little warning - there were a number of times where you would be grooving along to a steady stroke beat and then you would flash text instructions for a new beat to follow without any prior warning and a couple seconds later, it would revert back to the steady stroke beat. Without a Stroke Meter, this is quite difficult to follow properly even with text indicators. If you decide to continue constantly changing stroke beats, I recommend giving at least a 3 - 5 second text warning ahead of time.

The other thing is the amount of sounds you add. Vindicare did a really nice job of adding voice command elements in his last CH Flux and while it's cool you're trying the same thing, the problem that I'm having is that there are too many sounds that play almost at the same time. I mean, you have the music, the stroke beat, the voice command and the audio from the video clip sometimes playing ALL at the same time which gets distracting and, frankly, annoying. You should really try to space out the audio clips so you can clearly hear them all, otherwise you get a loud, messy, bunch of muffled sounds.

3) Sound balance
Personally, the stroke beat sound is a bit too loud and muffles a lot of the music, which in turn, muffles out the audio from the video clips you use. I think you need to find a better balance for all your sounds cuz frankly, everything is just too loud.

Again, I'm not trying to be "negative Nancy" here - just pointing out things that you can improve on to make an overall better video production. If you like, I can even PM you specific "inning by inning" points of focus for you.

Good luck!

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Who is the girl giving instructions?

plandr wrote:Who is the girl giving instructions?

Tara Tainton, she does some pretty quality jerk off instruction videos. You can find a few of her vids on Xvideos.com and the like if you search around for a bit. I believe she actually posted in one of the threads on here when we were asking if she had done a cock hero style video.