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Vinny Vodka wrote:

cactusman wrote: Hi Vinny, this is fine with me. What would be a good time to aim for then? Should we say October 20? Let me know.

I'm in the process of uploading a rewrite of my tease about Maria Pavlova, which will be better in various ways, I think/hope.

Extending the deadline to the 20th is very generous, thank you. I can't imagine I won't have completed it by then. I've kept my promise not to read your tease before posting my own, but I have noticed it's gotten a 4.6 rating from the community and if you upload an improved version that's going to be awfully tough to beat! But if ever I've written a tease that can do it, this one is it! So um, it's delayed, but it's still on!

Hi Vinny, OK that is fine. I think the 4.6 rating that the tease had was due to the extreme length (which means only people who really like it rate it). But I am revising it, and have pulled back the long version and am releasing the revisions in parts...

I have finally published the 4th part of the revised "Maria Pavlova" series, which is available at:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=9778

This completes the publication of the revised version. There is more to come in the series, which you can find at

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... ova-series

However, I think that this 4th part is the best of the bunch so far , and if we were still having the contest at high noon today, then this would be what I would say is my entry.

In any case, enjoy, and I'm looking forward to seeing what Vinny is doing with his flash tease...

cactusman wrote: However, I think that this 4th part is the best of the bunch so far , and if we were still having the contest at high noon today, then this would be what I would say is my entry.

Due to the somewhat verbose quality of my forthcoming entry, it would make a lot more sense if you were to enter the entire "Maria Pavlova" series.

cactusman wrote:In any case, enjoy, and I'm looking forward to seeing what Vinny is doing with his flash tease...

Well I did make a lot of progress on it this weekend and am trying to finish it ASAP. There's still a good bit left to do so I'll be pretty busy with it for a little while yet. I'm quite pleased with the way the writing is turning out though and I think most people will enjoy the picture sets I've chosen, (unlike my last tease, this time I decided to include actual nudity ). The holdup at the moment is simply that the project is quite large in scope. Did I mention that it would probably be more appropriate for you to use the entire Maria Pavlova series as your entry?

Sounds interesting. Sure, we can use the whole series as my entry. I think that with the suggestions from various folks and a lot of subsequent rewriting, the whole thing is in pretty good shape now...

Part 5 of the Maria Pavlova Series is now available at:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=9782

Enjoy, and comments are welcome.

Part 6 of the Maria Palvlova series is now available at:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=9855

Enjoy, and more feedback is welcome.

Part 7 of the Maria Pavlova series is now available at:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=9877

Enjoy, and feedback is very welcome.

lesub wrote:Dear all
Vinny has a high mountain to climb

I have my hooks fully teathered.

Thanks much, Les, I appreciate it.

lesub wrote:Vinny you have been quiet for a while hoping you will post on Wednesday

I've been quiet because most of my free time has gone into trying to hurry with this tease. But alas, it will not be finished by tommorow.

However, I will be releasing a preview version which will contain the first couple chapters hopefully by tommorow night, and I fully expect to have the entire thing published by Halloween! So stay tuned, because good things are on the way!

Vinny Vodka wrote:

lesub wrote:Vinny you have been quiet for a while hoping you will post on Wednesday

I've been quiet because most of my free time has gone into trying to hurry with this tease. But alas, it will not be finished by tommorow.

However, I will be releasing a preview version which will contain the first couple chapters hopefully by tommorow night, and I fully expect to have the entire thing published by Halloween! So stay tuned, because good things are on the way!

i trust the delay is worthwhile


les

Vinny Vodka wrote:

lesub wrote:Vinny you have been quiet for a while hoping you will post on Wednesday

I've been quiet because most of my free time has gone into trying to hurry with this tease. But alas, it will not be finished by tommorow.

However, I will be releasing a preview version which will contain the first couple chapters hopefully by tommorow night, and I fully expect to have the entire thing published by Halloween! So stay tuned, because good things are on the way!

OK, I look forward to it. I'm not sure I will have any more by then, but it seems that the last two installments of the Maria Pavlova seeies have been well received.

The pre-release is on it's way, but will take a couple more days. Yeah, I know, I get as sick of telling you all about these delays as you get of hearing them. So in the meantime, I am releasing an experiment called "Gallery". Gallery is a random walk through 200+photos accompanied by various random sound clips. I hope you enjoy it!

PS - If this is well recieved I will be including a "gallery" selection in the main menu for the tease I'll be entering in this match which will work the same as the one I posted today. However, that gallery will use photos from the tease itself. Note that the photos in the gallery released today are not in the tease-match entry.

Edit - Gallery has been removed. Due to the time delays caused by using random pics out of such a large gallery, it simply did not work. It has been replaced instead with "Small Gallery".

Part 8 of the Maria Pavlova Series is now available at:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=10009

Enjoy, and more comments are welcome.