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I do wish Hailey had made it to the end. Or Caprice. Those are two of my favorite models.

Shattered wrote: Sat Oct 20, 2018 9:44 pm
Which did you get? :)

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I got Ending 1 the first time, but only because i couldnt pass the Story after Code 055 in the Online Version , so i tried to collect all informations when i talked to Kasia to continue the Story (later i saw that it was a bug that the Story dont continued after code 55 )

When i played the Guidme version,i finally could continue the Story and i got the other informations for the "Secret".

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I think that the weekend idea is absolutely amazing, and while I am very curious what making different choices would've offered, I like having to make the choice.

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The learning Japanese thing was something of a mixed bag for me. I don't watch anime nor do I know any Japanese apart from "thank you". I found it very difficult to pass, and the fact that it was an endless loop felt a bit cheap. I eventually managed to go through it but I would've preferred if it asked me several times with increasing penalties rather than the endless loop.

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I got ending 3 based on some advice I received from Fran at some point during my wandering.

xman911 wrote: Tue Oct 23, 2018 11:45 pm

anonymister wrote: Tue Oct 23, 2018 4:16 pm Thanks,
Seems like I tried every answer 3 or more times, and they all failed, so just quit.
Maybe I'll try again, because it was great up to that point.
I will take spoiler tips if it will help.

You probably got confused, because that part works (at least for me it works).

I do know some of the words, (I didn't know what they actually mean, before I saw this tease), but I heard most of the words before, many times. I always wondered what these words actually mean, but apparently couldn't write them properly so Google translator, never understands me (or maybe the thing understands me... but does not want to translate dirty words ).


* Now I learned some dirty Japanese words...

Roundhound wrote: Wed Oct 24, 2018 3:37 am I really enjoyed the tease. I am curious to try it a couple more times to get the other endings since it isn't obvious on what I need to do. I got ending 2 this time.

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I do wish Hailey had made it to the end. Or Caprice. Those are two of my favorite models.

Pumpkin wrote: Wed Oct 24, 2018 5:10 pm

Shattered wrote: Sat Oct 20, 2018 9:44 pm
Which did you get? :)

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I got Ending 1 the first time, but only because i couldnt pass the Story after Code 055 in the Online Version , so i tried to collect all informations when i talked to Kasia to continue the Story (later i saw that it was a bug that the Story dont continued after code 55 )

When i played the Guidme version,i finally could continue the Story and i got the other informations for the "Secret".

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Sorry that my glitch made one ending impossible, but if it makes you research a little more maybe thats not so bad :)

Unnamed_007 wrote: Wed Oct 24, 2018 5:12 pm Hello. I'd like to offer some early-mid tease feedback while it's still fresh in my mind.

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I think that the weekend idea is absolutely amazing, and while I am very curious what making different choices would've offered, I like having to make the choice.

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The learning Japanese thing was something of a mixed bag for me. I don't watch anime nor do I know any Japanese apart from "thank you". I found it very difficult to pass, and the fact that it was an endless loop felt a bit cheap. I eventually managed to go through it but I would've preferred if it asked me several times with increasing penalties rather than the endless loop.

That's as far as I got for now. I'll be sure to fill the poll and provide more feedback as I progress.

Thanks for a very, very interesting tease once again Shattered.

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Having 4 girls made me want to try the weekend things. It means everyone misses out on full sessions no matter what, so less of my stuff is read, but I like giving that choice, and ofc it matters where you go!

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I chose Japanese just became of a higher personal interest, and not just for anime! But yes I agree the infinite loop was a mistake, I've remedied this on Milovana but don't think it's gone through to guideme for now.

saidi99 wrote: Wed Oct 24, 2018 9:31 pm WOW!!! This is an amazing tease, I can tell you really put a ton of time into this. I absolutely love the story and it grabbed me from the very beginning. With all the choices and twists and turns I will be playing this one for a while.

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I got ending 3 based on some advice I received from Fran at some point during my wandering.

jp wrote: Thu Oct 25, 2018 9:39 pm It's Thursday so I thought I'd go through this again, in real time, and choose different paths this time. :)

And also take note of the bugs/issues I see. Apologies if this is nit picking but I wanted to give feedback where I could.

Thursday:

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Page where Hailey says "me next, you can stroke fast" there's a timer *and* a continue button.
Page where Xia says "God she's such a tease. Even gets me going sometimes" there's also a timer *and* continue button.

PS - How do people get page numbers for you? Is that from the guideme version?

jp wrote: Fri Oct 26, 2018 10:12 pm Friday's update... and I know it was mentioned before but I'm positive now there's an issue with Xia's Japanese section.

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In the classroom with Xia where she releases her grip and you slow down there's a Continue button and a timer.
When you first meet Fran at the club the button says "unlocked" even though I wasn't locked.
If you get Hailey's title correctly, after clicking Continue you get a page that says you got her name wrong.
First time Xia says to smack your cock, the correct answer doesn't work. <-- This is the bug I was talking about.
End of the day when Fran crosses her arms it says "looks like she's apart to speak"... should be 'about'.

And the weekend is up next so...

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Only get to make reports on 2 of the 4 options.

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I've double checked the Xia thing...it seems fine so I must be missing something, is it this page or a different one? - 2fxia20# where she just says 'Chinko o Hirateuchi!'

jp wrote: Sat Oct 27, 2018 5:12 pm

Shattered wrote: Sat Oct 27, 2018 4:37 pm

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I've double checked the Xia thing...it seems fine so I must be missing something, is it this page or a different one? - 2fxia20# where she just says 'Chinko o Hirateuchi!'

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She teaches you to slap your balls, then she teaches you to edge, then she teaches you to smack your cock. It's on that page that picking "Smack your cock" still gets you a "wrong" answer. The very very very first time she says Chinko o tataku.

It's not in the "game" portion, it's in the teaching portion.

jp wrote: Sat Oct 27, 2018 6:06 pm Saturday:

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Hailey:
When she greets you she says "you could have text my first dude", think it should be "me".
After pulling on clovers she says "That really hurt... don't work"... should be "worry".

Also, just a pet peeve of mine... when there's a timed command on a page with a timer and the command is at the very end of the text you miss a lot of the timer that way.

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When Hailey has you pull the clamps towards each other so they lay flat on your chest and then you get a page where you need to smack your balls once per second for the 30 second timer... there was less than 20 seconds left by the time I read that part.

slavejack wrote: Sun Oct 28, 2018 10:29 am Playing the GuideMe version and on Monday so far. I noticed there are some sound files in the media directory but so far haven't heard any. Is that a possible bug or will they come into play later?

Great work on this by the way!!

Daragorn wrote: Sun Oct 28, 2018 1:30 pm Wow, this was such an amazing tease!!
Just like all your other tease series, to be honest....you a really an awesome content writer.
Have you ever thought at trying to create a personality for teaseAI? I could see you coming out with something beyond amazing with your skills

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This is pretty subjective, but I would've liked some more pain in the tease, I'm not sure if I just didn't stumble on the right path, but apart from visiting Hailey on one of the weekends, it's mainly been pretty tame ball slapping/crushing.
If I missed some path that had more, I'd love to hear about it.

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I will most definitively give it another go and try some other options to successfully unlock the other paths, but looking at the poll, I don't think I'll be able to get the third ending without looking at the code.

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I suspect that one ending is what Fran said "just please me and visit me every time you can", but I have no idea what the third/other one could be.

Unnamed_007 wrote: Sun Oct 28, 2018 11:00 pm I've reached the end, marked it in the poll so here's some more feedback.

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This is pretty subjective, but I would've liked some more pain in the tease, I'm not sure if I just didn't stumble on the right path, but apart from visiting Hailey on one of the weekends, it's mainly been pretty tame ball slapping/crushing.
If I missed some path that had more, I'd love to hear about it.

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I will most definitively give it another go and try some other options to successfully unlock the other paths, but looking at the poll, I don't think I'll be able to get the third ending without looking at the code.

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I suspect that one ending is what Fran said "just please me and visit me every time you can", but I have no idea what the third/other one could be.

All in all, it's definitively a great tease Shattered, and something outside of the Chastity series. I was also delighted to see you use the same models, which made it familiar but not an extension.