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Alliteration wrote:

shell wrote:

*smiles softly* I like the creativity of coming up with my own stuff. It's not that I can't think of things to do for a female....trust me.....I love pussy! *grin*...Maybe not as much as cock, but I do love it! *giggling*

Ooooh, please tell us more...

More about pussy's or cocks? *grin*

shell wrote:
More about pussy's or cocks? *grin*

Pussies, then cocks...then pussies again. :P

Alliteration wrote:

shell wrote:
More about pussy's or cocks? *grin*

Pussies, then cocks...then pussies again. :P

*laughing* too funny!

Well.....pussy is soft to touch.....
It's fun to see how wide the pussy lips can be spread, before whimpering begins. It's fun to see the struggle that goes on, as that little spot, just under the hood is touched...rubbed....teased and tortured.

And the taste...............on God....sweet, moist, an endless waterfall of mouth watering juices to satisfy the taste buds.

And inside.....in the wet warm spot....so many places to explore, to touch. To go slowly, with the finger, searching for that spot that will drive her crazy with need, feeling around.....running the finger over the walls, slowly, memorizing every indent, every squishy soft place.....and the g-spot itself....watching, listening to her as you push on it....thrust into it....rub against it..........*shivering...moaning*

Is that enough? *wicked smile*

oh god...you are such a tease! At least I'm allowed to touch myself now, hehehe....

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shell I think you could easily write a tease for another lady without it being a
hint or spoiler for Dr. D

he might like the suggestions too, one never knows.
Though I would recommend using what you try on others,
in your chat's I know you have ladies you torment,
use that?

Also I would be more than willing to suggest and/or collaborate.

I am not trying to push you a way you don't want to go
but you have SO much talent shell!
Share!
please?

Alliteration wrote:oh god...you are such a tease! At least I'm allowed to touch myself now, hehehe....

Moi? A tease? Really? Gosh, I had no idea! *giggle*

SexualChoc wrote:shell I think you could easily write a tease for another lady without it being a
hint or spoiler for Dr. D

he might like the suggestions too, one never knows.
Though I would recommend using what you try on others,
in your chat's I know you have ladies you torment,
use that?

Also I would be more than willing to suggest and/or collaborate.

I am not trying to push you a way you don't want to go
but you have SO much talent shell!
Share!
please?

Thank you for the compliments and the encouragement. *soft smile*

What intrigues me about the teases written for women is with the exception of Cockgod's "Becoming a Cocksucker" series, most of the models in the teases are women.

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/#auth ... s=for-gals

Yes, I'm sure most of the women who visit Milovana have lesbian fantasies but unless the women who visit this site are exclusively lesbians, my guess is that they would like to see some guys and some cocks in the teases written for them.

Guys can write teases for women. Male masters tease their female subs all the time. Its a matter of finding finding techniques that work and can be performed in teases.

I wrote two teases for women "A Session With RoboMaster" and a "A Session With RoboMaster 2" using male models and a male voice.

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=10121
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=10228

Neither were well received. However, that's not what bothered me. What bothered me is that there has been no feedback - positive or negative. If you don't like the tease, that's fine. At least tell me why it doesn't work (too long/short, techniques don't work, poor choice of models, poor pacing). If you don't want to leave feedback in public forum there's this new concept called the private message. I'm not going to put the effort into a tease that doesn't receive a response or isn't viewed.

Incidentally, some of these issues were discussed a little over a year ago.
http://www.milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=1&t=5655

Sometimes a picture is worth a 1000 words



FYI; She has a key from the belt in her hand

masterstroke wrote: Yes, I'm sure most of the women who visit Milovana have lesbian fantasies but unless the women who visit this site are exclusively lesbians, my guess is that they would like to see some guys and some cocks in the teases written for them.

For me, I don't want to see pictures of just males and/or females. I want to see images of what is being described in the tease. If nipples are being pinched, I want to see a picture of that.

I wrote two teases for women "A Session With RoboMaster" and a "A Session With RoboMaster 2" using male models and a male voice.

Neither were well received. However, that's not what bothered me. What bothered me is that there has been no feedback - positive or negative. If you don't like the tease, that's fine. At least tell me why it doesn't work (too long/short, techniques don't work, poor choice of models, poor pacing). If you don't want to leave feedback in public forum there's this new concept called the private message. I'm not going to put the effort into a tease that doesn't receive a response or isn't viewed.

I hope you were serious about wanting feedback....when someone asks, I give it.....negitive or positive.
I am going to put it in a spoiler though.....

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When I saw the names of the Teases, "Robo", I couldn't get to the teases fast enough. I have this robot fetish...*blushing*

They both had such potential and the ideas, the brush, the rope, the nylon.....all great ideas.

Here is the problem I had. The voice, which I know is supposed to sound like a computer...well, it didn't go with the pictures of the guys that were used. I get into things, I have a very active imagination.
If there was an android such as this, as human looking as this, his voice would be more "human" sounding.

On the second one, the voice, which I am assuming is you, during the orgasm....now that would have been very stimulating to listen to the whole time. *soft smile*
However, in that one, right after "he" cums, he says....sit back and admire my body, and a picture is shown of a very hard cock. For the android to be real...he would go soft, even if only temporary.

For me, I also didn't like the medical terms of body parts....I would have preferred clit, over clitoris.

One of the "technical" things I noticed.....there needs to be something happening on the right to let you know that you haven't lost your connection, or everything is "working"....you know how your computer has a spinning hourglass, to let you know something is happening.
If I had been doing the tease....I would have gotten distracted, wondering if something was wrong with my connection, during the long pauses.

The second one was better.....probably because of the added, "human" voice. I think that that if a human voice was used to speak, one could make their voice sound...."computerish" and it would have a better effect.

So the potential was there.....and perhaps......you will make another...........did I mention, I like robots? *giggle*

Thank you for listening. *Smile*

Thank you for that feedback. (My self-esteem is still intact by the way). It's what I needed know. It changed some of my assumptions. I was going to un-publish both "RoboMaster" teases due to lack of interest and the poor rating. I also considered reworking them but I couldn't because I didn't know what worked and what didn't.

Some of the things I can change, some I can't. The voice I can change although but due the technical limitations in the text to speech software I can only do so much to make it sound more human. The voice I used in both teases is the same. I can use a different voice that's about it.

I initially wanted to use a voice changer program but I didn't have any success with it so I decided to settle for the text to speech program.

It's interesting that you enjoyed the sexual sounds. I thought it was a bit excessive. It's an audio file I modified to fit the tease. It wasn't me.

I debated the pacing of the teases (especially the first one). I can make the timer visible on the right.

I'll make sure "RoboMaster" is flaccid if he "cums." (That one didn't occur to me).

I'll scrap the medical terms for parts of the anatomy. (I debated that one also).

I'm sure someone else will post recommendations that are 180 degrees the opposite of what you recommended. But that's life.

masterstroke wrote:

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Thank you for that feedback. (My self-esteem is still intact by the way). It's what I needed know. It changed some of my assumptions. I was going to un-publish both "RoboMaster" teases due to lack of interest and the poor rating. I also considered reworking them but I couldn't because I didn't know what worked and what didn't.

Some of the things I can change, some I can't. The voice I can change although but due the technical limitations in the text to speech software I can only do so much to make it sound more human. The voice I used in both teases is the same. I can use a different voice that's about it.

I initially wanted to use a voice changer program but I didn't have any success with it so I decided to settle for the text to speech program.

It's interesting that you enjoyed the sexual sounds. I thought it was a bit excessive. It's an audio file I modified to fit the tease. It wasn't me.

I debated the pacing of the teases (especially the first one). I can make the timer visible on the right.

I'll make sure "RoboMaster" is flaccid if he "cums." (That one didn't occur to me).

I'll scrap the medical terms for parts of the anatomy. (I debated that one also).

I'm sure someone else will post recommendations that are 180 degrees the opposite of what you recommended. But that's life.

*Bright smile* I'm so glad you didn't take offense to anything!!!

And you are absolutely correct.....someone else will have opinions that are very different than mine. *smile*

forbiddendesire wrote:I've been having a nice session of orgasm denial for a week now. Everyday i watch a new T&D video, and replicate it myself. But it's recently occurred to me that there are no female orgasm denial videos or sites. If anyone knows good videos, sites or even pictures, please share?

There aren't any orgasm ruining for women either. Although, it probably isn't possible to ruin a girl's orgasm. Women are probably naturally more dominant than men are. These days, I know more women than men that like to watch football.

Women are probably naturally more dominant than men are.

Where did you get that opinion from? Women nowadays are more spoiled and has more freedoms, that may give you an impression they are dominant. In truth they are more on the submissive side, and men are dominant. You may see it even by the ammount of girl-submission videos in respect to femdom ones. Heck, in most of the porn women are being tossed around and fucked, men is in control not another way.