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cactusman wrote: Thank you very much. I appreciate that, especially "coming" from an author I respect very much. Thanks!

Lol, that's nice of you to say. I haven't been very prolific recently, but you inspired me to dust off one of my projects and make some progress on it last night.

wonderbo wrote: I haven't been very prolific recently, but you inspired me to dust off one of my projects and make some progress on it last night.

Great. Your "Fertility Clinic" series has all the teases, other than the ones I wrote myself, that are in my favorites list, so I'm hoping you will finish that!

In any case, I hope you enjoy the Maria Pavlova series as it continues... eventually.

cactusman wrote:

wonderbo wrote: I haven't been very prolific recently, but you inspired me to dust off one of my projects and make some progress on it last night.

Great. Your "Fertility Clinic" series has all the teases, other than the ones I wrote myself, that are in my favorites list, so I'm hoping you will finish that!

In any case, I hope you enjoy the Maria Pavlova series as it continues... eventually.

I am finishing it. I've already written most of the next section. I'd love to finish it this week if I can find time.

wonderbo wrote: I am finishing it. I've already written most of the next section. I'd love to finish it this week if I can find time.

I look forward to that.

I hope the new part 5 of the Maria Pavlova series, which is now available at:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=9782

does not distract you too much.

Part 6 of the Maria Palvlova series is now available at:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=9855

Enjoy, and more feedback is welcome.

Evals wrote:... However, I don't like the format you have chosen. I just don't like the pictures. I would enjoy your teases much more if I could read the text without seeing the the girls that have been chosen for me by somebody else. To counter the inevitable people out there that will jump and tell me "well don't look," "turn pictures off," "copy and paste and do it yourself," etc... Yeah? Well, this is my opinion.

Hearing the voice in the head and imagining a girl in front of me is much more immersive to me. I'd like them more if I could read the text as a whole in the stories forum if you ever decide to do that!

I have now posted a text-only version of what I have so far published here on orgasmdenial.com in the story forum. It's

http://www.orgasmdenial.com/forums/show ... php?t=6707

Let me know if you like that better

Great job on the next two installments! I loved all the dressing and undressing...and the ice pack was brutally awesome!

wonderbo wrote:Great job on the next two installments! I loved all the dressing and undressing...and the ice pack was brutally awesome!

Wonderful, I'm very glad you liked it. More is coming sometime... whenever real life gets sufficiently out of the way...

Part 7 of the Maria Pavlova series is now available at:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=9877

Enjoy, and feedback is very welcome.

lesub wrote:Dear Cactus man et al

This is a great series
As to those who say its not a tease just imagine you are the hero and carry out his "Thoughts" and the "I" parts to what you hear and /or imagine.

Then it escalates to a whole new level.

Thanks much Les, I appreciate it very much.

But note that the narrator ("I") in the series is a woman, Maria Pavlova, and the main male character is her husband Tom. I did this because I wanted to get inside Maria's mind during the tease. However, I think the technique I'm using in this series is in fact less immediate and less involving than the technique I have used in other series, where the story is inside the mind of "you" who is the main male character (e.g., in my "Your Investigation" series).

I should also say that I have learned a lot from the negative comments I got about the Maria Pavlova series. In particular, I learned to use more dialog to mitigate the effects of this the indirectness of having Maria tell the story. But when I finish the Maria Pavlova series, I will probably go back to my old technique.

cactusman wrote:

lesub wrote:Dear Cactus man et al

This is a great series
As to those who say its not a tease just imagine you are the hero and carry out his "Thoughts" and the "I" parts to what you hear and /or imagine.

Then it escalates to a whole new level.

Thanks much Les, I appreciate it very much.

But note that the narrator ("I") in the series is a woman, Maria Pavlova, and the main male character is her husband Tom. I did this because I wanted to get inside Maria's mind during the tease. However, I think the technique I'm using in this series is in fact less immediate and less involving than the technique I have used in other series, where the story is inside the mind of "you" who is the main male character (e.g., in my "Your Investigation" series).

I should also say that I have learned a lot from the negative comments I got about the Maria Pavlova series. In particular, I learned to use more dialog to mitigate the effects of this the indirectness of having Maria tell the story. But when I finish the Maria Pavlova series, I will probably go back to my old technique.

you do not know how to write a shit tease you only produce gold
carry on writing them for you.


les

[quote="lesub]
you do not know how to write a shit tease you only produce gold
carry on writing them for you.
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No, the reason I can do well is because I can recognize shit when I produce it and fix it

cactusman wrote:[quote="lesub]
you do not know how to write a shit tease you only produce gold
carry on writing them for you.

No, the reason I can do well is because I can recognize shit when I produce it and fix it [/quote][/quote][/quote][/quote][/quote][/quote]


*Calls Carpenter to widen doorways*

But seriously yep every one should read through before they post any damn thing.

Well done Cactusman


les
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Cactusman! Must tell me who this is. http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... 877&p=40#t

Edit: Found it... My suspicions were correct. Crystal Klein, my favorite model. Though that shouldn't be too much of a surprise with my teases.