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I kinda think crystal or hanna at the moment (or crystal AND hanna)

Also thank you for the story/tease and i don't usually say something this rude but....

Continue it NOW.

Disclaimer: I thank you for what you have done and imply no requirement by you to do anything I say especially if i am being rude (which i am). this is really an act of desperation and appreciation for you work which i feel is top notch. and of course I understand that real life comes first before anything else really.

that being said CAN'T wait

Disclaimer:actually i can wait take your time and thanks

grendal wrote:I kinda think crystal or hanna at the moment (or crystal AND hanna)

Also thank you for the story/tease and i don't usually say something this rude but....

Continue it NOW.

Disclaimer: I thank you for what you have done and imply no requirement by you to do anything I say especially if i am being rude (which i am). this is really an act of desperation and appreciation for you work which i feel is top notch. and of course I understand that real life comes first before anything else really.

that being said CAN'T wait

Disclaimer:actually i can wait take your time and thanks

Thanks for your guess about who did it, which is interesting to me.

I have been working on it, and plan to have the conclusion ready in a week or two. It's pretty long, so it will take some time to get up to my usual standard. But I'm glad you are looking forward to it.

The third and final part of my "Your Investigation" series

"Your Investigation Concludes": http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=9116

is now published. Feedback is welcome. Enjoy!

The final part of the Investigation was absolutely fantastic. I really, thoroughly enjoyed reading it, not just as a webtease but as a story. I think you did brilliantly on both counts.

I knew it was her! Well, sort of. I was hoping it would be her.

The ending seemed a bit abrupt, but that's the only criticism I have. What a lot of fun this series was to read. Thanks for writing.

Bindo wrote:The final part of the Investigation was absolutely fantastic. I really, thoroughly enjoyed reading it, not just as a webtease but as a story. I think you did brilliantly on both counts.

I knew it was her! Well, sort of. I was hoping it would be her.

The ending seemed a bit abrupt, but that's the only criticism I have. What a lot of fun this series was to read. Thanks for writing.

Well thank you very much.

I agree it ends rather quickly, but it was already going on for a long time, and so perhaps I didn't draw out the final encounters as much as some of the earlier ones.

I agree with what Bindo says, however it is still a fabulous tease, you're a great asset to this site cactusman, the fact your teases all have such amazing ratings is a testament to that.

pbchillin wrote:I agree with what Bindo says, however it is still a fabulous tease, you're a great asset to this site cactusman, the fact your teases all have such amazing ratings is a testament to that.

Thanks very much. I appreciate it.

Of course, some of the ratings of my older teases were artificially inflated by my cheating, in former times. I do agree with Indy who said it would feel better to come across the ratings naturally and honestly, and it does.