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For those that tried it right away, I'm sorry.
Had a typo on a link there that kept you in an endless loop.
Should be fixed now.
Sorry about that.

Indy locked the topic before I could thank everyone who voted Part 13 as Flash Tease of the Month, so thanks for those who voted for it.

However, the real thanks should go to the guys in this thread that convinced me to keep writing it.
I don't do this for awards or recognition, but it is nice to see that there are folks out there who enjoy what I write. So thanks.

New part is posted now. Sorry it took so long folks.
I had written the thing twice, but didn't like it, so I deleted it and started over.
This part ended up a little shorter than previous parts, but I felt like I needed to resolve this little Alyssa issue, before moving on. So, this part is really just about that. Now maybe we can get back to the bigger story.

Anyway, hope you enjoy it.

I would say, that this is the most amazing tease I've ever seen!
Keep up the good work! I want to see a 16th part :P

Flo

I've had a few requests to continue this series, but I'm not sure I'm going to.
It's been quite a while since the last part was posted. I'm sure most of us have forgotten what happened by now, so the "end" could easily just be right where it is.

I'll be honest, I haven't made any definate decisions one way or the other, but I have been quite swamped with the real world lately. Even if I do continue, it's likely to take quite some time before I write the next part. I just don't have the time right now.

would really love if this was to continue. i love it and just now have found it. think you do a wonderful job. thank you. really would like more chances for punishment.

i would love to see another part :)

it's beside "The Naughty Neighbour" by MissLusciousLisa my favourite series so far.