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I was just saying to myself there's no way I can stay awake until the laundry is done when I need to before I get called to work and am away for multiple days. Now I think I can! lol Glad to see you kept working on this despite all the hardships you had along the way. Great things are truly worth the wait <3

Remember your first attempt wasn't a failure, it was a learning experience that was better than most of us could do if we tried(thinking of myself here! The last time I edited videos was when VHS was the only form of video) With any form of art, practice truly does make perfect. If you always strive to outdo yourself, you'll always be improving. Even if you can't see the improvement yourself.

Luvz2edge wrote: ↑Sat Oct 29, 2022 11:00 am

silverlight-29 wrote: ↑Sat Oct 29, 2022 10:00 am infact I played both videos and it's all ok

I would love to hear any feedback or comments if you have any

I thought it was amazing, quickly becoming one of my favourite cockheros. Glad you decided to perfect it, only thing I could think of is the punishment/alt endings you could attach onto the videos and put skip to x time of the video so not needing to start another video, though with the file being soo large I can understand cutting it down.

Maybe either add edges or small tasks aslong as they don't take away from what you created and make sense to include them.

Great work though

Kieran_rb wrote: ↑Sat Oct 29, 2022 4:33 pm

Luvz2edge wrote: ↑Sat Oct 29, 2022 11:00 am

silverlight-29 wrote: ↑Sat Oct 29, 2022 10:00 am infact I played both videos and it's all ok

I would love to hear any feedback or comments if you have any

I thought it was amazing, quickly becoming one of my favourite cockheros. Glad you decided to perfect it, only thing I could think of is the punishment/alt endings you could attach onto the videos and put skip to x time of the video so not needing to start another video, though with the file being soo large I can understand cutting it down.

Maybe either add edges or small tasks aslong as they don't take away from what you created and make sense to include them.

Great work though

First of all thanks for the feedback and the kind words! I really appreciate it.

Yes I know opening another video is breaking the immersion. I mentioned it in my OP. But so does moving to a certain time skip. Until someone creates a player or I don't know some AI app that you can press a button whenever you lose and move you to the appropriate section these are the two only options we have when we want to create alternative scenarios. As I mentioned before and as you also stated, at least this way I could create a short mini story without worrying too much about how long the video will get.

As for the edges and challenges... trust me I love edges (hence the name) but I always found edging instructions even Edge hero's a bit frustrating. Everyone experiences edging in a different manner. So when I see the EDGE command and I'm not there yet I feel like I don't know what am I supposed to do... Did I lose for not following orders? Do I continue? Did I saved my self from more struggle? Therefore I've decided to keep special instructions like this out of the main story and only in punishments.
Who knows thought? Maybe in future installments I'll include it.

I would really like to know your gameplay experience though. Did you lose? Did you unlock any alt.ends? Punishments? Any rounds you particularly enjoyed? Let me know. I would really appreciate it. Just make sure you include spoiler tags if there are any.

Thanks a lot

yshomatsu wrote: ↑Sat Oct 29, 2022 4:03 pm I was just saying to myself there's no way I can stay awake until the laundry is done when I need to before I get called to work and am away for multiple days. Now I think I can! lol Glad to see you kept working on this despite all the hardships you had along the way. Great things are truly worth the wait <3

Remember your first attempt wasn't a failure, it was a learning experience that was better than most of us could do if we tried(thinking of myself here! The last time I edited videos was when VHS was the only form of video) With any form of art, practice truly does make perfect. If you always strive to outdo yourself, you'll always be improving. Even if you can't see the improvement yourself.

It's support like this that made me finally decide to finish it. Thanks a bunch mate.
I hope you really enjoy it and please let me know if you have any feedback

Luvz2edge wrote: ↑Sat Oct 29, 2022 4:57 pm It's support like this that made me finally decide to finish it. Thanks a bunch mate.
I hope you really enjoy it and please let me know if you have any feedback

It's perfect! If you made an entire series without changing anything it would be an amazing story. I see a lot of the story from the first time you posted with slight changes and of course the rounds are almost all new. I loved the new intro too!!

Now for some ideas that please take with a grain of salt if you don't like them. I'm just tossing ideas that may or may not work for you because you've asked and I want to help if I can.

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1)I think you should try putting some text dialog into some rounds, in particular the scenes with Remy/Lexi so we can get more lore/story points that would make their scenes seem different than all the rounds trying to make you fail. I wanted to say we NEED more info in ep 1 but the ending teased to finally finding things out which makes Ep1 perfect as is. (And I'm speaking from a character perspective because as viewers we can figure a little out from the new intro but the character doesn't know anything)

2)Some of the scenes teased actresses I love and then they only showed up 1-3 times during the round so perhaps less women but more scenes of the ones you pick in rounds. (might just be me though cause I love connecting the actresses with characters in the story)

3) The boss rounds, I wouldn't change a thing, loved them! I'll admit I failed at the end of Adria's boss round. That's why my reply is so late since I didn't want to ruin the rest of your project by continuing at the time. I hope the characters will have recurring roles, at least a bit if not more.

In closing, you've created a story I want to know more of and can't wait to find more out. I remember feeling the same when you first posted Ep1 years ago. I'm glad you didn't give up and I hope going forward you don't have any more harddrive crashes.

yshomatsu wrote: ↑Sun Oct 30, 2022 6:43 am

It's perfect! If you made an entire series without changing anything it would be an amazing story. I see a lot of the story from the first time you posted with slight changes and of course the rounds are almost all new. I loved the new intro too!!

Thanks a lot my man… it really means a lot to me. I’ve had your support for years and I didn’t even know it. I’m glad you enjoyed the remake. It’s people like you who gave me the motivation to give ot one more chance.

As for your suggestions…

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Yes I’ve been wondering wether or not some rounds should have text. I just finally decided against it so you can focus more on the action on screen than reading and implemented the lore development in the intervals between rounds. Maybe I’ll find a way to have a few rounds that combine lore development with action in the future

Many scenes are made literally years ago. The ones that are compilations are more focused on the theme than the actress so when she gets a round on her own it will have a bigger impact as I did with Adria. I’m glad that I made you lose. Did you lose during the actual round or during the boss fight though?

Of course some characters will have recurring roles. As the lore develops some will find new reasons to tease you. Mostly though new challenges await.

Also…

Spoiler: show

I suppose with just one loss you’re eligible to proceed to the next episode without any punishments

Finally, a return to the classic story-driven challenges! I think the girl selection is great and I enjoyed the role-playing elements, I hope there are more episodes.

One thing that I think would heighten immersion is to have some dialogue within the rounds too where the girls tease you, get you to give in etc.

Somerfield42 wrote: ↑Sun Oct 30, 2022 10:50 am One thing that I think would heighten immersion is to have some dialogue within the rounds too where the girls tease you, get you to give in etc.

It seems to be a recurring suggestion so who knows? Maybe next one…

Thanks for the support my friend

funscripts anyone ????

When Romni joins Adria I thought about Romni's character in the beginning corrupting Adria and that almost made me fail but the following gangbang stopped me from failing (just not into gangbangs but I don't judge anyone that is) Adria's boss fight was where I lost it but that is what over an hour and a half into the episode, so I got far! lol

I suggested dialog during a Remy/Lexi scene so you could get more lore/story to us since their scenes are supposed to be lighter and not trying to make you fail. If you wanted to do dialog of teasing/trying to get us to fail that would be awesome too. I don't know how much you already have planned out so don't want to try and suggest anything in particular, vague suggestion maybe? An round of Romni or a direct agent of hers would be a decent spot to try that type of dialog during a round. It's your project though, if you decide not to, no worries. Inferno series proves that dialog during scenes aren't too distracting. The style of all text between rounds is still good, any story telling CHs are very welcome <3

If you need someone to proofread your next episode, let me know.

It was very good and I thought the story was good.

Amazing! This is right up there with the Island series, which is my all time favorite. I'm looking forward to future episodes!

danoldlib wrote: ↑Wed Nov 02, 2022 2:36 am Amazing! This is right up there with the Island series, which is my all time favorite. I'm looking forward to future episodes!

That’s… something I never expected to hear… Island is one of my favourites too and I hope one day I’ll get as good as Required. His work is a big inspiration of mine.

Thanks a lot everyone for the feedback and the support. This gives me motivation to continue with the series.

Great work! I discovered CH's when Dante's Inferno Canto I was released, so it was my first experience for porn that was more than just a sequence of PMVs. While my first picks are usually hypnosis/binaural beats-oriented journeys, I've also missed the straight up story style! Being married in a house where 3/4 of the people work from home, I spend much less time doing these, but this was worth it.

Very well done. This is a fantastic release and it's fun to see Required's influence here showing up strong. Glad to see someone carrying that torch. I can already tell this one has a ton of replay value and I can't wait to see what you do next! Thank you!