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Kristycookie wrote: Sat Apr 09, 2022 2:55 am I'm curious how the first choice affects things. The description of the kind of mistress you like. I feel like it might be an important choice, but I can't tell what's being decided.

I just started this morning, but so far it seems really good <3

Veritas1966 wrote: Fri Apr 08, 2022 11:59 pm When I finish Karissas's Maze and thought there can't be any web tease that surpasses it, you published The Netherworld. This is certainly the best web tease I have played. The girls are pretty, and the story is wonderful. It will be better if there are more bad ending or just more endings in general (like surrender to demon rocksy). The beast fox girl's snapping finger and you have to edge every time with it is a very very interesting design, I love it (and because the girl you choose for it is so pretty, I wish there can be a surrender button lol XD). The many mini-games by Mimi are really fun as well, bringing the dice game in Karissas' maze to the next level.
Overall, I love it. And do you happens to have a Patreon account?

Kristycookie wrote: Sat Apr 09, 2022 2:55 am I'm curious how the first choice affects things. The description of the kind of mistress you like. I feel like it might be an important choice, but I can't tell what's being decided.

I just started this morning, but so far it seems really good <3

Spoiler: show

while wandering through the netherworld, you get to do some decisions. Some of them decide the dream-scene with Azami. The first choice decides only if the others lead to a draw.

iiilllililiill wrote: Sat Apr 09, 2022 5:49 pm I'm curious about the painmode in the settings that is unavailable. Is there a way to unlock through the tease? Or has it not been implemented?

Kristycookie wrote: Sun Apr 10, 2022 9:49 pm I tried to finish this on the weekend but it was so difficult... I died

It was really fun though! I'm planning to try to beat it from the beginning again after some time passes...

boylad wrote: Wed Apr 13, 2022 3:33 pm Found a bug. After returning from the farm, I took an irl break. When I came back I was at chapter 7, but clicking on the red door sent me back to Rusty, instead of Kurumi. Which then brought me back to chapter 6. Tease has been a lot of fun so far.

ritewriter wrote: Sat Apr 23, 2022 6:12 pm My 2 cents. I enjoyed what I played, but honestly I've never been able to get very deep into this tease for two big reasons.

1. I find the internal, unskippable dialogue timers too slow. I'm a fast reader with a short attention span and I don't always have hours to play, so I'd enjoy this more if all your SAY parts were skippable. I want to explore and enjoy your whole story, but I get bored when I can't move forward at my own pace. I had the same issue with the initial release of my own tease, and I think enabling skipping was a big improvement for mine.

2. Your dialogue and descriptions get very awkward in places. I suspect English is not your first language? Or maybe you're like a lot of my friends who are brilliant at math/coding but struggle to write good prose? Either way, you've done great work. It's a huge achievement to write such a long tease. But it can be hard to read sometimes. Normally I'd send you notes about specific places where you could smooth out the grammar or fix typos and awkward phrasing, but it's easily 50% of the lines. I'd suggest sending someone you trust the entire text if possible and have them help you polish the language. I'd offer to do it myself, but between my own tease and my real work, I don't currently have the time.

Those two issues are the main thing that keeps this tease from being less than perfection, at least for me.

Obviously a lot of people love this tease, so this is really more about me than you. I love the models, premise, and story overall! Feel free to ignore this post if you don't find it helpful.

schefflera0101 wrote: Fri Apr 15, 2022 9:29 am The farm.. tsts
Thanks for reporting. It should work now.

schefflera0101 wrote: Sun May 15, 2022 7:23 am Okay, it was not saved.
Should work now. Thanks for letting me know :)