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chutmunger wrote: Mon Mar 07, 2022 7:28 am I've been a huge fan of your teases for years, and this is, I think, my favorite so far. Absolutely fucking incredible. Well done!

I think I may have a found a couple bugs, although they weren't tease breaking.

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I wish I could be more specific, but in Rikki's session, sometimes when I hit "edge" on the right, it would progress the tease forward (when I still owed edges for the number of times she had said edge), or it would shoot me backward a couple steps. Not sure if that was intentional or not, but I had to redo the same section a few times because it wouldn't let me hit "edge" without bugging.

EDIT: Just now saw your warning about this in the initial post. Any tips on how to avoid this happening again on another playthrough?

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Basically it wasn't apparent during making it that the amount of notifcations I wanted to use...didn't work well. And make this happen. But by then it was too late to change So kinda stuck with it sadly.

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This is a freaking amazing tease and concept!

I have always been a huge fan of your work! But I feel like I gotta say.. the glitchiness in Rikki's session is bordering on unplayable. I don't mean to be harsh. Maybe it's just me. But after trying twice, and even just trying to click through without actually playing (free up some mental bandwidth for keeping track of those edge words, lol) I end up stuck in loops, jumped backward, confused, and unsure if I messed up the count, or if a glitch bumped me back.

She's such a great character, and such a scary and intense session, so it's a huge shame to feel like I can't get through her session.

I'm not sure I fully understand the technical problem under the hood, but maybe the answer is splitting up the sections into smaller chunks, one or two sentences at a time? And the continue button is always visible. When you hit continue, she gives immediate feedback if you messed up your count and bounces you back, or tells you got it right. No idea if that kind of thing would fix it.

lor205y wrote: Tue Mar 08, 2022 11:51 pm

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This is a freaking amazing tease and concept!

I have always been a huge fan of your work! But I feel like I gotta say.. the glitchiness in Rikki's session is bordering on unplayable. I don't mean to be harsh. Maybe it's just me. But after trying twice, and even just trying to click through without actually playing (free up some mental bandwidth for keeping track of those edge words, lol) I end up stuck in loops, jumped backward, confused, and unsure if I messed up the count, or if a glitch bumped me back.

She's such a great character, and such a scary and intense session, so it's a huge shame to feel like I can't get through her session.

I'm not sure I fully understand the technical problem under the hood, but maybe the answer is splitting up the sections into smaller chunks, one or two sentences at a time? And the continue button is always visible. When you hit continue, she gives immediate feedback if you messed up your count and bounces you back, or tells you got it right. No idea if that kind of thing would fix it.

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If I was designing the section from new again I think I'd have made some changes like that - I can think of ways it would work. But it's just so huge an overhaul that it's out of scope for me right now sadly

Demonika wrote: Wed Mar 09, 2022 4:11 am I Liked This Tease Too. Especially The Concept Of Buying Things With Edges, Though I would Have Liked If There Was A 'Shop' For Buying More Things.
And If There Was Some More Girls.

avatarbr wrote: Wed Mar 09, 2022 11:04 pm Another great tease.

One question: there are different sessions with some Dominants as the days go? Or each Dominant have only 1 session/tease?

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There are some minor differences on some of them, like a few sentences, but not different sessions. Madisons has the most variety as she chooses from about 60 random questions.

Shattered wrote: Thu Mar 10, 2022 1:42 am

lor205y wrote: Tue Mar 08, 2022 11:51 pm

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This is a freaking amazing tease and concept!

I have always been a huge fan of your work! But I feel like I gotta say.. the glitchiness in Rikki's session is bordering on unplayable. I don't mean to be harsh. Maybe it's just me. But after trying twice, and even just trying to click through without actually playing (free up some mental bandwidth for keeping track of those edge words, lol) I end up stuck in loops, jumped backward, confused, and unsure if I messed up the count, or if a glitch bumped me back.

She's such a great character, and such a scary and intense session, so it's a huge shame to feel like I can't get through her session.

I'm not sure I fully understand the technical problem under the hood, but maybe the answer is splitting up the sections into smaller chunks, one or two sentences at a time? And the continue button is always visible. When you hit continue, she gives immediate feedback if you messed up your count and bounces you back, or tells you got it right. No idea if that kind of thing would fix it.

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If I was designing the section from new again I think I'd have made some changes like that - I can think of ways it would work. But it's just so huge an overhaul that it's out of scope for me right now sadly

Demonika wrote: Wed Mar 09, 2022 4:11 am I Liked This Tease Too. Especially The Concept Of Buying Things With Edges, Though I would Have Liked If There Was A 'Shop' For Buying More Things.
And If There Was Some More Girls.

I did ponder expanding this concept but to be honest I was pretty close to 500 edges by the time I was done writing so I didnt want to make it too much repeated content!

avatarbr wrote: Wed Mar 09, 2022 11:04 pm Another great tease.

One question: there are different sessions with some Dominants as the days go? Or each Dominant have only 1 session/tease?

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There are some minor differences on some of them, like a few sentences, but not different sessions. Madisons has the most variety as she chooses from about 60 random questions.

thebears73 wrote: Thu Mar 10, 2022 3:12 am if there is no sound and my eyes are closed how do i know when the time is up?

Demonika wrote: Fri Mar 11, 2022 12:57 pm

Shattered wrote: Thu Mar 10, 2022 1:42 am

lor205y wrote: Tue Mar 08, 2022 11:51 pm

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This is a freaking amazing tease and concept!

I have always been a huge fan of your work! But I feel like I gotta say.. the glitchiness in Rikki's session is bordering on unplayable. I don't mean to be harsh. Maybe it's just me. But after trying twice, and even just trying to click through without actually playing (free up some mental bandwidth for keeping track of those edge words, lol) I end up stuck in loops, jumped backward, confused, and unsure if I messed up the count, or if a glitch bumped me back.

She's such a great character, and such a scary and intense session, so it's a huge shame to feel like I can't get through her session.

I'm not sure I fully understand the technical problem under the hood, but maybe the answer is splitting up the sections into smaller chunks, one or two sentences at a time? And the continue button is always visible. When you hit continue, she gives immediate feedback if you messed up your count and bounces you back, or tells you got it right. No idea if that kind of thing would fix it.

Spoiler: show

If I was designing the section from new again I think I'd have made some changes like that - I can think of ways it would work. But it's just so huge an overhaul that it's out of scope for me right now sadly

Demonika wrote: Wed Mar 09, 2022 4:11 am I Liked This Tease Too. Especially The Concept Of Buying Things With Edges, Though I would Have Liked If There Was A 'Shop' For Buying More Things.
And If There Was Some More Girls.

I did ponder expanding this concept but to be honest I was pretty close to 500 edges by the time I was done writing so I didnt want to make it too much repeated content!

avatarbr wrote: Wed Mar 09, 2022 11:04 pm Another great tease.

One question: there are different sessions with some Dominants as the days go? Or each Dominant have only 1 session/tease?

Spoiler: show

There are some minor differences on some of them, like a few sentences, but not different sessions. Madisons has the most variety as she chooses from about 60 random questions.

Fuck! I Completed It.
At The End, I Experienced 'RETROGRADE ORGASM' Or 'DRY ORGASM' Because Of Such an Intense Edging Session (500 Edges !!!)

Has It Happened To Anyone Else ?? (Maybe Shattered Has Experienced One )

Demonika wrote: Fri Mar 11, 2022 1:06 pm There Is Also A Bug I Found

When You Click On the 'I CAME' Button Then It Asks You "DO YOU REALLY WANT TO CLICK THIS BUTTON YOU CAN'T GO BACK", Then If You Click 'no', Nothing Will Happen Tease Will Just Freeze.

*EdgeGuy* wrote: Tue Sep 06, 2022 12:04 am Great work on this! Very well laid out and great pacing .

Any future updates?