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Scilirat wrote: Tue Feb 01, 2022 11:09 pm

GanyuSimp wrote: Tue Feb 01, 2022 9:04 pm Some spelling mistakes like ''take you're dick out''. Should be your.

I would appreciate if you could be more specific about where the spelling mistake is.

Thank you for the report!

What do you mean be more specific? Do you know the difference between ''you're'' and ''your''?

They mean if you can provide the location of the grammar mistake it allows them to find it to fix it. Sadly EOS does not have a "find" button for text that searches all pages and if there are if statements or other branches it is even more difficult to find.

I know there was some discussion from others about not liking being told to edge so many times in a row. The response from the designer was essentially the fact that they might consider it saying instead "Edge 10 times" or something. As others have said, I don't think this is a good solution. I think the original concern was the fact that you are doing the same act so many times in a row. Consider slight variations sometimes mixed in normal edging, like edge and ride, or hands off before an edge etc.

I am in the group that does want more pictures in each encounter, sometimes adding a single photo or 2 per encounter makes all the difference for me if you can find them.

This is genuinely the best tease i’ve ever seen. Thank you for creating this good sir.

GanyuSimp wrote: Wed Feb 02, 2022 11:03 am

Scilirat wrote: Tue Feb 01, 2022 11:09 pm

GanyuSimp wrote: Tue Feb 01, 2022 9:04 pm Some spelling mistakes like ''take you're dick out''. Should be your.

I would appreciate if you could be more specific about where the spelling mistake is.

Thank you for the report!

What do you mean be more specific? Do you know the difference between ''you're'' and ''your''?

After doing a bit of trawling through I think there are 2 places where you've used you're instead of your - 2 cases out of 120 times isn't bad though to be honest
They're on:
ScarredElfB0 "you're loss" should be "your loss"
Manager1 - deep in the nested if statement after 7 drinks she says "you're suffering" instead of "your suffering"
Can screenshot if it helps, but hopefully that's enough to go on

giannitrib wrote: Wed Feb 02, 2022 11:56 pm After doing a bit of trawling through I think there are 2 places where you've used you're instead of your - 2 cases out of 120 times isn't bad though to be honest
They're on:
ScarredElfB0 "you're loss" should be "your loss"
Manager1 - deep in the nested if statement after 7 drinks she says "you're suffering" instead of "your suffering"
Can screenshot if it helps, but hopefully that's enough to go on

I really appreciate you sifting through all that! I also found another time I used "you're" instead of "your" during WavedMaid.

Spelling mistakes fixed!

I haven’t gotten on this board to post tease feedback but thought this one was great! Basically “ditto” to what chutmunger wrote above.

I’m always on the lookout for teases with lots of edging as there never seems to be enough ;) so enjoyed this one a lot. Writing and the scenario and characters also made it entertaining.

Agree with the request of being able to avoid forced cum endings.

Great job, hope you make more!

Overall a great tease the intro is super long and makes multiple playthroughs a bit of a pain. One thing to note, its a bit nit picky but when the catman is asking questions while edging about cows. Cows only have 1 stomach not four.

captainbricc wrote: Sat Feb 05, 2022 3:22 pm One thing to note, its a bit nit picky but when the catman is asking questions while edging about cows. Cows only have 1 stomach not four.

This is true. Technically cows only have a single stomach with four specialized compartments, but growing up, "cows have four stomachs" was a common piece of trivia that would be passed around. I wanted to give a question that most people could answer.

chutmunger wrote: Mon Feb 07, 2022 1:00 am So I'm wondering if I've found all the endings. So far I've found:

Spoiler: show

The faerie ending
The mommy sorceress ending
The lizardman ending
The amazon ruined ending
The scarred elf ending (this one took me a while to find)
The manager/thief ending

Yup! That's all of them!

And I'm really happy you enjoyed the tease!

this was awesome. loved it, thanks

This was a very fun tease. Thanks for making it!

I had a tease idea after playing it. Which would be a chastity game tease, where you got robed and have to work at the Limping buck, getting teased by the clients and waitresses without release, until you make enough money to pay your debt.

Hey, a bit of feedback:

First, like others have mentioned, a few more pictures would have been nice. As someone making teases myself, I know it's hard to find multiple high-quality pictures of the same/similar characters, but even one more per encounter would have made it a lot more enjoyable.

Second, about the edging: I agree that just saying 'again' all the time gets boring after a few times, but I also think that simply saying 'edge x times' is the absolute worst way to solve this. (in fact, if an order like that happens, I tend to just edge once and skip the rest, though that may just be my personal distaste)
In fact, a few times the 'again'-loop was handled pretty well in the tease, if you ask me, and actually kept me guessing how long it would actually go.(those were the times where it wasn't actually just again over and over). As others have mentioned, having forced breaks/edge-holds/some stroking in between would have made it a lot more enjoyable.

If you need a few ideas in that regard, the edging-path in succudrain industries(I think it was humiliation-edging you had to pick) did this really well, with (I think)over a dozen edges in a row that still managed to stay interesting.

All in all, a pretty good attempt at a tease, if you ask me.