Milovana.com

lovesthepain72 wrote: Tue Dec 28, 2021 11:34 pm

janmb wrote: Tue Dec 28, 2021 8:07 pm Brilliant writing, loved it.

Would be awesome with a report of the associated picture as well (always fun to see how much one's personal fantasies misses the actual mark )

Thanks!
I didn't realize the link I gave at the top wasn't for the specific post I referenced. Oops.

https://lovesthepain.bdsmlr.com/post/209248667

Though to be fair, this is not the woman I envisioned for the story, just a sexy lady dressed like Zatana. If I remember correctly, I envisioned her to look more like Ashley Graham.

Pretty close to what I had envisioned as well actually.

Still working on a sequel? Sure hope so

Beautiful work! Video is nice, but can't compete with a well written story!

Recent comments on this story encouraged me to read it, even though I tend not to devote enough time to doing so when a story is this long and wonderfully well developed.

First off, I loved the sex magic aspect. Having sexual power over men is the very essence of what cock teasing is about and this is a magnificent way to describe it! And it was fun to have to "translate" the backwards-words spells...this would be one time that having dyslexia would actually help!

And at first I was confused by the different first person perspectives; it took my little brain (ahem) a while to figure out it was each character speaking their own mind about what is happening from their own point of view. This is very unusual and quite clever, almost like each one was making entries in a diary! Well done...

Anyway, thanks for all the effort you put into this!
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janmb wrote: Fri Dec 31, 2021 1:10 am Pretty close to what I had envisioned as well actually.

Still working on a sequel? Sure hope so

Sadly, I haven't looked at it in years. Been working on other projects. Hopefully one of these days...

lovesthepain72 wrote: Sat Jan 01, 2022 11:03 pm

janmb wrote: Fri Dec 31, 2021 1:10 am Pretty close to what I had envisioned as well actually.

Still working on a sequel? Sure hope so

Sadly, I haven't looked at it in years. Been working on other projects. Hopefully one of these days...

All in good time :D But definitely a work that deserves a continuation at some point