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Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2018 12:51 am
by Caius Prepus
I just sent the torrent to everybody that wanted to participate, thanks again for the support guys !

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2018 4:54 am
by wisepidel8
Sign me up :yes: :yes:

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2018 6:04 am
by Caius Prepus
I had to play it, did that tonight...

Holly Molly jesus... that thing is more evil than I forecasted it... came 6 times, I am wasted...

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2018 8:10 am
by Liquid
Overall not bad, here are a couple of things you could improve:

0:00:22 - "Let's shower them with your sperm!" (missing the 's), space before !
0:00:44 - "Cum Hero Serie" --> ??, "try switching hands" (missing s)
0:01:37 - Font and color (not easy to read, maybe use something else?), "then resum", not "than"
0:02:30 - "hardening"
0:02:40 - "Edge before round 1" seems a bit excessive, how about a "get hard" instead?
0:12:00 - Round ends too suddenly, beats still visible (same problem with the other rounds)
0:44:22 -"this far", why the "just"?, "let's" "quit slowly"?
0:44:35 -"coming", unless it's a bad pun "just" --> "must"?
1:11:44 -There is a space before the "?" and ":"
1:08:06 -"Kudos", not "Koodoo"
1:11:44 -"Don't they" instead of "isn't it"
1:08:51- "did not make it"
1:09:03 - "points"
1:09:15 -"Many men are 1 shot man" --> "one shot men", "to a certain extend"
1:09:57 - "playing" (not capitalized), "let's see who the real Cum Heros are"

The fonts and colors you used might not be a good choice (e.g. the pink Comic Sans with a white drop shadow at the beginning).
Excessive use of "..."
Half an hour of porn (second part of the video) without a beat/beatbar is not a cock-hero, it's just porn
A beat change indicator would be nice and better/higher visibility/contrast on the beatbar (maybe add a 50% opacity black background?)
I would get rid of the stars in the top corners
The moving round title is a bit distracting, maybe replace it with a cricle or a smaller progress indicator
All the moving text in the last round is weird

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2018 9:43 am
by Eggy
You had me at softcore. Sign me up, dude. :yes:

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2018 1:11 pm
by Liquidorus
Hey, I am really interested in Beta testing.
Sign me up, please :)

Greetings,
Liquidorus

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2018 3:50 pm
by Caius Prepus
Wow ! That is a lot of Beta testers !

Good Going ! :w00t:

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2018 1:45 am
by s53ken
Send me the link, please :-D

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2018 7:05 am
by Vund
Hi, I'm in. Happy to help

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2018 6:09 pm
by dirtypigeon
I'd love to help too.

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2018 7:23 pm
by Helequin
Really excited to see you working on a new one. Cumback was brilliant. I probably don't have the time to be a useful beta tester right now, but a couple notes that might be helpful nonetheless.

With Cumback, I actually found the intro/warm up to be one of the hottest, most arousing sections of the entire video. The combination of the girls and the track just made it pretty much irresistible for me. So definitely, softcore can work really, really well.

Also, I did really enjoy the mechanics of Cumback, though it can make for a long experience haha. I'm not the sort of guy who can cum one after another inside five minutes, but given a 15 minute break or so I can keep going well...I've never really hit the limit orgasm wise as other things (like time) come up first. So mechanically, I think you have a great concept too and one that allows more viewers to enjoy the full length of if than some of your earlier projects with more prescribed numbers and timings of orgasms.

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2018 7:57 pm
by ptsecret
I'll give it a shot if you're still interested in testers. :smile:

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2018 9:36 pm
by psyopus
I would love to review this for you. Thanks!

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2018 9:46 pm
by Caius Prepus
Ok guys we already have like 20 people for the testing, this is more than expected for sure and enough for testing. Thanks for the support. :-)

I will stop sending the beta for now.

Re: [Beta Close Release]Cum Hero Perfect 10 Sexy Beach

Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2018 3:07 pm
by s53ken
1:00 - Serie ---> Series
1:36 - Sometime ---> Sometimes
- minutes ---> minute
- than ---> then
44:18 - Lets ---> Let's

1:09:55 - let see who.... -----> let us see who the real Cum Heros are!

A few points:

1: Purple font with red border is not the bests color to see it clearly. Please consider something more friendly to our eyes.

2: Could you insert what the next beat will be? For example 123-123, doubletime etc? You do notify us with "MAX" but nothing else. Also, after Max, you can insert "Short break".

3: For doubletime and Max, maybe it makes sense to insert how long it will last. For example, Max (30 seconds). This will make some players "give up" and "cum" because they know they cannot make it for another 45 seconds of Max.

I personally think "perfect 10" girls should be silicon free and tattoo free like Sophie Anne, but I guess that's just me. Maybe you could create a new series with allstar all-natural cast only after this one is over? It's not that difficult to collect those types. A good number of playmates and many ukrainian girls fall into that category.

Looking forward to the final version ;)