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Apocalypse 2.
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Thanks philo. 2.3 is fixed , just working through 2 now

For some reason when publishing part 2.0 around 200 pages just disappeared

Just finished corrections, all pages should be avaliable.....I hope

The office, Basment and final mistress Ashley can be accessed via Apocalypse part 2.3

WOW, just wow. Awesome tease, maybe the best one ive ever done. Are you going to continue?

I love Mistress Dee and Mistress Spencer <3 And espescially the humiliation assignments, spitting and bootworship to every girl.

Keep it up

paswis wrote:WOW, just wow. Awesome tease, maybe the best one ive ever done. Are you going to continue?

I love Mistress Dee and Mistress Spencer <3 And espescially the humiliation assignments, spitting and bootworship to every girl.

Keep it up

Yes I am planning on doing part 3 and have a good idea where to take it.
Although it may take a while. It took me 3 and half months to complete thoses first 3 parts. I was just adding a bit at time when i had the time. Had a disheartening moment when nyx decided to erase 400 pages that I had'nt backed up. I nearly gave up....but took a few weeks away from the process, come back fresh and I think the tease is better for it.

Glad you enjoyed it.

1. Picking letter L in study leads to a wrong page, letter R leads to a page with "There is one R" and that's all, it doesn't change to another page.

It's the best new tease for ages and ages. Fantastic, bravo, thank-you.

VanHellsing wrote:1. Picking letter L in study leads to a wrong page, letter R leads to a page with "There is one R" and that's all, it doesn't change to another page.

2.Stairs down in the lobby lead to a wrong page.

Thanks vanhellsing, all corrected now. I thought I had corrected the basement from lobby last night but I put in the wrong page number. Silly mistake

But should be fine now

Just wondering for those that done the tease how you found having to switch between parts 2.0 and 2.3?

Was it a problem? Did it ruin the atmosphere or was it ok? In future would it be ok to do this again?

Was no real problem, easier would be a tease me version, so you also won't lose 400 pages scrypt.

The stairs down from the lobby still lead to a wrong page. Also when I was leaving the control room I was sent to a wrong page and got stuck there.

brodon wrote:The stairs down from the lobby still lead to a wrong page. Also when I was leaving the control room I was sent to a wrong page and got stuck there.

Corrected, thanks for letting me know.

deamon44 wrote:

VanHellsing wrote:1. Picking letter L in study leads to a wrong page, letter R leads to a page with "There is one R" and that's all, it doesn't change to another page.

2.Stairs down in the lobby lead to a wrong page.

Thanks vanhellsing, all corrected now. I thought I had corrected the basement from lobby last night but I put in the wrong page number. Silly mistake

But should be fine now

So I was right after all. I deleted numer 2 because I saw it in part 2.3 a couple minutes later. :D

There is a typo in the garage, it says: "C) Free her of her of her chains after she proves it is'nt a trick"

Another typo, this time in the office after choosing one of a couple numbers: "I want 4 edges slave. Before you give me them I want you to up your balls."

Tease jumped to a cabin in the woods after meeting in the office (after I clicked to go back to the lobby).

VanHellsing wrote:

deamon44 wrote:

VanHellsing wrote:1. Picking letter L in study leads to a wrong page, letter R leads to a page with "There is one R" and that's all, it doesn't change to another page.

2.Stairs down in the lobby lead to a wrong page.

Thanks vanhellsing, all corrected now. I thought I had corrected the basement from lobby last night but I put in the wrong page number. Silly mistake

But should be fine now

So I was right after all. I deleted numer 2 because I saw it in part 2.3 a couple minutes later. :D

There is a typo in the garage, it says: "C) Free her of her of her chains after she proves it is'nt a trick"

Another typo, this time in the office after choosing one of a couple numbers: "I want 4 edges slave. Before you give me them I want you to up your balls."

Tease jumped to a cabin in the woods after meeting in the office (after I clicked to go back to the lobby).

Thanks again. All fixed now.