[Release][Feedback] Heads or Tails

[R3d5t4r]

I'm thrilled to finally share my first creation here with you all: Heads or Tails! This luck-based ATM tease has been a labor of love for over a year. After a lot of iterations and some scope creep, new ideas kept sneaking in, and it's finally time to share this with the community here. I've had a blast creating it, and I hope you all enjoy playing it as much as I enjoyed making it.

Heads or Tails is close to 300 pages long and is designed to test your anal and oral skills. As a new candidate, you'll need to complete an initiation trial set by the club members, featuring about 35 gorgeous models. Each member has an anal and/or oral task for you to complete, and a coin toss will decide which tasks you need to do next to complete the initiation.

I've done my best to make it as engaging and fun as possible, but there might be some bugs or some unclear instructions. If you find any issues—whether they're textual or technical—please let me know here. I'll try to fix them!

A huge thanks to the great community here for all the great teases and so much more. After lurking for a while, I hope to give something back to you all. Let me know what you think of my first tease.

- R3d5t4r

[nicki_blue]

Hi, thank you for sharing your tease. I was a little blown away by it, it is very well put together and it's really obvious you put time and effort into it and a lot of thought too.

There are many anal and oral teases on Milovana (which is great) and I think yours is up there with the best of them, I liked the challenge and length of your tease. At first I was worried it might be a bit slow and pedestrian but by the end I realised how very wrong I was. This is very much my thing and when I started it yesterday I thought I’d just give it a little look and try – I was totally pulled in and couldn’t leave.

I’ll put more in a spoiler bellow so I don’t ruin anything for anyone but overall, I thought it was a really good challenge and good experience. After finishing, I thought the pacing and amount of instruction worked very well, not too much or too little. Generally it was very clear what I should do and how I should do it and I spotted no major bugs, but I do have some minor feedback in the spoiler below.

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My feedback after I completed the initiation and 3 stages after (including the grand finale).

1. Minor typo:

After completing the initiation, in the second stage with Charlotte (girl in glasses described as a nerd), there is a minor typo
“tart by sucking the dildo, hands-free. Stick it to the floor.”
It should read “Start”

2. Opinion: having to click to start a task isn’t always good, especially when it comes after a countdown or timer.

I’ll give an example of this: in the trial with Shaiden Rogue (25) (heads task 11: head dangle), we are given a minute to get into a position with a 60 second timer. We are told “I'll give you a minute to get in position and get comfortable. After that, keep up with the beat.”

This is good however, at the end of the timer the task doesn’t start automatically - instead more text appears that must be clicked on to start the task (text: "It's time to get throat fucked, bitch.”)
This kinda defeats the point of the timer and for me is a minor problem as after waiting in position to start the task, I had to get out of position to be able to click and then I missed the start of the task getting back into position .

I don’t think the trial with Shaiden was the only exmaple of this, needing to click to advance after being given a count down or timer, but it was the most obvious example to me. My advice, after a count down or the end of timer signalling the start of a task, the tease should then progress to the activity without needing another click. You could change the text that comes after the timer from ‘auto’ to ‘instant’ and the the task will then automatically start after the timer.
If you want to give the trialist a moment before the timer starts, the pause dialog could go in there (or a button to click that starts the timer/countdown maybe).

3. Audio cue/sounds in Shaiden Rogue (25) (heads task 11: head dangle).

In the previous comment I used Shaiden’s deepthroat trial as an example but I had a specific question about the sounds used in this trial which are very different to the audio cues in most of the other trials and this is the only one I didn’t fully understand.

We are given the instruction “Stay in this position for this task and use your dildo to fuck your mouth. Every 10 beats, you will have to do a deepthroat for me, capiche?”

From this I am expecting a sequence of 10 beats but when I listen to it there seem to be 13 beats in the sequence and it wasn’t really clear why or what happens on the final 3 beats before it restarts, more detailed explaination:

When it starts there are 8 evenly spaced drum beat sounds, a pause followed by another similar sounding drum beat (9th beat), another pause followed by the sound of a drum being hit with a stick hard (10th beat). Finally, after another pause, there are 3 quick beats that sound like a hi hat. The whole sequence then repeats.

I’m guessing the first 9 beats are fucking the mouth, the 10th beat is the deepthroat but I didn’t understand what the 3 hi hat sounds signify? At the time this confused me but after when I had time to think, I wonder if they are meant to communicate short deep thrusts whilst the dildo is held deep? Or do they simply signify in the end of the sequence for a breath and so the dildo is not held deep at all? I might be missing something obvious or putting too much thought into it, it did confuse me a bit and I wondered what I was meant to do for this one.

I liked this trial a lot and want to give good constructive feedback. I hope that’s ok and it has been constructive. It is only my opinion and please take it or leave it, overall it really is a very good tease and thanks again for creating it.

Best, Nicki

[R3d5t4r]

Nicki, thanks for playing and it's great to hear you liked it! And even more "Thank you"-s for letting me know here and taking the time to share your feedback.

The typo has been fixed; that part was easy. The other feedback is something I'm looking into, details below.

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About clicking after getting ready for a task:
I'll look a bit closer into that. I agree with you that when you're told to get ready, that should be exactly the point of no more clicking during the task. Especially when a task requires certain positions. That breaks the flow of the experience. I'll do a round of checks about when the text should be instant or auto-playing, or needs some rewriting to be more clear.

About the Shaiden task (Heads task 11):
I've taken a fresh look at it and I understand your feedback. Honestly, it's been a while since I created and tested that task. I think it can be made a lot better.

The original idea was to have a different beat signal for when to deepthroat. The instructions tell you to do this every 10th beat, but the text and the beat pattern do not align, my bad. The audio cues are not explained, so that's missing.

I'm not sure exactly how I will fix it, but I might rework the task completely to make it less complex. Currently, I'm thinking the easiest solution is to go back to the regular audio cue and leave the deepthroat instructions out of the task, leaving it up to the player to deepthroat when they feel like it. I'll think about it a bit and will try some things.

And once more, thanks for your feedback

[Blubyblub]

Not being a fan of oral decided to give it a try because of the anal part. To my delight I noticed that the oral part could be switched off completely giving me a great anal experience. I thus only experienced half of the tease but even then I think it's a great work of art! It shows that a lot of time and love was put into it! Congratulations!