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Lena's Toy (a short story about sweet tease & denial)

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Lena's toy

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Lena, 23, a psychology student, small frame and cute face, is standing in a small shared kitchen and humming to the music from her headphones. She bounces her brown curls to "Running Up That Hill" as she makes coffee for two.

In the hallway, she doesn't hear bare feet padding across the parquet floor. "Morning..." Tim, 20, ripped, blond haircut, mumbles sleepily. But she can't hear him through the headphones. A little louder: "Ahem, good morning... Lena?"

Lena turns around: "Well, sleepyhead...?" she purrs and examines his trained upper body. He's only wearing boxer shorts and a crumpled T-shirt. His student disorder makes him even cuter... "Slept well?"

Tim blushes and nods sheepishly. It was their first night together after they met at the shared apartment party. It was as if he followed her into her shared apartment yesterday as if in a trance.

"Come here..." She pulls him towards her by his shirt and sits up, kissing his neck. "You were such a good boy yesterday... you did everything I wanted..."

A quiet moan escapes him as her hand strokes his stomach. Yes, he fucked her properly and she was in ecstasy, but before he could cum in the condom, she got off him, lay down next to him and fell asleep without further ado! Hopefully she'd feel like it again this morning, thought Tim.

"I love how sensitive you are..." she breathes. "Turn around and put your hands on the kitchen counter..." Tim obeys, trembling. Lena's fingernails gently run down his back. "I like you like that... willing and obedient..." She presses herself against him from behind. "Ready for the next lesson?"

Lesson? Lena feels her heart beating faster as she enjoys his submission. Having the power to make this strong guy tremble fills her with a sweet rush. His broad shoulders under her delicate hands - the contrast drives her crazy.
"Spread your legs..." she whispers hotly into his ear. The morning sun streaks across his tense back through the kitchen window. Tim feels his mind swimming. Her gentle but assertive manner makes his knees go weak. He wants to obey her, wants to please her. Each of her touches sends electric impulses through his body.

"Good boy..." she purrs and runs her nails over his sides. "You are so receptive to my touch..." A suppressed whimper escapes him. The mixture of excitement and a little shame robs him of his mind. How can she drive him so crazy with so little?
Lena enjoys his reactions. His twitching muscles, his heavy breathing, the goosebumps on his forearms and neck - all signs of his complete devotion. She presses herself closer to him, letting her soft breasts brush against his back.
"You belong to me now..." she breathes in his ear. "And I'll explore you bit by bit..." "My goodness, how hard you are..." Lena strokes the obvious bulge in his boxer shorts. The gray fabric stretches obscenely over his massive erection. Tim gasps quietly, his hands still on the kitchen counter. His toned stomach contracts with each of her touches. The sweet scent of her shampoo fills his nose as she snuggles up to him.

"Does it hurt?" she purrs, while her fingernails gently scratch the wet spot on his underpants. "Your pretty cock looks so... taut."
"Yes..." he breathes in a rough voice. His cock throbs painfully, trapped in the tight fabric. "Please, Lena..."

A noise from the stairwell silences him. His muscles stiffen in shock. "Don't worry..." she whispers and gently bites his neck. "The others are still asleep. But imagine how they would see you here... so hard and helpless..." Her hand slides into his shorts. "Oh, how wet you already are..."

Tim bites his lip. The morning coffee steams forgotten next to them while the sun falls through the kitchen window. His 20-year-old manhood twitches longingly in her delicate hand.
"What am I supposed to do with you..." she thinks out loud and enjoys his growing desperation...

The kitchen door swings open

"Oh!" Roommate Marie is standing there in an oversized nightshirt, her sleep-ruffled hair tangled around her face.
Lena just has time to pull her hand out of Tim's shorts. Her face gets hot, but an excited tingling remains in her stomach. Somehow the situation makes her even hotter.

"Sorry..." Marie murmurs with a grin and toddle to the fridge. "Didn't mean to disturb you."
Tim is still standing at the kitchen counter, his erection clearly visible. He can feel his face glowing, but his body is reacting even more intensely to the embarrassing situation.

Lena watches in fascination as his boxer shorts move slightly with each heartbeat. She bites her lip.
Marie silently gets her yogurt, gives them both a knowing smile and disappears again.
"That was..." Tim whispers hoarsely, with a shy smile.
"Hot?" Lena adds, pressing herself against his back again. Her hand slides over his stomach. "You've gotten even harder..."
"I can't help it..." he moans quietly. "You're driving me crazy."
"Then let's..." she kisses his neck, "go to my room. There we can..." her hand moves lower, "continue where we were interrupted..."
His erection twitches expectantly.

On the short walk to her room, Lena's heart beats wildly. She enjoys his uncertain walk behind her, knows exactly how aroused he still is.
"Shhh..." she whispers and giggles quietly as the floorboards creak. Her room is at the end of the hall. The tension between them crackles with every step.
Finally in her realm, she quietly closes the door. The morning sun bathes the room in warm light. Posters of bands decorate the walls, a chaotic desk full of university documents.
"Take off your clothes," she orders gently but firmly. "I want to see you nude, on my bed." Tim obeys, trembling. His erection springs free from his shorts, still dripping with desire.
"Good boy..." she purrs and slowly strips off her shirt. Her small, firm breasts rise with every breath. "Now show me how much you want me..."

His eyes become lascivious as she sits on his lap. A groan escapes him as her warm skin touches his throbbing cock.
"You belong to me..." she breathes and begins to slowly rub herself against him...
Lena presses his wrists gently but firmly into the bed. "Don't move..." she whispers in a suppressed voice. She slides her wet slit up and down his rock-hard shaft, feeling how he twitches and pumps with every movement. His pre-cum and her juice quickly make his sensitive skin slippery.
"Ahhh..." she moans softly as she rubs herself against him. His bulging glans stimulates her clitoris perfectly. "Such a good boy... so hard for me..."

Tim whimpers more helplessly the more she praises him. His hips jerk upwards involuntarily, desperately searching for more.
"Hold still!" she admonishes him and claws her nails into his muscular chest. "You're just my toy..." she grins at him.
Her movements become faster, more demanding. She uses his cock exactly as she needs it, rubbing her throbbing pearl against his shaft.

"Oh God..." she gasps. Her small breasts bounce in rhythm. "Yes... just like that..."
Tim bites his lip. The sight of her lustful ecstasy and the constant stimulation without release almost drives him crazy.
She comes with a long moan, her thighs and arms shaking as she rubs herself against his still rock-hard member...
"Mmmh..." Lena sighs contentedly and sinks onto his chest. Her warm breath caresses his skin as her heartbeat slowly calms down.

Tim lies beneath her as if tortured, his throbbing cock still clamped between her now slippery thighs. Every tiny movement of her exhausted body makes him twitch.
"That was wonderful..." she purrs and gently kisses his chest. Her nipples brush against his heated skin. A tortured groan escapes him as she adjusts herself comfortably. His hands claw at the sheets - the sweet agony of his unfulfilled arousal is driving him almost insane.
"Stay just like that..." she whispers sleepily and snuggles closer to him. Her wet slit continues to lie against his rock-hard member.

"Please..." he whimpers hoarsely. He doesn't understand why she doesn't grant him what he longs for just as much...
"Shhh..." She puts a finger to his lips. "Be good and let me doze a little. Maybe..." she moves slightly, "I'll reward you later..."
Tim grits his teeth. He doesn't want to mess things up with her. She was so sweet at the shared flat party and then so hot in bed, and so demanding. His bulging glans twitches helplessly between her warm thighs as she rests on him with pleasure...
"Hmmmm..." she purrs with pleasure. "Stroke me, Tim." He obeys. His fingertips dance over her bare skin, as soft as feathers. From her shoulders over her back, drawing gentle circles.
"Yes, just like that..." Lena stretches herself comfortably on his chest, inevitably rubbing against his erect, throbbing member between her thighs.

Tim trembles with suppressed excitement as he obediently caresses her soft skin. His touch remains gentle, even though his member twitches with each of her movements.
"You learn so quickly..." she giggles and presses herself even closer to him. "Such a good boy..."
A soft whimper escapes him as she stretches like a contented cat. The friction is sweet torture.
"Go on..." she breathes. "Stroke my neck... my sides... everywhere... sweet Tim."
His trembling fingers follow her wishes, exploring every inch of her velvety skin. She sighs in delight, enjoying his tender devotion and his obvious desperation in equal measure.
"I like you more and more..." she murmurs sleepily. "I think I'll keep you..."
After a while she breathes softly "Sssssht..." and catches his caressing hands. Her breathing becomes calmer as she snuggles up on his chest.

Tim lies still, his body vibrating with unfulfilled desire. His stiff shaft still throbs rhythmically between her warm thighs, waiting, ready. Her cute, soft breasts press against his upper body with every breath.
Lena sighs contentedly in her half-sleep. A small smile plays around her lips as she slowly drifts off. She feels completely relaxed, satiated by her dominance over him.
He hardly dares to breathe, not wanting to disturb her peace. The morning sun warms their bodies through the window. His painful arousal becomes meditation as he listens to her peaceful slumber - his cock remains trapped between her supple thighs. Now, very slowly, his erection subsides and Tim gives up his hope of release... while his penis also slips into a twilight sleep...
Lena is now sleeping soundly on top of him, her warm body like a living blanket.

Lena stirs slightly in her sleep, her thighs squeezing around Tim's semi-hard cock. A soft "Mmmh..." escapes her lips as she shifts position. Her movement causes her nipples to drag across his chest, instantly making them pebble.
Tim holds his breath. After what feels like hours of sweet torture, his member had finally started to soften. But now... The slight friction of her warm skin against his sends blood rushing back to his groin.
"Nghh..." he whimpers quietly as his cock swells again, trapped between her silky thighs. Her pussy lips, still slick from earlier, cradle his shaft as it grows.
Lena's eyes flutter open, a mischievous smile playing on her lips. "Still hard for me?" she purrs, deliberately grinding against him. "Or should I say... hard again?"
"Please..." Tim gasps, his hands trembling at his sides. "I need..."
"Shhhhh," she places a finger on his lips. "Good boys don't make demands." She starts moving her hips in slow circles, coating his cock in her renewed wetness. "Besides, I'm not done playing with my toy yet..."

"Get up," Lena commands softly, rolling off him. Her eyes roam hungrily over his muscled body, lingering on his now purple-hued cock. "I want to try something new..."
She positions herself on her knees beside his head, her wet pussy just inches from his face. The musky scent of her arousal makes his mouth water. "Open wide..." she purrs, lowering herself until her slick folds brush against his lips.
"Unnghh..." Tim moans as her weight settles on his face. Her thighs press against his ears, muffling all sound except her breathy gasps. Her clit throbs against his tongue as he eagerly laps at her dripping entrance.
"Yesss..." Lena hisses, grinding herself against his mouth. "Such a good tongue... lick me just like that..." Her juices coat his chin as she rocks back and forth, using his face for her pleasure.
Tim's nose bumps against her ass with each movement, making her shiver. His cock twitches desperately in the air, pre-cum leaking onto his stomach as she rides his face harder.
"Mmmmph!" he moans into her pussy, the vibrations making her thighs quiver.
"That's it..." she pants, reaching back to scratch her nails down his chest. "Make me cum again... prove what a good toy you are..."

"Mmm... I want to watch your cock while I ride your face," Lena purrs, turning around to face his feet. Her wet pussy lifts briefly before settling back onto his eager mouth, giving him a perfect view of her puckered ass.
She leans forward, her breasts brushing his stomach as she examines his throbbing member. "Look how much you're leaking for me..." She blows gently on his sensitive tip, making it twitch. "Such a desperate toy..."
"Unnnghh!" Tim's moan vibrates against her clit as she wraps her delicate fingers around his shaft. His hips buck involuntarily at her touch.

"Keep licking..." she commands, slowly pumping him while grinding on his face. Her thumb spreads his pre-cum around his swollen head. "I want to feel that tongue deep inside me while I play with this pretty cock..."
Tim redoubles his efforts, burying his tongue in her dripping hole while she torments his member. Her hand alternates between feather-light touches and firm strokes, never giving him enough friction to cum.
"Mmm... you taste so good," she murmurs, leaning down to run her tongue along his length. "I wonder how long you can last while I..." She takes just his tip into her warm mouth, sucking gently.
"Ohhh... fuck..." Lena moans, releasing his cock entirely as waves of pleasure start building. Her thighs begin trembling against Tim's cheeks as she focuses solely on grinding against his eager mouth.
"Nghhhh... yes, right there!" She arches her back, her pussy dripping onto his face. His trapped cock throbs painfully beneath her, completely neglected as she chases her own climax.

Tim whimpers in frustration but keeps his tongue working exactly where she needs it. Her juices flow freely now, coating his chin and neck as she rocks harder against his face.
"Such a good boy... making me cum... unnghh..." Her fingers dig into his thighs as her movements become erratic. "Don't you dare stop... fuck... FUCK!"
She throws her head back, crying out as her orgasm hits. Her pussy clamps rhythmically against his mouth while he struggles to breathe through her intense grinding. His cock twitches helplessly, drooling pre-cum onto his stomach as she rides out her pleasure.

"Mmmmm..." she purrs, finally lifting herself slightly to let him catch his breath. His face glistens with her wetness, his expression desperate with need. "That was perfect..." she sighs contentedly, looking back at his angry red member. "Now what should I do with this..."

Lena slides her petite frame down onto his broad chest, feeling powerful despite their size difference. Her slim body seems tiny against his muscular frame, which only heightens her arousal - controlling such a strong guy makes her pulse race with dominance.
"Mmmm..." she purrs, positioning herself so her still-quivering pussy hovers inches from his face. The scent of her arousal fills his nostrils as her soft thighs rest against his shoulders. Her small breasts press against his defined abs, her hardened nipples dragging across his heated skin.

Tim's mind swims with desperate need. The weight of her delicate body on his chest, her wetness so close yet untouchable, drives him mad with desire. His cock throbs painfully as her warm breath teases it.
"Look how it jumps for me..." she whispers, wrapping her delicate fingers around his thick shaft. The contrast of her small hand against his massive member makes her pussy clench with renewed arousal. Pre-cum oozes from his swollen purple tip as she starts a torturously slow rhythm.

"Unnghh... please..." Tim groans, his hips trembling as he fights the urge to thrust into her grip. The sweet torture of being so close to her dripping entrance while she teases his cock is almost unbearable. His entire body vibrates with need.
"Shhh..." Lena soothes, loving how his powerful muscles quiver beneath her. She can feel his racing heartbeat through her breasts pressed against him. "Just lie still and let me play with my boy..."
Lena arches her back, pushing her glistening wetness even closer to Tim's flushed face. Her musky feminine scent mixed with the sweet traces of their earlier activities floods his senses, making his head swim. Each inhale of her intoxicating aroma sends jolts straight to his throbbing member.

"You smell how wet you make me?" she purrs, expertly circling her thumb around his sensitive frenulum. Her delicate touch is exquisitely precise - applying just enough pressure to keep him suspended in exquisite agony.
"Unnnghh... oh god..." Tim's entire body trembles. His cock leaks steadily as she works that ultra-sensitive spot, keeping him balanced perfectly on the knife's edge of climax. Pre-cum drips down his shaft onto her skilled fingers.
Lena feels drunk with power as she watches his powerful frame dissolve into quivering submission. His abs contract rhythmically, thighs shaking as she holds him in that sweet spot between pleasure and torture. "That's it... just stay right there for me..."

"Please... I can't... aaahhhh..." His mind fragments into pure sensation. There's nothing in his universe except her intoxicating scent and those maddening circles her thumb traces. Waves of almost-orgasm crash through him endlessly.
"You can and you will," she commands softly, adjusting her position so her dripping pussy is mere inches from his parted lips. "I love watching you melt..." Her skilled fingers maintain that perfect pressure, keeping him suspended in that excruciating liminal space between desperate need and transcendent pleasure.

Tim's mind swirls with intense emotions. Despite having just met her yesterday, he feels utterly captivated - not just by her beauty, but by her gentle dominance. The way she naturally took control speaks to something deep inside him he never knew he needed. Her confidence, her playful authority - it makes him want to submit completely.
Lena feels her heart flutter as she watches him surrender. She's dated dominant men before, but none made her feel this powerful, this alive. His willing submission, his raw masculine strength yielded to her completely - it awakens something primal in her soul. She wants to own him, protect him, control him.

"You're such a good boy for me," she whispers tenderly. "So perfect... so obedient... giving yourself to me completely..." Her thumb continues its maddening circles. "I'm going to keep you on this edge until you can't think straight..."
Tim whimpers, lost in a haze of desperate pleasure and emotional surrender. Her words sink deep into his psyche as pre-cum flows freely.
"That's it... let go... give in completely..." Her movements become more precise, more intense. "Show me how crazy I make you..."
"Oh god... oh fuck..." His cock swells impossibly harder as his orgasm builds. Just as the first pulse hits, Lena completely removes her hand. His member twitches violently as thick ropes of cum dribble out uselessly, denied the friction needed for full release.
"UNNGHH! No! Please!" Tim writhes beneath her, his mind shattered by the ruined climax. His hips buck desperately into empty air as more cum leaks from his pulsing tip. The denial drives him to the brink of madness, turning his brain to static as pleasure and frustration merge into pure electrical overload.

"Shhhhh..." Lena soothes, watching his torment with fascination. "Good boys take what they're given..."
Tim's body convulses uncontrollably, cum still weakly dribbling from his twitching cock. His mind fragments between desperate need and overwhelming sensation. The ruined orgasm leaves him somehow even more aroused, his member refusing to soften.

"Look at you..." Lena breathes, mesmerized by his response. "Still so hard... still needing more..." She traces a finger through the puddle of cum on his stomach, making him shudder violently.
"Please... I can't... I need..." His words dissolve into incoherent moans as aftershocks ripple through him. Every nerve ending feels electrified, hypersensitive.
"What do you need, pet?" She deliberately drags her wet pussy across his chin, making him groan. "Tell me..."
"Need to cum properly... please... so empty..." His cock throbs painfully with each heartbeat, desperate for real release. Pre-cum continues leaking despite his recent ruined orgasm.

"Mmmm..." Lena purrs, wrapping her small hand around his shaft again. "But watching you suffer is so much fun..." She starts stroking him with agonizing slowness. "Maybe I'll keep you like this all night..."
Tim's whole body trembles at her words, trapped between fear and desperate arousal. His hips buck involuntarily, seeking more friction.
"Mmmm..." Lena strokes his still-throbbing shaft slowly and firmly. Then she stops.

"I want a better angle..." Lena murmurs, slowly sliding her petite frame off his torso. Her hard nipples drag across his abs as she moves, making them both shiver. Tim whimpers at the loss of her pussy's proximity to his face, already missing her intoxicating scent.

With feline grace, she repositions herself between his spread thighs. The sight of his massive cock against her small frame makes her pussy clench with desire. She settles onto her knees, her delicate hands resting on his powerful thighs. His member twitches desperately before her face, still slick with cum and pre-cum.

"Mmmm..." she hums, stroking his still-throbbing shaft firmly. Their eyes lock as she leans down, her pink tongue extending to collect the pearly drops from his sensitive head. Her long hair brushes against his thighs as she moves closer.
Tim's entire world narrows to the sight of her delicate face near his cock, her eyes holding his captive. His heart pounds with a mix of desperate need and something deeper - an emotional connection he wasn't expecting. The way she controls him, teases him, owns him... it awakens something sweet and deep in his soul.

"Unnghh... fuck..." he gasps as she cleans him with delicate kitten licks. Each touch of her warm tongue sends electric jolts through his body. His cock twitches eagerly, hoping for more, while his mind swims with submission and desire.
"Mmmmm... you taste so yummy," Lena giggles, licking the last drops of his salty essence from her lips. Her eyes sparkle with playful mischief as she sits back on her heels. "But you know what else is yummy? Brunch!"
She bounces up excitedly, her small breasts jiggling. "I'm starving! And there's this amazing little café that does the most incredible eggs benedict..." Her enthusiasm is infectious, even as Tim lies there with his cock still achingly hard.
"But... but..." Tim gestures at his throbbing erection, pre-cum still oozing despite his ruined orgasm. The way she switches from seductress to adorable food enthusiast makes his head spin.

"Aww, is my toy still needy?" she coos sweetly, bending down to plant a light kiss on his cockhead. "Well, good things come to those who wait! And right now, pancakes are calling my name." She dances around the room collecting her clothes, humming happily.
"Besides," she adds with a playful wink as she slides her panties up her legs, "I love the idea of you sitting across from me, all proper in public, while your cock stays hard thinking about what I might do to you later..."
Tim groans, but can't help smiling at her infectious joy. Even his aching member seems to pulse in sync with her happy energy. "You're impossible..." he murmurs fondly.

"Impossibly awesome!" she corrects, now buttoning her blouse. "Now hurry up and get dressed. I want Belgian waffles and a squirming toy to tease under the table!"

Tim sits up, his cock bobbing heavily as he moves. Just watching Lena skip around the room, humming cheerfully while getting dressed, makes his member twitch with renewed need. Her casual mix of sweetness and dominance is maddening.
"Unngh... fuck..." he groans, trying to bend his stubbornly rigid cock down to fit in his boxer briefs. The sensitive head brushes against the fabric, making him shudder. Pre-cum immediately starts soaking through the cotton.
"Having trouble?" Lena teases, pausing in her dressing to watch him struggle. "Poor boy... all swollen and achy for me." She giggles as his cock visibly pulses at her words.

"It won't... I can't..." Tim fumbles with his trousers, his hands shaking with arousal. Every movement makes his denied cock throb harder. The thought of sitting in public, straining against his zipper while she watches him squirm...
"Here, let me help," she purrs, kneeling before him. Her small hands guide his massive erection down along his thigh. The touch of her cool fingers makes him gasp. "There we go... though everyone's going to see what a desperate boy you are for me."

Tim's breath catches as she zips him up carefully. The pressure of his confined cock against the fabric is exquisite torture. "How am I supposed to make it through brunch like this?"
"Very carefully," she winks, giving his trapped member a gentle pat through his pants. "Now hurry up, I'm starving... for food this time!"
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Amazingly hot! Just the right amount of detail and evilness!
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Great gentle dom story. I guess Tim wont be able to enjoy his food in peace...
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Dear Valery,

thank you for this amazing, absolutely captivating and highly erotic story!
I enjoyed every part of it, especially Lena‘s possessiveness, tenderness and gentle way to make Tim do whatever she wants.
Her “good boy” made me melt and it brought back some beautiful memories of my best time with my former Queen.
I can totally understand Tim for feeling unable to resist her adorable dominance. I would neither have any chance to resist her ;-)

If you allow me a tiny suggestion (i don’t dare to criticize a Mistress)… Although, i am sure, Lena was driving Tim more than crazy and turned his brain into helpless mess :-D ,it would be nice if Tim could be a bit more talkative to express his desperation and adoration for Lena. I think Lena deserves it ;-)

Anyway, great work!
Thank you very much!

…and, do you plan to continue this beautiful story?
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this is an amazing story i love the gentle but sexual alure Lena is exhibiting. She's a dream woman so playful you think she is sweet but so dominant that you just want to give her everything she demands and more. Poor Tim going to have a very distracting brunch!
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selfbound wrote: Mon Dec 30, 2024 12:47 pm Dear Valery,

thank you for this amazing, absolutely captivating and highly erotic story!
I enjoyed every part of it, especially Lena‘s possessiveness, tenderness and gentle way to make Tim do whatever she wants.
Her “good boy” made me melt and it brought back some beautiful memories of my best time with my former Queen.
I can totally understand Tim for feeling unable to resist her adorable dominance. I would neither have any chance to resist her ;-)

If you allow me a tiny suggestion (i don’t dare to criticize a Mistress)… Although, i am sure, Lena was driving Tim more than crazy and turned his brain into helpless mess :-D ,it would be nice if Tim could be a bit more talkative to express his desperation and adoration for Lena. I think Lena deserves it ;-)

Anyway, great work!
Thank you very much!

…and, do you plan to continue this beautiful story?
You are very sweet, thank you!
I might continue this. Any ideas what Lena and Tim should do? :)

Kisses!
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Ummm, yeah. Not going to lie, I'm not a big reader so I always stayed away from this section of the forum. However, for some reason, I came in and saw your story. I started reading and kept reading, next thing I know, I'm finishing the story with a dripping, frustrated, rock hard cock. I kind of feel like Tim. Great job and will definitely peruse this sub-forum again.
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Valery_JOI wrote: Wed Jan 08, 2025 12:37 pm
selfbound wrote: Mon Dec 30, 2024 12:47 pm Dear Valery,

thank you for this amazing, absolutely captivating and highly erotic story!
I enjoyed every part of it, especially Lena‘s possessiveness, tenderness and gentle way to make Tim do whatever she wants.
Her “good boy” made me melt and it brought back some beautiful memories of my best time with my former Queen.
I can totally understand Tim for feeling unable to resist her adorable dominance. I would neither have any chance to resist her ;-)

If you allow me a tiny suggestion (i don’t dare to criticize a Mistress)… Although, i am sure, Lena was driving Tim more than crazy and turned his brain into helpless mess :-D ,it would be nice if Tim could be a bit more talkative to express his desperation and adoration for Lena. I think Lena deserves it ;-)

Anyway, great work!
Thank you very much!

…and, do you plan to continue this beautiful story?
You are very sweet, thank you!
I might continue this. Any ideas what Lena and Tim should do? :)

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Hello Val,

thank You for Your kind reply.
Yes, I have some ideas. Lena could playfully introduce some light bondage to Tim and have more fun with him being helpless, like more tease and denial, or even a longer edging session, playfully teaching him the pleasures of anal stimulation… and all this with her perfect skills in motivating him being her obedient toy. ;)

Maybe, if you like, I could write my vision of a continuation in Tim’s perspective and share with You privately… for You to decide if it’s worth to be shared to Your readers or not or it might inspire You for Your own continuation for You beautiful story?
Whatever You like, Val.
(but English is not my mother tongue, so i hope it won’t be too much of an issue)

*bows respectfully*
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